View Full Version : [COMIC] Jentoh Adventures ~ At least one new comic every week! (Unless life decides to change that!)
ant2011
08-03-2013, 04:17 AM
So it's official, today I've made the jump back into working on sprite comics. I know, I've been gone for what feels like an eternity but I'm glad to be back. Personal issues had kept me from doing anything I loved for more than a few minutes. Mostly a mixture of depression and gender dysphoria
So, with my return to sprite comics, I figured I'd shift everything from Pe2K over here. For now, this will just be a comic thread, as I don't plan on posting much else in the way of sprites here, or anywhere for that matter.
-Please let me know of any dead or broken links, I just copied everything from Pe2K and didn't have time to go through everything and re-upload it.-
NEWS
Guest Star registration is CLOSED. Sorry! (You can still submit applications!)
New descriptions in battles from 57+, please leave your opinion on the new style!
PLOT
Anthony has just beaten the Elite Four in Kanto and stopped Team Rocket. He's all set to do absolutley nothing when a letter comes to his door that will change his life forever. He finds himself in a strange new land where adventure and friendship are sure to find him. The only catch, he has amnesia!
He can't remember anything about Kanto or his pokemon there. Will he regain his memory?
Read the comics to find out!
credit to KLNOTHINCOMIN at TSR for the battle backgrounds.
credit to Kyledove (Kymotonian) at TSR for the building interiors from chapter 23 and on.
Comics:
Prologue (http://i51.tinypic.com/vqmtts.png)
Chapter 1 (http://postimg.org/image/5gkxjkgah/)
Chapter 2 (http://postimg.org/image/92loz3gc9/)
Chapter 3 (http://postimg.org/image/djj3uw0vt/)
Chapter 4 (http://postimg.org/image/vjn925mrd/)
Chapter 5 (http://postimg.org/image/f2ehzv7g9/)
Chapter 6 (http://postimg.org/image/60zym99ix/)
Chapter 7 (http://postimg.org/image/lhdiwje61/)
Chapter 8 (http://postimg.org/image/d2xw8gd4p/)
Chapter 9 (http://postimg.org/image/yhtv6pq49/)
Chapter 10 (http://postimg.org/image/3z42lr0xl/)
Chapter 11 (http://postimg.org/image/qqd585lyx/)
Chapter 12 (http://postimg.org/image/gbbkcze61/)
Chapter 13 (http://postimg.org/image/uiwnnw1h5/)
Chapter 14 (http://postimg.org/image/xi3kb0ayh/)
Chapter 15 (http://postimg.org/image/ylnomyvll/)
Chapter 16 (http://postimg.org/image/xn7bkoi9l/)
Chapter 17 (http://postimg.org/image/ull4oguih/)
Chapter 18 (http://postimg.org/image/g4xv9w515/)
Chapter 19 (http://postimg.org/image/oqwjgqrnd/)
Chapter 20 (http://postimg.org/image/3l7bzw67t/)
Chapter 21 (http://postimg.org/image/7vlzvhbax/)
Chapter 22 (http://postimg.org/image/dz3kfe1kp/)
Chapter 23 (http://postimg.org/image/x6qpbzjw9/)
Chapter 24 (http://postimg.org/image/bkga8papl/)
Chapter 25 (http://postimg.org/image/c3ldhz249/)
Chapter 26 (http://postimg.org/image/n4gimzud5/)
Chapter 27 (http://postimg.org/image/o2sabjibd/)
Chapter 28 (http://postimg.org/image/gs1dd5rax/)
Chapter 29 (http://postimg.org/image/61dqrhdo9/)
Chapter 30 (http://postimg.org/image/y1mfpi6ih/)
Chapter 31 (http://postimg.org/image/72dzglunt/)
Chapter 32 (http://postimg.org/image/wsyk3vek9/)
Chapter 33 (http://postimg.org/image/bgr266um1/)
Chapter 34 (http://postimg.org/image/4rkiq69a1/)
Chapter 35 (http://postimg.org/image/wvifqpi7t/)
Chapter 36 (http://postimg.org/image/u05cjue7t/)
Chapter 37 (http://postimg.org/image/otysmjou1/)
Chapter 38 (http://postimg.org/image/a836kk2nt/)
Chapter 39 (http://postimg.org/image/asmt0zla1/)
Chapter 40 (http://postimg.org/image/rf4da2e7t/)
Chapter 41 (http://postimg.org/image/p1mfj1zsp/)
Chapter 42 (http://postimg.org/image/tq2fe8ozd/)
Chapter 43 (http://postimg.org/image/izesskbcp/)
Chapter 44 (http://postimg.org/image/ha5pkhvnd/)
Chapter 45 (http://postimg.org/image/76ll234ah/)
Chapter 46 (http://postimg.org/image/kq2f7si9l/)
Chapter 47 (http://postimg.org/image/llub9i2k9/)
Chapter 48 (http://postimg.org/image/it5p37rll/)
Chapter 49 (http://postimg.org/image/fnl3d08zd/)
Chapter 50 (http://postimg.org/image/pjqrqe455/)
Chapter 51 (http://postimg.org/image/rgnhuyut5/)
Chapter 52 (http://postimg.org/image/hbk8rnmux/)
Chapter 53 (http://postimg.org/image/6nghstcvt/)
Chapter 54 (http://postimg.org/image/qbtfpl8c9/)
Chapter 55 (http://postimg.org/image/b9h7ewnsp/)
Chapter 56 (http://postimg.org/image/swz0d3xq1/)
Chapter 57 (http://postimg.org/image/q45st2xdl/)
Chapter 58 (http://postimg.org/image/nj4tjaxdl/)
Chapter 59 (http://postimg.org/image/j7g7uaqgp/)
Chapter 60 (http://postimg.org/image/5p9bi0ebd/)
Chapter 61 (http://postimg.org/image/sx3lqun3t/)
Chapter 62 (http://postimg.org/image/l3305gfax/)
Chapter 63 (http://postimg.org/image/euhobvhq1/)
Chapter 64 (http://postimg.org/image/nmymzk2ux/)
Chapter 65 (http://postimg.org/image/fy1snu2d5/)
Chapter 66 (http://postimg.org/image/y29em7pfd/)
Chapter 67 (http://postimg.org/image/i6kkiwyux/)
Chapter 68 (http://postimg.org/image/y9x1iq0e1/)
Chapter 69 (http://postimg.org/image/ozkxf6po9/)
Chapter 70 (http://postimg.org/image/a4wc10g3d/)
Chapter 71 (http://postimg.org/image/qv7pqceih/)
Chapter 72 (http://postimg.org/image/f7dnvspdl/)
Chapter 73 (http://postimg.org/image/6dmrep2ex/)
Chapter 74 (http://postimg.org/image/crgwf2dmh/)
Chapter 75 (http://postimg.org/image/dm3g13lh5/)
Chapter 76 (http://postimg.org/image/x04a0scxl/)
Chapter 77 (http://postimg.org/image/stjflgdbt/)
Chapter 78 (http://postimg.org/image/hsoagfl2x/)
Chapter 79 (http://postimg.org/image/qwmpgvmnt/)
Chapter 80 (http://postimg.org/image/gchdc17jt/)
Chapter 81 (http://postimg.org/image/6wwwl3055/)
Chapter 82 (http://postimg.org/image/6y6uei1yx/)
Chapter 83 (http://postimg.org/image/8xs1jnlo9/)
Chapter 84 (http://postimg.org/image/xykn32q9l/)
Chapter 85 (http://postimg.org/image/qjzwoftrt/)
