Suzumiya Fun!- Week 3: Mary Sue!

[Dragon Master Mike]

Suzumiya Fun!

Week 3


Hey PXR!

For yet another week i will be the host of Suzumiya Fun!

This week, the activity will be to see who can create the most ridiculous Mary Sue character! The rules are simple.

1. No copying
2. You must use at least one full sentence
3. You can have up to 4 sentences
4. Try to avoid run on sentences
5. And of course, Have Fun!

Entries will be judged by both creativity and level of ridiculousness. You will be able to receive up to 15 points for each category.
Entries must be made by Saturday (1/18/2014)

[Descartes]

I decided to go with a sonic oc since those are a classic, but with my own special twist! Also it's a little weird that only for sentences are allowed and they can't run on, since many poorly written sentences are so common with sue profiles :confused:. Oh well, here I go :cool:!

https://24.media.tumblr.com/58ce5cf1783a1a97fd90dae55fd59348/tumblr_mzdhuqaW9z1stj81vo1_500.png

[Winter]

Hmmm... I've read waaaaaaaaaaaaay too many Sue profiles, so I think I'm gonna go with...

"hi my name is Blaze Mariana Perfect Princess Ketchum and im Ash Ketchum's long lost sister! i have beyootiful long pastel pink hair that goze down too my waist and eyes that are the exact color of melted milk chocolate, and ppl think i am a lot more prettier than that obnoxious girl Misty. i am also an amazing battler and everyone loves me, thats why i have all tha gym badges that ever existed even tho i havent been to every region--all tha gym leaders know im da bestest battler evar so they just send me all the badges. im also so amazing that all of the pokemanz on my team are legends but only tha kawaii onez cuz im so amazing tht thay want me to catch them an battle amazing with them."

[Dragon Master Mike]

RESULTS!


Descartes

Creativity - 12/15
Ridiculousness - 8/15

Winter

Creativity - 9/15
Ridiculousness - 12/15




WE HAVE A WINNER!!!



Winter - 21 points



Thanks to everyone for participating! I enjoyed reading everyone's submissions! Descartes, while i believe you were very creative, I felt Winter won in the Ridiculousness category.