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Carlos
05-25-2016, 12:02 AM
I've been working on a fan-fiction lately and I'd like to share it with everyone!
(FANFIC NOT AVAILABLE ANYMORE)
Thanks!

Neo Emolga
05-27-2016, 01:51 PM
Hey Carlos.

Could you post this story here, also? Usually that's what most authors do and we'd like to stick to this format. That way people don't have to go to an outside site to view your stuff, although you can keep the link in the main post if you want.

It's the same deal as art threads. Usually people will post their work directly here at PXR, although they may link to their DeviantArt gallery also.

Carlos
05-27-2016, 05:47 PM
I would but fanfiction doesn't let you copy+paste, and the documents I uploaded to fanfiction died, which means I have no way to access them directly.

Sorry about that.

Noblejanobii
05-27-2016, 06:00 PM
I would but fanfiction doesn't let you copy+paste, and the documents I uploaded to fanfiction died, which means I have no way to access them directly.

Sorry about that.

Mm… yeah not true. I just did it with part of chapter 1.

Chapter 1: Prologue
The sun began to set as the world was shaking beneath the feet of the Pokemon in the vicinity

"It's just as I thought... That Ditto tricked us." said one of the Pokemon in the small group gathered around a small machine.

There was a total of 4 Pokemon gathered around the machine. A Xatu, Lopunny, Raichu and Milotic were surrounding a small machine that had a small plate to stand on positioned at the top.

Xatu told the others, "This machine is designed so no radiation can get into a Pokemon's body during time-travel."

"Xatu, can this machine-" Milotic began.

"No it cannot. We need Celebi to come over here and send an Eevee back in time. I'm pretty sure you all know why this is happening." said the Xatu, interrupting the Milotic.

"I'm here, sorry!" a voice in the distance said. A Shiny Celebi was visible, flying towards the group at a fast speed. It was veering off the course of it's straight flight due to it's high flying speeds. It crashed into the Raichu when it got close, falling down onto the grass. The Raichu fell backwards and fell on it's back.

"Hey, watch where you're going Luci! You almost broke my neck, what the hell?!" the Raichu exclaimed, rubbing it's neck as it got back up onto it's feet.

"Sorry Thor," the Celebi apologized, beginning to hover with it's wings. "I was just in a hurry because of what was happening... Xatu called me over by telepathy. Do you have the Eevee? Wasn't Thor supposed to get it? Where'd it run off to?" asked Celebi, looking around the group. Not an Eevee in sight.

"Er, well," Thor sighed, scratching the back of his head. "The Eevee we caught escaped and it ran off into the woods." he added, flinching slightly as he awaited the backlash from the rest of the group.

"You idiot." said the Lopunny, shoving Thor.

"Now now, that's no issue. We're a team of five against one simple Eevee. We can easily go and retrieve it, send it back in time, and bam." the Xatu explained.

"Why do we need a dang Eevee to go back, anyway? Can't I do it?" asked the Milotic.

"Well no, Aphrodite," began the Xatu. "In order to bring world peace back into place, we need all of the Eeveelution types to be together in the Ancient Ruins. When they are altogether, they should combine all of their powers and hit the rock in the middle of that room. I've been there. We can't do it in this time because the Ancient Ruins doesn't exist here. There are only one of each type back in the past due to the slow extinction of the Eevee species. There are currently no Eevee alive back in the time we are sending this one to, so you can understand why we need to send an Eevee back. We need it to combine it's power with all 8 of the Eeveelutions. Once they do this, everything should begin to go back to normal and we can finally live in peace." Xatu explained.

"Fine Truth. I understand. Let's send a party to get that Eevee."

"Right." replied Truth the Xatu.

I ran along a narrow path inside of the forest. I panted as I kept up mu quick pace, watching at least 10 seconds ahead of me for any obstructions that might cause me to trip. I kept running as much as my tired legs could go for. I began to think of all of the things that had just happened to me.

Looking around, I saw a small tree with a hollowed out tree-trunk. Immediately, I ran into it and hid behind the curved wood. Panting heavily, I laid down, completely exhausted.

"What... the hell... just happened?... Hah..." I panted, asking myself. After a few moments, I managed to catch my breath and stretched my legs. They hurt so much after all of that running.

I got up and walked out of the tree trunk, then looked around to see if those Pokemon that were following me were anywhere in sight. "I don't... see anything..." I muttered, my ears down low due to being a little frightened at having to look around for them. They could be right behind me and I wouldn't know it.

"I better try my best to get out of the area, I wouldn't put it past any kidnappers to come after their hostages after they've escaped. I should try to call Officer Magnezone." I told myself, beginning to pad along the trail slowly. It was when I saw a small flash of pink in the distance that I stopped immediately, perking my ears up.

"What was that?" I asked myself, tilting my head, looking in the direction that I saw the light flash. I saw it again.

"There it is again..." I muttered, concerned now. I began to pad slowly towards the light, my heart beating fast in anticipation. I walked for a few minutes and saw a pink Celebi hovering above the bushes, looking around. It's wings were beating very fast.

"Hello, are you lost?" I shouted out to the Celebi.

The Celebi quickly turned around. "Oh, Eevee! Please listen to me!" she told me, hovering close to me. She landed in front of me and held out her arms.

"Listen, I know we scared you back there but we really need you to do us a favor. I know that you can see all of the destruction around you and we need you to go back in time to prevent all of this from happening. Don't you want to see the world at peace again? All of these trees are dead and not even me, the Voice of the Forest can do anything about it, and usually I can..." she sighed, looking down at the dead flowers.

She reached her hand down and embraced a flower, running her fingers along the side of it, a small tear trickling down her cheek.

I watched her touch the flower and then looked up at her, noticing the tear.

"Are you with those Pokemon that tried to catch me?" I asked.

She looked up at me and nodded, wiping away the small tear. "Well catch is a strong word, we just need your help. I'm sorry, we should have asked you instead of scaring you like that. You're the world's only hope though... Only an Eevee will do and you're the last one left on this planet." she said, grabbing my paw, looking me in the eyes.

"Please..." she begged.

I stared in her eyes as she begged. I sighed and reluctantly shook my head yes. "Sure, I guess so, why not..."

"Great!" she exclaimed, her eyes lighting up with delight. She grabbed my other paw and began to float, twirling me around in the air.

"Okay! We should hurry up if it's this bad of a thing to worry about!" I shouted, starting to feel dizzy.

"Oh, right." she said. She threw me up into the air and caught me in her arms, cradling me. "Since you're probably dizzy, I'll bring you over to where everyone else is. We'll let you eat and drink before we send you back, alright?" she told me. "It'll all be okay, no need to look so worried." she reassured me, looking down into my eyes.

I nodded in approval and closed my eyes, resting in her arms.

What was about to happen was something I would have never expected.

I opened my eyes and saw the Celebi transform slowly into a Electivire. It looked down at my eyes with a dark smirk.

Carlos
05-29-2016, 09:01 AM
Seriously?

How?

Suicune's Fire
05-29-2016, 09:35 AM
Seriously?

How?
Google it. xD I actually have an add-on called Greasemonkey which you can use a script with to enable you to copy & paste. Not sure if that's how Janobii did it though.

Noblejanobii
05-29-2016, 01:42 PM
Google it. xD I actually have an add-on called Greasemonkey which you can use a script with to enable you to copy & paste. Not sure if that's how Janobii did it though.

iPhones are magical things.