Chapter 86 (http://postimg.org/image/p7mt0alq1/)
Chapter 87 (http://postimg.org/image/wwf1y9wu1/)
Chapter 88 (http://postimg.org/image/4orwv87sp/)
Chapter 89 (http://postimg.org/image/558j3x661/)
Chapter 90 (http://postimg.org/image/otlh0p1mh/)
Chapter 91 (http://postimg.org/image/4ekebvt6h/full/)
Chapter 92 (http://postimg.org/image/s5od7qird/full/)
Chapter 93 (http://postimg.org/image/pn2o71x15/full/)
Chapter 94 (http://postimg.org/image/oi8m1oak9/full/)
Chapter 95 (http://postimg.org/image/ow9y19unt/full/)
Chapter 96 (http://postimg.org/image/phubjn0c9/full/)
Chapter 97 (http://postimg.org/image/3k2g3lapl/full/)
Chapter 98 (http://postimg.org/image/nxtkyzhbt/full/)
Chapter 99 (http://postimg.org/image/k2q6wey61/full/)
Chapter 100 (http://postimg.org/image/ewjmz48s9/full/)
Chapter 101 (http://postimg.org/image/vz4hv1cvt/full/)
Chapter 102 (http://postimg.org/image/5yubo0qyh/full/)
Chapter 103 (http://postimg.org/image/5ncvb9aih/full/)
Chapter 104 (http://postimg.org/image/3t00tini1/full/)
Chapter 105 (http://postimg.org/image/emc4fru61/full/)
Chapter 106 (http://postimg.org/image/4rkz9jq7t/full/)
Chapter 107 (http://postimg.org/image/n0rr3uv7d/full/)
Chapter 108 (http://postimg.org/image/z41o55vnd/full/)
Chapter 109 (http://postimg.org/image/zbpb1o6m1/full/)
Chapter 110 (http://postimg.org/image/k9d2qzm2h/full/)
Chapter 111 (http://postimg.org/image/wp9skqfeh/full/)
Chapter 112 (http://postimg.org/image/4irzxd2t5/full/)
Chapter 113 (http://postimg.org/image/qn6r7zgc9/full/)
Chapter 114 (http://postimg.org/image/mcs3ceb95/full/)
Chapter 115 (http://postimg.org/image/jnsp8mge1/full/)
Chapter 116 (http://postimg.org/image/8cq1k99ix/full/)
Chapter 117 (http://postimg.org/image/rdzhdripl/full/)
Chapter 118 (http://postimg.org/image/8dzzdobcp/full/)
Chapter 119 (http://postimg.org/image/4y7v44e49/full/)
Chapter 120 (http://postimg.org/image/fz7lmvvqx/full/)
Chapter 121 (http://postimg.org/image/r1colbptl/full/)
Chapter 122 (http://postimg.org/image/bq7gyghvd/full/)
Chapter 123 (http://postimg.org/image/7i83byr21/full/)
Chapter 124 (http://postimg.org/image/prev69w1l/full/)
Chapter 125 (http://postimg.org/image/ay07lioah/full/)
Chapter 126 (http://postimg.org/image/elkk5blvd/full/)
Chapter 127 (http://postimg.org/image/wfg26m4xl/full/)
Chapter 128 (http://postimg.org/image/rsa04uhkp/full/)
Chapter 129 (http://postimg.org/image/z5tzhjr09/full/)
Chapter 130 (http://postimg.org/image/rkmd8c6m1/full/)
Chapter 131 (http://postimg.org/image/n006temwp/full/)
Chapter 132 (http://postimg.org/image/5nzu7ytfd/full/)
Chapter 133 (http://postimg.org/image/t3mcr22k9/full/)
Chapter 134 (http://postimg.org/image/cieqbebg9/full/)
Chapter 135 (http://postimg.org/image/pqe44c8zd/full/)
Chapter 136 (http://postimg.org/image/vv5mho12x/full/)
Chapter 137 (http://postimg.org/image/nzv32urg9/full/)
Chapter 138 (http://postimg.org/image/raohzunp5/full/)
Chapter 139 (http://postimg.org/image/i94wp4jg9/full/)
Chapter 140 (http://postimg.org/image/97qdbilix/full/)
Chapter 141 (http://postimg.org/image/5od5ubw0l/full/)
Chapter 142 (http://postimg.org/image/do6sattvl/full/)
Chapter 143 (http://postimg.org/image/yv9lvu0xh/full/)
Chapter 144 (http://s7.postimg.org/3vyz2uk8p/ch_144_final.png)
Chapter 145 (http://postimg.org/image/9f8v6akz7/full/)
Chapter 146 (http://postimg.org/image/6g6510r8r/full/)
Chapter 147 (http://postimg.org/image/nppy8u0vz/full/)
Chapter 148 (http://postimg.org/image/wm1ppvdvl/full/)
Chapter 149 (http://postimg.org/image/3xyym0gop/full/)
Chapter 150 (http://postimg.org/image/b20lvtett/full/)
Chapter 151 (http://postimg.org/image/54n9pzarn/full/)
Chapter 152 (http://postimg.org/image/trbv6s9ev/full/)
Chapter 153 (http://postimg.org/image/svf409qs5/full/)
Chapter 154 (https://s27.postimg.org/apgwkirwx/ch_154.png)
Chapter 155 (https://s23.postimg.org/ykue64ard/ch_155.png)
Chapter 156 (https://s23.postimg.org/lkxfsnf6h/ch_156.png)
Chapter 157 (https://s24.postimg.org/6jjsu2m1v/ch_157.png)
Chapter 158 (https://s24.postimg.org/h20hx14vn/ch_158.png)
Chapter 159 (https://s30.postimg.org/r97ln0qxr/ch_159.png)
Chapter 160 (https://s23.postimg.org/676nc8wi1/ch_160.png)
Chapter 161 (https://s28.postimg.org/bkjdvvl0r/ch_161.png)
Chapter 162 (https://s23.postimg.org/fjpys2mux/ch_162.png)
Chapter 163 (https://s29.postimg.org/r18fmdz39/ch_163.png)
Chapter 164 (https://s23.postimg.org/odkoix7zt/ch_164.png)
Chapter 165 (https://s24.postimg.org/kaxm4a1oj/ch_165.png)
Chapter 166 (https://s27.postimg.org/4m0h70675/ch_166.png)
Chapter 167 (https://s29.postimg.org/vevpem31h/ch_167.png)
Chapter 168 (https://s23.postimg.org/c2pnqgc1l/ch_168.png)
Chapter 169 (https://s16.postimg.org/nk3r9y7tv/ch_169.png)
Chapter 170 (https://s16.postimg.org/u7ftne76r/ch_170.png)
Chapter 171 (https://s18.postimg.org/r0raxish3/ch_171.png)
Chapter 172 (https://s28.postimg.org/ixwo4ahob/ch_172.png)
Chapter 173 (https://s29.postimg.org/cbwz1xrgl/ch.173.png)
Chapter 174 (https://s12.postimg.org/y92ik8e5n/ch.174.png)
Chapter 175 (https://s16.postimg.org/5yp35ru0l/ch.175.png)
Chapter 176 (https://s26.postimg.org/occb43lfd/ch.176.png)
Chapter 177 (http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/uploaded/comics/1/h/7/1h7w83vm0aHtBb.png)
Chapter 178 (https://image.ibb.co/eULwpc/ch_178.png)
Chapter 179 (https://image.ibb.co/kVLRN7/ch_179.png)
Chapter 180 (https://image.ibb.co/bUjuxH/ch_180.png)
Chapter 181 (https://image.ibb.co/jcPbOc/ch_181.png)
Chapter 182 (https://s22.postimg.cc/kteuwd02n/ch.182.png)
Chapter 183 (https://s8.postimg.cc/7svup8gv7/ch.183.png)
Chapter 184 (https://i.postimg.cc/ZJv62TJG/ch-184.png)
Bonus stuff
Super Special Awesome Special #1 (http://i51.tinypic.com/2zf1zeb.png)
Super Special Awesome Special #2 (http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/3622/ssas02final.png)
