Pokemon Alpha

[Liokora]

Hey !

I'm going to post my comics updates. Here will be the first chapter ! I'll try to overtake the delay as short as possible !

Thanks for your comprehension (^-^)/


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[PTGigi]

It's great to be able to reread all these chapters as you're posting them. Lovely job with pages 43 and 48 especially! :D

[Liokora]

I'm glad you enjoy it ! :) I try to do some full pages occasionally ^-^

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[HKim]

I hope it's okay to comment in this thread! If not, let me know and I'll delete this post!

I do wonder what crazy tips you'd find in a Trainer's Survival Guide. Maybe a lot of common sense stuff!


Tip 1: Don't fight Pokemon with your fists!

Tip 2: Don't mistreat your own Pokemon!

Tip 3: Don't mistreat your own Pokemon by fighting them with your fists!


I'm sure there are better tips out there.

[Liokora]

Of course you can post here ! ^-^

I have't thought about what might be writen in this book but it could be fun to do some strips about this ahah :D I'll may think about it this summer !

Perhaps something like "Are Oddish eatable in salad ?" or "how to avoid bothering Zubat in caves" ahah :p

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Here we go for the second chapter ! :)


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[Nekomata]

Loving the lighting on that last page! ^_^ The contrast is very well done!

[PTGigi]

Wow, the lighting is absolutely wonderful! Love the color scheme you have going here too!

[Liokora]

Aw thank you ! I really enjoy drawing full pages, even if it may takes more time :) Your nice comments encouraging me to keep going on ! ^-^

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[Pokemon Trainer Sarah]

Ahhh I love Caterpie! Poor thing! I hope someone loves it one day! xD

I kind of felt bad for Oak giving away his last Charmander even though he was being creepy. :O The many Eevee in the gym was funny!

Your drawings are beautiful! ^^

[Pokemon Trainer Sarah]

Ahh so sad ;_; Poor Myrtille and Pasku :( Those bug catchers are crazy!!

I love Mich. He has the funniest expressions xD

[Liokora]

Ahah yup, I always have fun in drawing Mitch xD He looks always so jaded :p

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Thank you !! ^-^ I'm always trying to improve my drawing skills :D

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Someday. Someday he'll get his chance!

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Aw poor Grimm D:

Also, I honestly never noticed how similar Onix and Weedle look O-o

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For a split second I didn't notice Pasku evolved because, let's be honest, Nidorino is just a bigger Nidoran M XD
But yay! Evolution! :D

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Ahah that's right xD There is only small changes >.<

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So much gym destruction!

Eh, I'm sure it's common enough. Good thing rocks are easily replaceable.

[Liokora]

Ahah yeah, with all the battle this rocks suffer, they must have a system to replace them XD !

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I only just started reading this and may I just say, it's awesome so far. O: I really love the blue stone they all kept a fragment of. I LOVED Arceus' appearance. So majestic and cool! 8D That team Rocket guy (Giovanni?) is insane. O_o He lost his arm and all he can say is that Arceus is real? Geez. Psychopathic, much? xD

I really enjoyed the fight scenes too. It was really awesome. :] May I just warn you to watch out for the plural of "pokemon." Writing "Pokemons" is incorrect; it should just be "Pokemon." I love your art style, by the way! :]

[Suicune's Fire]

NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU that last part nearly made me cry! Your drawings have gotten so much better. O :They're so awesome now. I really love the texture overlay you go with as well. I LOVE your lighting. You seem to be really experienced with it. I'd love to know how you do it! O:

Really, following this comic has been really great. :] I loved every moment, and I find it really interesting. Your battles are very engaging and well drawn! :] Well done. You've got yourself another reader. ;D

POOR CATERPIE. I LOVE THAT LITTLE GUY. XD

[PTGigi]

Daw, poor Pasku :'C

[Liokora]

Aww ! I've missed your post here ! Thank you for this nice comment, it cheers up so much *^-^*

