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AD
08-27-2016, 04:37 AM
A Pokemon Crystal story, chronicling the adventures of Atty and his pokemon.

This story was sparked by my playthrough of Pokemon Crystal, where i was starting a semi-randomized nuzlocke, that turned into more of a piece of Lore than a challenge. Reminiscent to the TPP Crystal, where a tragic event turned one character into unbridled rage. Thus the name. It was more me becoming enraged when one of my pokemon died, but we will get to that. I shall do my best to have bi-weekly updates.


The Team so far:
Kimbo the Machamp. Started off as a lowly Machop. His is a very depressing and wrathful story.

Sparky the Pikachu. The Starter. Atty has had Sparky through childhood, a duo with an unwavering bond.

Suicune's Fire
08-27-2016, 06:41 AM
THIS IS A GREAT IDEA. Might be better to start with a chapter next time, but you have my interest.

"It was more me becoming enraged when one of my pokemon died, but we will get to that."

A great quote to which all Nuzlockers can relate. :]

EmeraldSky
08-27-2016, 02:48 PM
Yes, as a general rule of thumb, try to have at least half a page.

AD
08-27-2016, 09:18 PM
Thanks for the tips, this was more or less an introduction as I'm still finishing up the first Book. Glad ya like the idea, i plan to make this even more dark than the TPP runthroughs, keeping it PG13. Try to highlight the surreal aspects of the Pokemon world that is still surprisingly an E+ game.