Super Special Awesome Special #3 (Q&A answers round 1) (http://img716.imageshack.us/img716/8091/ssas03final.png)
Jentoh map
http://i56.tinypic.com/ri7ln8.png
ant2011
08-03-2013, 04:17 AM
reserved
ant2011
08-03-2013, 04:18 AM
Character Bios have been moved to their own thread here (http://www.pokemoncrossroads.com/forum/showthread.php?13158-Character-Bios)
ant2011
08-03-2013, 04:18 AM
-=Guest Stars=-
=Reserved=
None, because I don't need anymore right now
=Accepted=
Name: Jesse
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Personality: Loud and and happy, but has a small case of angermanagment, loves his pokemon but hates to lose, is very obnoxious and generealy hates new people but will get along with others over time.
Preference: Both.
Trainer Title: Male Snowboarder from D/P/PT with the orange sweater thing.
Pokemon 1: (Main Pokemon, doesn't evolve) Skitty, no nickname, Female
Pokemon 2: Snorunt>Frosslass, no nickname, Female
Pokemon 3: Wailmer>Wailord, no nickname, Male
Pokemon 4: Poliwag>Politoad, no nickname, Male
Pokemon 5: Electrick>Manectric, no nickname, Male
Pokemon 6: SWablu> Altaria, no nickname, Female
Name: Grunt Halifax
Age: 18
Gender: Male
personality : He is Grumpy and antisocial, he hates everyone but himself. he treats his pokemon badly and uses them as a sort of slaves. but his pokemon loves him tough.
Trainer Title: Organization-X grunt
Pokemon 1: (Mightyena, Male )
Pokemon 2: (Hippowdown, Female )
Pokemon 3: (Metang, No gender )
Pokemon 4: (Yanmega, Male )
Pokemon 5: (Aerodactyl, Female )
Name: Greg
Age: 15
Gender: male
Personality: He is serious and always wants to do something.
Preference: battles
Trainer Title: Dragon tamer
Pokemon 1: Gible, Chomp, male
Pokemon 2: to be catched
Pokemon 3: to be catched
Pokemon 4: to be catched
Pokemon 5: to be catched
Pokemon 6: to be catched
Name: Tyson
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Personality: Cheerful, but easy to anger too. He gives all in battles, and train his pokemon's very hard, but he pushes himself as hard too.
Preference: Battles. He think contests is for girls.
Trainer Title: Can I choose a custom one? If I can then I want Blue's(Last Kanto gym leader from HGSS) hair but colored green and ace trainer(normal terrain) body with black clothes. If I can't get a custom one, then just stick with Ace trainer.
Pokemon 1: Yanma, Yuki, female
Pokemon 2: Anorith, Crey, male
Pokemon 3: Trapinch, Trinch, male
Pokemon 4: Sneasel, Blizzard, male
Pokemon 5: Beldum, Meta
Pokemon 6: Aron
Name:Nathan
Age:13
Gender:Male
Personality:Always cheerful supports his pokemon but also he is a smart battler but he constantly forgets things(lol).
Preference: Battles
Trainer Title: Bug catcher
Pokemon 1: Nincada
Pokemon 2: Mudkip
Pokemon 3: Silcoon
Pokemon 4: Ledyba
Pokemon 5: Caterpie
Pokemon 6: Totodile
Name: ??? (Marek)
Age: About 19
Gender: Male
Personality: Extremely quiet, only speaking when necessary. Prefers pokémon training over battles but never rejects a challenge and only gives out his real name when he discovers a trainer with exceptional talent.
Preference: (battles or contests) Battles and training, likes to watch contests for ideas of new techniques though
Trainer Title: (i.e. trainer sprite. ex: bug catcher. nothing before d/p or after hg/ss) D/P PI probably would work best.
Pokemon 1: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender) Gible, no nickname, male, stays as a Gible but has the moves and power of a fully grown Garchomp.
Pokemon 2: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender) Salamence, Sally, female, used mostly for flying but is used in double battles (if you have any)
Name: Aroura (Arow for short)
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Trainer Title: Gym Leader (If possible) if not, then Pokemon Trainer
Battles/contests
Personality: She is quite calm, kind, yet sensitive. She trains hard, and soe day wishes to be the Elite Four Champion. She gives berries to her Pokemon normally to keep them happy.
Pokemon 1: Charmander (Char) Male. Likes sour food.
Pokemon 2: Arcanine (Leo) female. Likes spicy food.
Pokemon 3: Eevee (Night) Male. Likes sweet food. (Soon to evolve into Espeon or Umbreon)
Pokemon 4: None.
Pokemon 5: None.
Pokemon 6: None.
Name: Darix
Age: 16
Gender: male
Trainer Title: unova champion
Pokemon 1: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender): blazakin shiny, male
Pokemon 2: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender): blastiose, male
Pokemon 3: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender): typhlosion, male
Pokemon 4: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender): empolion, male
Pokemon 5: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender): Butterfree, male
Pokemon 6: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender): rare egg...
Name: Amy
Age: 15
Gender: female
Personality: bubbly
Preference: (battles or contests)
Trainer Title: something like
Pokemon 1: Piplup,Bubbles,female
Pokemon 2: chickorita,chiky,female
Pokemon 3: houndour,flames,male
Pokemon 4: None
Pokemon 5: None
Pokemon 6: None
Name: Anya
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Personality: Has a contagious kind of happy personality; like when you're around her, she could make you laugh for ten straight minutes! (exaggeration of course); makes friends easily; loves her pokemon to no end, (but not in a mary sue like fashion; those kind of people disgust me :P yuck) If she's ever sad, she tends to drag behind and kind if goes into a daze for a while
preference: She likes both, but tends to lean more towards the contests range
Trainer Title:basically just a regular trainer; but for the battle sprite (or like a sprite on a trainer card) the body style of Sinnoh gym leader Candace combined with a long-haired brunette.