About the way I'm doing this, I've got experience little by little on drawing it :3 If you're interested in how I'm doing about the lighting and so, I will make a post whitch explain my process :D

By the way ! I also wanted to anounce that Suicune's Fire is now correcting my pages, it will be much better since I still have difficulties in writing in a proper english >.<; Thank you so much <3


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[Suicune's Fire]

I would DEFINITELY love to see you go through the progress of colouring and lighting! I really love your style. c:

Nice new page! :D I'm very happy to go through and help you with translation. :] I've sort of always wanted to help someone do that! Haha. :] I'm looking forward to seeing the Mt. Moon segment of their journey. xD And I half expect Roch to knock Brock on his butt after that past panel. XD

[HKim]

Yes, more shipping fodder! Let's ship everyone!

[lorii]

LOL Brock is such a ladies man.

Awesome chapter so far!

[Liokora]

Hehe thanks all ! ^-^

And indeed, B0rock, you need a kick in your face !!! x'D

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[Suicune's Fire]

Love it. :] Awesome new update. I still love your colouring technique. 0w0

[Rival Max]

This comic is put together so well. The story is pretty entertaining .

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Here we go for the next chapter ! :3


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Wow, that's not an insignificant amount of blood.

I also like the framing of this cover. It really adds an ominous presence to the whole thing.

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Why avoid the ladder for so long? Ladders are awesome O: (plus human-made stuff in a cave MUST mean it's the right way to go! =P)

[Suicune's Fire]

Haha, Gigi makes a good point. Love the new pages. c: I especially enjoy the lighting effect that Nielle's charmander's tail flame gives off.

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Ahah maybe Nielle is scary of ladders !! :p

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It's amazing what you can fit in a backpack these days.

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Ahah yep ! xD It must be heavy >.<;

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[PTGigi]

MEWTWO!?! :D

Surprised the rock tipped them off and not Grimm's tail XD

[Suicune's Fire]

Liokora you missed page three! O: I don't see it anywhere! Lol.

But I love the new page. :] So those guys are looking for...Mewtwo? Sounds like Team Rocket. xD

[Liokora]

Oh my ! You're right ! I was sure I've put it here, sorry >.< I'll add it just before the last page :)

[Suicune's Fire]

It's no worries! ^v^ Now I can see it and it looks great. c:

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Oh no, Grimm D:

[HKim]

Yikes! Do the fire thing!

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The fire thing ?! Let's... evolve !!! *^*

[HKim]

Yay! The Fire Thing!

Wow, killing girls. That's not cool. Guess it's time to teach these villains a lesson!

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[Suicune's Fire]

I can't wait to find out why he has that stone! O: I'm really enjoying this new character. xD Making her guess... How cruel! Haha.

I noticed a little typo on the most recent page; it says "yourfelf" instead of "yourself." xD Only a little error.

Great job. :] I very much enjoy this comic!

[Liokora]

Woops ! I've corrected :p Here we go for the 13th page :)


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[Suicune's Fire]

The official Sam reunion! ;o; How heartfelt. I'm so glad they met up after all these years. <3 I wondered what kind of a role he would play in the story! I guess we're going to find out. xD And his chikorita is adorable! <3

[Liokora]

Hihi yeah! I love chikorita, they're so cute ^.^

[Liokora]

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[HKim]

Oh my gosh, what a beautiful picture! The moon! The lights! Everything!

[Suicune's Fire]

So incredibly beautiful. I love your drawings, your art and the pretty effects you use. The glow drops look fantastic... I feel so bad for Pasku. :c <3

Great moon, too. :] Very well done. :D

[Liokora]

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[Suicune's Fire]

Great new updates. :] I wonder who Sam's going to go and see with Nielle to find out about Mew! How cool that he came back into the picture after all this time. c: Also I wonder what the title of this chapter means... Hybrid...!