Pokemon 1: Roserade; Sprintrose; Female
Pokemon 2: Ledian; Lady-An; Female
Pokemon 3: Rapidash; Striker; Male
Pokemon 4: Beautifly; Tifly; Female
Pokemon 5: Luxray; Joltiz; Male
Pokemon 6: Cherrim; Petal; female
Name: Holly
Age: 19
Gender: female
Personality: Loves to be organized and clean, hates to lose
Preference: Contests
Trainer Title: Cynthia's sprite from D/P/Pt
Pokemon 1: Shiny Milotic, female, level 45
Pokemon 2: Gardevoir, female, level 50
Pokemon 3:Rapidash, level 40, female
Pokemon 4: Butterfree, level 45, female
Pokemon 5: (to be caught later) Pidgeot, level 50, male
Pokemon 6: (to be caught later) Wigglytuff, level 50, male
ant2011
08-03-2013, 04:20 AM
I am not accepting Guest Stars at this time.
I am looking for a few guest stars for an upcoming issue! It's not going to be the next one, it may not even be within the next 12 issues, but I will try to find a place for you. Whether you're a random trainer battle or in a contest you will be in here! Please use this form when applying for a guest spot!
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality:
Preference: (battles or contests)
Trainer Title: (i.e. trainer sprite. ex: bug catcher. nothing before d/p or after hg/ss)
Pokemon 1: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 2: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 3: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 4: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 5: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
Pokemon 6: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
When it comes to the team please no 5th gen. Wait, scratch that, no 5th gen at all.
ant2011
08-03-2013, 04:21 AM
And final post for me tonight, I give you #140! My first new comic in too long haha.
http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/9334/byc8.png
DBGreece
08-03-2013, 04:38 AM
Yay now I can keep up with the comic now that the old site is dead. Keep up the good work Ant2011
Fistodragon
09-06-2013, 04:11 AM
Nice work Ant2011! And it appears that 137 doesn't seem to work (well for me it doesn't)
SuperUltraZekrom
09-28-2013, 05:21 PM
Oh man. This comic brings back so many memories. Hello old friends C:
DBGreece
11-28-2014, 07:13 AM
Has this died? I really hope not as I love this comic.
Fistodragon
11-28-2014, 03:29 PM
Has this died? I really hope not as I love this comic.
Seems like it
Suicune's Fire
11-30-2014, 03:50 AM
I've spoken to Ant and he says that the comic is in a coma. </3 So let us all pray for the sweet return of Jentoh. xD
*Moved to Comics Central!
ant2011
11-30-2014, 06:21 AM
Has this died? I really hope not as I love this comic.
Seems like it
I've spoken to Ant and he says that the comic is in a coma. </3 So let us all pray for the sweet return of Jentoh. xD
*Moved to Comics Central!
Well, It has been far too long indeed.
I've been busy working 30+ hours a week, babysitting kids, and insert other life related excuses here.
But I'm going to try to see this comic through to the end as best as I can. And without further delay, I give unto thee chapter 141.
Chapter 141 (http://postimg.org/image/5od5ubw0l/full/)
Suicune's Fire
11-30-2014, 07:23 AM
PLOT TWIST!!!!! Jon's father? O: No way! That's craaaaaa-zaayyyy!
I'm so glad to see this back. c: I really hope you decide to continue it and stay here on PXR! 8D But life does get in the way so I certainly understand that. x)
None of your other links work for me though. Is it just me?
DBGreece
11-30-2014, 07:42 AM
Ooohhh! Interesting! And I understand life can be hard. Hope embrittling works out OK ant!
ant2011
12-11-2014, 05:03 AM
None of your other links work for me though. Is it just me?
Ah yes, that would be because Imageshack decided to shift from a free image hosting site to a paysite. When I have the time I'll be reuploading the previous comics for everyone's viewing pleasure.
Rival Max
12-11-2014, 05:15 AM
Great stuff man! You have such an amazing library of comics!
ant2011
12-11-2014, 07:35 PM
Great stuff man! You have such an amazing library of comics!
Hey, thanks a bunch!
Guess what everybody? #142 hot off the presses!
Check it out here! (http://postimg.org/image/do6sattvl/full/)
DBGreece
12-11-2014, 07:52 PM
What! No don't go with them! Loving the story still. Now I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Rival Max
12-11-2014, 07:59 PM
JON NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
Suicune's Fire
12-14-2014, 06:20 AM
ant2011 it SUCKS that stupid Imageshack did that. I'm so frustrated at them that they remained free and then "OH NO SORRY LOL WE'RE A PAYING SITE NOW." Just stupid. >.>
Nice new comic! I can't believe I didn't see it till now. x__x I'm shocked that Jon gave himself up, but I suppose he had no choice. =/ I'm sort of confused why the gym leader didn't try to step in and figure anything out, or yell at these people to leave the gym...ahaha. Anyway, looking forward to seeing what comes next!
ant2011
01-09-2015, 11:19 PM
Well I'm back again, the chaos of the holiday season kept me busy with little free time, followed by the death of a close family member. Life has returned to some semblance of normalcy though, and I am proud to present you with #143 for your viewing pleasure.
Just click right here yo (http://postimg.org/image/yv9lvu0xh/full/)
Suicune's Fire
01-10-2015, 12:33 PM
Oh my! This is a turn potentially for the worse. I'm rather shocked! Ant, nuu! D: It was cool to see him snap like that though. WHAT A TWIST!
Welcome back. <3
ant2011
01-11-2015, 02:03 AM
Oh my! This is a turn potentially for the worse. I'm rather shocked! Ant, nuu! D: It was cool to see him snap like that though. WHAT A TWIST!
Welcome back. <3
Thanks, it's good to be back :D
Originally he was supposed to snap later on, but the mood seemed right and I felt like it was time to end part one, it had been dragging on for far too long and I needed to help push the story into a higher gear without sacrificing much. (All that was going to happen was pointless banter on the way to Contesta City)
But you know what that means right? Part one is done and part two is nice and new!
~~~TIME SKIP SOUNDS~~~
Oh hey, I haven't seen you guys in a while. It's been what, about two years? Gee, time sure flies lol. Oh hey look, it's the newest page, #144 (http://s7.postimg.org/3vyz2uk8p/ch_144_final.png)
Fistodragon
01-11-2015, 03:08 AM
ah snap
Suicune's Fire
01-11-2015, 03:55 AM
That's understandable, Ant. :] I think you made the right choice!
Oh my, two whole years passed! O: And wow... Poor Ant. D: His blastoise will be lucky to be able to remember him by this point, if that organisation brainwashed him for all this time... :C And I wonder who that trainer with the mashtomp is. I love how he berated the villains without a shred of fear. XD
DBGreece
01-11-2015, 05:12 AM
Wow nice new chapter ant! Very interesting can't wait to see more!
ant2011
02-04-2015, 11:47 PM
Boop. Hey look, #145. Sorry it took me so long, I kinda dove headfirst into some Yu-Gi-Oh stuff but hey, I'm here now right?
Was there anything I was forgetting?
Oh right, new page. (http://postimg.org/image/9f8v6akz7/full/)
DBGreece
02-04-2015, 11:53 PM
Awesome chapter! Looking very cool can't wait for more.
ant2011
02-28-2015, 02:48 AM
Wow, 23 days is long enough to not update. Sorry, been busy at work and spending the 2-3 hours that I have where I'm not eating/sleeping/working with leisure activities. But hey, here's #146 (http://postimg.org/image/6g6510r8r/full/)!
In other news I decided to update some character info and add Casey to the protagonists section.
ant2011
03-09-2015, 03:03 AM
Nobody posted since the last update? Meh, probably my own fault for taking too long with the updates *shrugs shoulders*
Well, if anybody's still here then I present to you #147 (http://postimg.org/image/nppy8u0vz/full/)
DBGreece
03-09-2015, 03:08 AM
I'm still here! Lol. Kinda weird that they ran away, but that's the nature of grunts Lol. Keep up the good work! :)
-DBGreece
Suicune's Fire
05-21-2015, 12:55 PM
xD I guess the grunts took their chance and ran for it! xD If they didn't need to be there, I see why they would have done it. Haha. Sorry I haven't commented on this until now, ant2011! It amuses me that Anthony hates him already. xD
ant2011
05-30-2015, 05:43 AM
I've been away way too long, Been busy with work, getting a lot of hours and a nice promotion to boot. And I've been spending time with my girlfriend a lot, so life has been getting in the way of Jentoh a lot. I feel really bad about that. So to make up for that, here are a few pages to tide you over.
#148 (http://postimg.org/image/wm1ppvdvl/full/)
#149 (http://postimg.org/image/3xyym0gop/full/)
#150 (http://postimg.org/image/7bjp2or6f/full/)
Suicune's Fire
05-31-2015, 03:34 PM
xD I thought the guy in the last panel of page 148 was sitting. XD But he's walking. lel. I think the recolouring is a little off in his sprite; it looks too light. Also, I wonder how Ant made his friends upset. :c
In 149's two bottom panels, the desk lady's speech don't have periods on the end of it! O: And haha, stupid confidential files... It makes it so hard to stalk people! O:< Oh, Sky! Welcome back! xD (I admit I had to go back some issues to see who she was, haha.)
Omg, the last one. xD CONGRATS ON HITTING 150 PAGES, DUDE. That's awesome. :D But omg...Theresa sounds like a buttpie now! I have to admit I've forgotten about half the characters. xD OH NO WAS SHE THE ONE WHO FINISHED SKY'S SENTENCES?! That's sort of tragic. Six months ago? ;~; POOR EFFORT, THERESA.
Nice updates. c:
ant2011
05-31-2015, 11:43 PM
TT's not a buttpie, she's super popular now, who has time for the little people when you're so big? Just kidding, but she really has become a bit spoiled by the fame of being a top coordinator. Oh hey, look at that, #151 (http://postimg.org/image/54n9pzarn/full/)! For your reading pleasure
DBGreece
05-31-2015, 11:45 PM
Awesome chapters, but I can't see chapter 150 for some reason. There is no link to it. Awesome that there is more chapters though! :D
ant2011
06-01-2015, 12:51 AM
but I can't see chapter 150 for some reason.
Noted. Fixing asap.
Fistodragon
06-01-2015, 02:38 AM
haha oh TT ^_^
ant2011
06-20-2015, 04:05 AM
Boop. Hey look, #152! Hey look, Organization X! Hey look, another familiar face. Hey look, here's the link. (http://postimg.org/image/trbv6s9ev/full/)
Suicune's Fire
06-20-2015, 05:51 AM
OMG, SKY'S ANGRY FACE IN THE THIRD LAST PANEL OF 151. XD I love it. Also haha, silly TT. I feel like she'd be really loud. Also, it should say for old time's sake. ;]
No...way! O: It's Kane! And omg... JON?! OH MY GOD HE'S BACK AND HE'S EVIL. This is chaotic. I'm keen. But geez, "I don't have any friends..." :C YOU'VE LET ME DOWN, JON. I can't wait to see what happens! O:
ant2011
10-13-2015, 03:49 AM
It has been a long time. Far too long. My depression has kept me away. To the point where every time I tried opening my comic programs (It's MS Paint but I wanted to sound cool) I would be hit by a wave of just pure depression. Over the past few months I fell down a hole. A very deep emotional hole. I almost killed myself. Lots of pills and alcohol. But I didn't go. I didn't slip away.
Enough sadness, nobody cares about that anyway. You're here for a new comic page! Here it is! #153! (http://postimg.org/image/svf409qs5/full/)
DBGreece
10-13-2015, 03:52 AM
Awesome new chapter! And I hope everything is OK ant, love the comic and I'm happy every time a new chapter comes out.
ant2011
12-09-2016, 01:46 AM
Wow it's been a long time. You know, if I was any more inconsistent I'd be a One Hit K/O move.
All joking aside I figured I'd drop by and throw #154 (https://s27.postimg.org/apgwkirwx/ch_154.png) up here for you, if anyone is still following this.
Suicune's Fire
12-09-2016, 01:45 PM
Jon. :[ Y U B SO MEAN. So rude. Nice new comic! :D I'm glad to see you still chugging along! XD Also haha, from 153, "Wasn't trying to keep it a secret."
ant2011
12-13-2016, 01:11 AM
Jon. :[ Y U B SO MEAN. So rude. Nice new comic! :D I'm glad to see you still chugging along! XD Also haha, from 153, "Wasn't trying to keep it a secret."
Jon's just going through his edgy phase, I think xD
But hey, know what's really cool? How about the next page? Badaboom! #155 (https://s23.postimg.org/ykue64ard/ch_155.png)
Suicune's Fire
12-13-2016, 12:04 PM
Jon's just going through his edgy phase, I think xD
But hey, know what's really cool? How about the next page? Badaboom! #155 (https://s23.postimg.org/ykue64ard/ch_155.png)
Ahahaha his edgy phase!
OH MY GOSH ANTHONY SO RUDE. I wonder what separates him and his enemies if they're willing to do the same things...for different causes! But tbh, I'd be just as willing to commit some pretty nasty stuff to get back someone I loved, so yolo. xD
ant2011
12-23-2016, 01:37 AM
Hey guess what? I got another page for all you lovely trainers out there. #156 (https://s23.postimg.org/lkxfsnf6h/ch_156.png)
I promise, at some point the plot will continue advancing, I just have to make more backgrounds and towns so for now we're going to be stuck on the route of procrastination. (That's literally what I've named the file for that route, sue me)
Suicune's Fire
12-23-2016, 02:42 AM
The Liberators! :D I like it! Also that page seems to be a little fuzzy but there was no magnifying glass to zoom in, so I'm guessing something happened in the upload process. O: Also I'm glad thingo (forgot her name XD) admitted that she was a brat because it's true. xD
ant2011
12-23-2016, 02:50 AM
Also that page seems to be a little fuzzy
stupid hosting site.... Fixed
ant2011
01-02-2017, 02:40 AM
So I finally got around to making more backgrounds and you know what that means, right? The plot can advance! #157 (https://s24.postimg.org/6jjsu2m1v/ch_157.png)
Suicune's Fire
01-02-2017, 12:00 PM
Omg Serina's hair is hilhairious. :3c
Seriously though, pretty rude of her dad to be like "lel take this land im sure my daughter won't mind." XD So funny. Awkward if she beat him. XD
ant2011
01-03-2017, 02:56 AM
hilhairious.
... Get out...
Nah I'm just teasing you. Nice pun xD
So I was excited to get their battle started, and decided to get the next page out. #158 (https://s24.postimg.org/h20hx14vn/ch_158.png)
Suicune's Fire
01-03-2017, 11:41 AM
Thanks. ;) Now all she needs is an alolan dugtrio and the pun shall be complete!
Nice battle. B) I like the strategy involved! Go Luna. c:
ant2011
01-06-2017, 12:23 AM
Hey there folks its time for another page! #159 (https://s30.postimg.org/r97ln0qxr/ch_159.png)
Suicune's Fire
01-06-2017, 02:16 AM
Oh my gosh that lady is so RUDE. Also I love that you put a different grovyle sprite there after Dig happened. He's like "Whaaaa?" XD I wonder how this will turn out. O:
ant2011
01-06-2017, 04:49 AM
Why wonder when you could just open the next page and find out? #160 (https://s23.postimg.org/676nc8wi1/ch_160.png)
Suicune's Fire
01-07-2017, 02:55 PM
XD True. Aww, she's not as rude as I thought. x) I like that Ant called off the battle before his drifblim got hurt. :> Cool that she just gave it up, lel. Maybe she has another place somewhere. xD I'm expecting her to be like "BUT I still get to keep my room lol soz." XD
ant2011
01-08-2017, 01:57 AM
Eh, I think she'll be all right. Now our heroes get to check out their new base! #161 (https://s28.postimg.org/bkjdvvl0r/ch_161.png)
ant2011
01-11-2017, 11:47 PM
Double posting in my own thread because I can. Fight me.
Anyway, here's the next page lol #162
(https://s23.postimg.org/fjpys2mux/ch_162.png)
ant2011
01-17-2017, 02:34 AM
Can I triple post? I mean it's my thread and I'm posting the next page so I assume I can.
#163 (https://s29.postimg.org/r18fmdz39/ch_163.png)
Rival Max
01-17-2017, 07:58 PM
Can I triple post? I mean it's my thread and I'm posting the next page so I assume I can.
#163 (https://s29.postimg.org/r18fmdz39/ch_163.png)
Battles getting pretty intense man!
ant2011
01-30-2017, 01:38 AM
Battles getting pretty intense man!
Hey thanks! I try. It's not easy keeping battles interesting lol.
But hey, here's the next page up for everyone! #164 (https://s23.postimg.org/odkoix7zt/ch_164.png)
Fistodragon
02-01-2017, 07:03 AM
Glad to see this back and going! Certaintly an interesting story indeed
Suicune's Fire
02-01-2017, 09:07 AM
I still think Jon is a tool. I liked him at first, but I was a fool! The comic is progressing really well, but it's sad to see that one more town fell. I hope Ant can kick all their butts, and look fabulous while doing some struts!
Also omg that guy running away. The grunt had nothing but grumpiness to say. XD
ant2011
02-03-2017, 01:13 AM
Glad to see this back and going! Certaintly an interesting story indeed
Thanks! I've got some great stuff planned, and I hope everyone likes it!
I still think Jon is a tool. I liked him at first, but I was a fool! The comic is progressing really well, but it's sad to see that one more town fell. I hope Ant can kick all their butts, and look fabulous while doing some struts!
Also omg that guy running away. The grunt had nothing but grumpiness to say. XD
Are... Are you rhyming at me? xD
Oh hey, what's that on the horizon? It's the next page! HERE! (https://s24.postimg.org/kaxm4a1oj/ch_165.png)
Rival Max
02-03-2017, 01:30 AM
Rip Cacturne!
http://i.imgur.com/y1dYHjz.gif
Suicune's Fire
02-03-2017, 01:54 AM
Are... Are you rhyming at me? xD
Oh hey, what's that on the horizon? It's the next page! HERE! (https://s24.postimg.org/kaxm4a1oj/ch_165.png)
Yes, yes I was. XD We started up 'admin challenges' and this week we have to do fifty posts that rhyme. XD And I have to put that chicken gif in 50 posts. IT'S DRAINING.
Oh my gosh lol, Jon is such a troll! I love the troll face at the end too. xD Silly Kane. Taking the bait. ;)
Rival Max
02-03-2017, 01:57 AM
Yes, yes I was. XD We started up 'admin challenges' and this week we have to do fifty posts that rhyme. XD And I have to put that chicken gif in 50 posts. IT'S DRAINING.
Oh my gosh lol, Jon is such a troll! I love the troll face at the end too. xD Silly Kane. Taking the bait. ;)
Xanthe, ill end you for editing my post!
Suicune's Fire
02-03-2017, 02:16 AM
Xanthe, ill end you for editing my post!
I legit read that as "I'll edit you for editing my post" and I was like "D:" XD NO BUT YOU LOVE ME SO IT'S OKAY.
ant2011
02-03-2017, 11:49 PM
I felt like working on the next page, so I suppose I should post it for you guys Here (https://s27.postimg.org/4m0h70675/ch_166.png)
ant2011
02-06-2017, 12:28 AM
So I think we can all agree that the current layout leaves a bit to be desired. I mean let's face it. Landscape probably isn't best for a comic. So I've been thinking about changing up the layout for a while, and I came up with a new design that makes it vertical. Plus, it adds an additional 2 panels, so hopefully it's a bit better! Let me know what you think, and if you preferred the old layout for some odd reason.
#167 (https://s29.postimg.org/vevpem31h/ch_167.png)
Oh, I also uploaded my Jentoh comic to Smackjeeves to bring in more readers. Don't worry though, all new pages will be posted on PXR a few days before they go up on Smackjeeves. If anyone wants the link to the Smackjeeves page be sure to let me know.
Fistodragon
02-06-2017, 04:28 PM
looks good
ant2011
02-10-2017, 02:32 AM
Then I guess for now I'll keep the new format unless I decide to change it again. Anywhoodles, here's the next page for you all.
Here you go! (https://s23.postimg.org/c2pnqgc1l/ch_168.png)
Suicune's Fire
02-12-2017, 07:34 AM
I caught up, finally! xD Good luck Ant and friend! (Man I forget everyone's name. xD) I hope that scyther is okay. :c
ant2011
02-12-2017, 04:05 PM
(Man I forget everyone's name. xD)
Get. Out.
Nah I'm just kidding. That's understandable, the character bio post is easy to miss in the beginning of the thread. That's why I've got a great solution once I get a sub forum
Suicune's Fire
02-13-2017, 01:38 AM
Get. Out.
Nah I'm just kidding. That's understandable, the character bio post is easy to miss in the beginning of the thread. That's why I've got a great solution once I get a sub forum
That's the second time you've told me to get out of this thread. :<
xD Oh I gotta read that again, don't I!
ant2011
02-13-2017, 02:37 AM
xD Oh I gotta read that again, don't I!
Nope, you should check out the new Character Bio thread :D
ant2011
02-18-2017, 12:16 AM
Well I had some sprites to work on, but that's done so here's the next page for your enjoyment! #169 (https://s16.postimg.org/nk3r9y7tv/ch_169.png)
Suicune's Fire
02-18-2017, 01:10 AM
CJ you utter buttpie! D:< I mean, he's got a point about disappearing but still...harsh, man! And rude!
ant2011
02-19-2017, 11:51 PM
CJ you utter buttpie! D:< I mean, he's got a point about disappearing but still...harsh, man! And rude!
Quite a buttpie xD But don't let him be an example of the Battleforged, they're actually good people.
But hey, how about the next page? Get it here (https://s16.postimg.org/u7ftne76r/ch_170.png)
Suicune's Fire
02-20-2017, 12:05 AM
I shan't! Perhaps June Banana will embody the spirit of the Battleforged! xD
Omg, his charizard has a blue tail flame! I can't believe how strong he is. I understand super effective attacks, but ending Luna in one go as well? Wacky. Omg it's the leader of the Battleforged! O:
Also, the HP bar says "Blaze" in all panels. xD
ant2011
02-20-2017, 12:19 AM
Also, the HP bar says "Blaze" in all panels. xD
-facepalm- That's because I didn't save the final draft... Fixed here (https://s16.postimg.org/u7ftne76r/ch_170.png)
Suicune's Fire
02-20-2017, 12:28 AM
-facepalm- That's because I didn't save the final draft... Fixed here (https://s16.postimg.org/u7ftne76r/ch_170.png)
XD It's all good. YOU'RE WELCOME.
ant2011
02-20-2017, 01:57 AM
XD It's all good. YOU'RE WELCOME.
Thanks, I'm a dumb sometimes lol
Suicune's Fire
02-20-2017, 02:13 AM
Thanks, I'm a dumb sometimes lol
No you're not. xD Simple slip, that's all. ANYWAY I'm keen to find out what the Battleforged is like O: And I wonder when our guest stars will come in. ;3 I loved Max's. XD Phil. What a guy.
ant2011
02-23-2017, 04:38 AM
No you're not. xD Simple slip, that's all. ANYWAY I'm keen to find out what the Battleforged is like O: And I wonder when our guest stars will come in. ;3 I loved Max's. XD Phil. What a guy.
I mean guest stars maaaay be showing up soon. But you can check out the next page here! (https://s18.postimg.org/r0raxish3/ch_171.png)
Rival Max
02-23-2017, 04:45 AM
When oh when will the organization x be featured! :P
Suicune's Fire
02-23-2017, 11:12 AM
OMG JUNE!!!!!!!!!! Awesome. :D So cool to see her so soon. xD Haha. "I should warn you to stay away from Frozen Peak." "FROZEN PEAK IT IS!" xDD Oh, them. I wonder if Phil will make an appearance. :3c
Also the lady with the blonde hair has outlines which are too light; I reckon they should be a bit darker. :3
ant2011
03-13-2017, 09:53 PM
It's taken me a while, but I've got the next page all set for your collective viewing pleasures here (https://s28.postimg.org/ixwo4ahob/ch_172.png)
Suicune's Fire
03-14-2017, 01:42 AM
Nice new page. :D I love how there happened to be jackets there. xD Also that there's only a pink one, bahaha. Poor thingo. (I always forget their names. Wow, me.)
Rival Max
03-14-2017, 01:52 AM
He is going to rock that pink jacket for sure :)
ant2011
04-07-2017, 09:53 PM
I know its been a while, but I think I'm back in the right mindset to do things again xD
Anyway, I had today off from work and while deciding which bars to go to for my birthday tomorrow I decided to buckle down and get a new page for all of you. So here's #173 (https://s29.postimg.org/cbwz1xrgl/ch.173.png)
Suicune's Fire
04-07-2017, 10:56 PM
AWWW that's so cute that she left her berries! Adorable. xD Woohoo, new pokemon! 8D And new page! XD Nice job, Ant.
ant2011
05-03-2017, 09:21 PM
I kept trying to think of some way to make snow for the comic panels, and I think I settled on using a noise filter in Gimp.
I found some other cool filters I want to try out for other pages coming up, and I'm really looking forward to that.
But I've rambled enough, here's the next page. #174 (https://s12.postimg.org/y92ik8e5n/ch.174.png)
Bulbasaur
05-21-2017, 07:26 PM
Wow, I remember reading this comic on PE2K. It sure has come a long way! :D
ant2011
06-19-2017, 01:12 AM
I should really update more regularly lol
But here's the next page #175 (https://s16.postimg.org/5yp35ru0l/ch.175.png)
ant2011
09-14-2017, 08:42 PM
I'm back with #176! (https://s26.postimg.org/occb43lfd/ch.176.png)
ant2011
11-10-2017, 03:20 AM
-Insert generic excuse for absence here-
No but in all seriousness I got a promotion at work, so I'm now a shift leader and closer at my job, which means that I work 9 hours a day until 11:30pm
I did however manage to throw this together so enjoy #177 (http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/uploaded/comics/1/h/7/1h7w83vm0aHtBb.png)!
Or don't enjoy it. I mean, I'm not the boss of you.
Unless you're on my closing shift, then I am technically your boss.
The Nonexistent Tazz
11-10-2017, 03:55 AM
Welcome back! And Jeez, a Mega Houndoom? That's quite a leap in threat level...
ant2011
03-18-2018, 02:27 AM
Hey look at that I'm back(ish) with #178 (https://image.ibb.co/eULwpc/ch_178.png)
If the trend holds up I should be back by Christmas with 179.
I'm just kidding, hopefully.
The Nonexistent Tazz
03-19-2018, 03:45 AM
Dang, not even a cinch victory. Nothing is going right for Anthony.
... Seriously that's actually becoming a mild problem in the narrative. I'm literally not foreseeing a way he doesn't die of Kane beating him to death out of vengeance, or get captured and put in a completely hopeless situation, except a big darn heroes moment by the people who told him not to come up here and will now chide him for his stupidity. That's just the short term, though: He's made no progress in three years, lost a good chunk of his allies and hasn't really made any new ones, and is nowhere near actually finding his Blastoise, assuming it is even alive or able to recognize him, and is now apparently hopelessly behind literally his entire competition, both his rivals and the big bad team-and really pretty much everyone possible that I can name save his own allies. Anthony's kinda lost most of his sympathy in the timeskip, too, and I'm *still* completely flabbergasted that Anthony has apparently not even remotely bothered to train in the timeskip. Mega Evolution, from experience is NOT such an overwhelming powerup that the evolution alone explains this level of tank-Anthony must legitimately be overwhelmed by the base Houndoom and would only have maybe cinched a victory against exactly one Pokemon without it Mega Evolving. It's kinda depressing and simultaneously uninteresting; the heroes have *no* leverage against the bad guys whatsoever anymore, and while there are still good guys to fight them that may be up to the par, it's less that and more that the main character stopped being interesting or powerful. Which is slightly audacious coming from someone who became a champion. You'd think he had actual experience with this before, enough to raise up a Blastoise.
That's most of my gripes, though. Let me be clear: I'm not trying to be a douche, but the plot is kinda getting stale as it is. The way the comic is laid out is telling me there's a lot of room for these issues to be resolved-but there is a LOT of resolving to do, and hey, you're not falling into the invincible hero trope, so on the flipside, fights in the future could become very, very close. You do good work, man, but I'd be lying if I didn't say that these are issues that are kinda in the way of me enjoying the comic completely, at least in the post-timeskip frame.
Sorry if it comes off as severe.
ant2011
03-19-2018, 04:56 PM
Dang, not even a cinch victory. Nothing is going right for Anthony.
(CUTTING OUT TEXT FOR SPACE)
Sorry if it comes off as severe.
No no no, its not severe, criticism is always welcome. That's the feeling I wanted at this point. I want it to look hopeless and overwhelming, I want the main character to feel helpless and powerless. It's how a lot of my writing has become lately. If I had kept the same mentality and story plan I had when I began writing this it would, to me at least, feel very boring and predictable.
My stories take on a darker tale lately where the Hero loses everything and has to fight to reclaim it. My style has changed a lot over the past 7 years, and I hope you'll stick around to see how things turn out.
It'll get good, trust me.
The Nonexistent Tazz
03-19-2018, 06:50 PM
No no no, its not severe, criticism is always welcome. That's the feeling I wanted at this point. I want it to look hopeless and overwhelming, I want the main character to feel helpless and powerless. It's how a lot of my writing has become lately. If I had kept the same mentality and story plan I had when I began writing this it would, to me at least, feel very boring and predictable.
My stories take on a darker tale lately where the Hero loses everything and has to fight to reclaim it. My style has changed a lot over the past 7 years, and I hope you'll stick around to see how things turn out.
It'll get good, trust me.
My polite warning is to not go overboard with this hopelessness is all, though it is good to hear that you're taking chances with the narrative. That said, I'm still kinda in this state of detachment with the characters, protagonist and antagonist. A jerk is punching another jerk at this point, is what I'm thinking of the occasion, and someone nicer is freaking out, and that's kind of a bad situation to be in when both one of the primary antagonists and the protagonist aren't very sympathetic. Though, given the speed of the comics, it may just be the issue of speed belying character growth and this being a low point (for both).
ant2011
03-28-2018, 12:09 AM
Here's #179 (https://image.ibb.co/kVLRN7/ch_179.png)! What's all this about then? A vision of the past? A memory? Or the journey to the afterlife?
The Nonexistent Tazz
03-28-2018, 10:31 PM
Ahahaha, jeez, Anthony is in a tight spot.
On the flipside, I thoroguhly enjoy the old GB sprites for when Anthony has a flashback. That is a nice touch.
Fistodragon
04-02-2018, 07:14 PM
The flashback idea is neat
ant2011
04-10-2018, 04:00 AM
Gotta have flashbacks, and of course they gotta have those old school sprites! But hey, here's the next page #180 (https://image.ibb.co/bUjuxH/ch_180.png)!
The Nonexistent Tazz
04-12-2018, 07:00 AM
Well, that clears up... approximately 50% of my confusion.
Seriously, whatever O.X. is planning ought to be really tempting for Kane to have him join that as opposed to just being like Gary/Silver. Still, an interesting, sad motive.
ant2011
04-15-2018, 02:46 AM
Well, that clears up... approximately 50% of my confusion.
Seriously, whatever O.X. is planning ought to be really tempting for Kane to have him join that as opposed to just being like Gary/Silver. Still, an interesting, sad motive.
whatever O.X. is planning ought to be really tempting
really tempting
BRUH. BRUH YOU HAVE NO IDEA
In other news, I've noticed a lot of my old Postimg links are broken and I don't really want to reupload everything to the new site I've been using.
BUT DON'T WORRY! You can still read your favorite pages from the past! Back in 2015 I opened a Smackjeeves to host Jentoh to potential readers who aren't here! So if you want to read pages that are broken here, they should be there.
I always update here first, page 180 should be up there by the 16th of April!
So yeah, here's the Smackjeeves link (http://pokemon-jentoh.smackjeeves.com/)
The Nonexistent Tazz
04-15-2018, 07:21 AM
[TEMPTATION INTENSIFIES]
Ehehehe, looking forward to whatever extreme scheme is ongoing...
ant2011
04-25-2018, 02:37 AM
WOAH! More wacky memory flashback! WOAH! #181 (https://image.ibb.co/jcPbOc/ch_181.png)
ant2011
07-02-2018, 10:53 PM
Oh boy it's been a while, but I had to get a second job to pay off vet bills and doctor fees. With those taken care of though I figured I had to put up a new page, so here's #182! (https://s22.postimg.cc/kteuwd02n/ch.182.png)
Some slang definitions for you in case you don't already know them:
Gnarly - Nasty or unpleasant
Hodad - A person who hangs around a beach and does not surf
Shubie - a person who buys a surfboard and surf clothing, but does not surf
Chop - Rough and dangerous waves
Also just a heads up, I am taking a much needed vacation from July 9th to the 14th, some friends and I are heading out camping so I won't be back until after then.
Noblejanobii
07-02-2018, 10:57 PM
Haha that's pretty cool that he changed from a surfer to a snowboarder!
ant2011
09-08-2018, 02:04 AM
Hoo boy it's been a while. Been busy looking for a new job, but I managed to get #183 (https://s8.postimg.cc/7svup8gv7/ch.183.png) done for you all!
Noblejanobii
09-08-2018, 10:16 AM
Oh man this dream sequence is getting intense. Good luck with the new job though!
ant2011
09-08-2018, 04:21 PM
Oh man this dream sequence is getting intense. Good luck with the new job though!
Oh no, this isn't a dream sequence anymore lol. The classic RBY scenes are the dream sequences. I'm planning on following Kane for a while
ant2011
12-30-2018, 09:21 PM
Woah it's been a while, That would be my fault dealing with self discovery and working.
Anyway, I managed to squeeze in some time to pump out #184 (https://i.postimg.cc/ZJv62TJG/ch-184.png) for you all to enjoy!
Noblejanobii
01-06-2019, 05:29 PM
Hey that's not a problem. Glad to see you're back! Looking forward to the next update!
Fistodragon
06-15-2019, 12:17 AM
Wow! Those were great. I should get back to mine xD Haven't done one since April of 2018.
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