[Liokora]

Hehe you'll discover that very soon ! Few pages to wait hehe :D

[Liokora]

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[Suicune's Fire]

So interesting! I like how it's tying into the Pokemon lore of Mewtwo! Very cool. :] Sounds like they really stiffed Leo, though. Poor guy. I love how he has so many eeveelutions. c:

Great drawings, too! :D It's so cool to watch you progress. I wonder what their next step will be... I'm looking forward to finding out!

[Liokora]

Ahah yeah ! Leo is used to take care of eevee hehe :3


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[HKim]

Ouch. By the ears! That must hurt.

[Liokora]

Indeed ! Poor thing, you have to learn to be a bit delicate Leo !!! >.<



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[Suicune's Fire]

XDDD I couldn't stop laughing about Ash's disease! How funny. (Not if it was real; I mean for the sake of the comic and his anime character of course. xD) I like the turn this is taking! How interesting...finding out what happened to Red! He'd be older than Ash now. Interesting.

Fantastic pages as always. c: I wonder where Roch is now--he looks so grumpy in that last panel!

[Liokora]

Ash is the only one who havn't grown ! x'D

Rosh is sure angry... but don't worry, we'll meet him again !!! :D

[Liokora]

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[Suicune's Fire]

Such an intense battle so far! O: I love the way you drew Misty's staryu coming out of its poké ball. And Pasku on the edge! Don't slip, buddy! ;~;

Lol Roch. xD He's so silly. And who else hasn't grown? O: Or are we getting to that? xD

[Liokora]

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I wanted to thanks those who whish me an happy valentine day !!! ^-^ It encourage me to keep drawing and all !!! Thanks you very much <3

[Suicune's Fire]

(I just realised that in page 14, down the bottom it says "carefull" but it should be "careful" with one L!)

I looove this fight so far. c: And no worries! :D You deserved those Valentines because you are kind and awesome, and your comic is incredible. :3

[Liokora]

Hihi I hope you'll like all the fight ! ^-^



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[Suicune's Fire]

Aww. he did his best! I really like the way you drew him swimming (or trying to xD) in the last panel. Also the picture of him using poison sting! It's really cool. I am enjoying it so far! ^v^

[Liokora]

Hehe he was not favored by this arena ! Small platforms and water everywhere >.< You'll do better next time Pasku ! That's not you're fault T^T

[Suicune's Fire]

N'aww. <3 Poor, cute little Pasku! That's how I feel. xD He's just unlucky this time. I wonder who Nielle will pick now! O:

[Liokora]

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And the next isssss... MAKA ! :D

[HKim]

Go Maka! You can do it!

[Liokora]

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[Suicune's Fire]

Very awesomely done. :D I love the battle scenes a lot. The colour, the poses, the effects--they all look sweet! ^v^ GO MAKA, GO! Avenge Pasku! xD

[HKim]

Yeah, taking a Hydro Pump from a Starmie probably would have hurt.

Also, I love the commentary from the sidelines.

[Liokora]

Indeed, I wouldn't want to take an Hydro Pump ahah xD



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[Suicune's Fire]

Watching Maka battle is awesome! I wonder how many more bites it'll take for her to faint that starmie. :3

Do you record and remember the moves you used when you did the Nuzlocke, or do you reinvent them during the comic for the sake of storytelling? I'm quite curious to know! :)

[Nekomata]

I've been meaning to say how much I absolutely love how you draw water effects. <3

[Liokora]

Suicune's Fire : It's more an pokémon adventure comic than a real nuzlocke ._. Even if major events like Myrtille death by poison or shiny charamander really happened in my games, there is some things that I couldn't get with a nuzlocke (for example that eevee I got by trade xD I don't think it's on nuzlocke rules @_@ ) So I consider this comic as an adventure comic inspired by some of games I've played :D


Nekomata : Thank you !!!! *^* I never know how to do elements (earth, fire, dust....) but I'm trying to look a multiple references and make it as good as I can ^-^

[Nekomata]

Liokora

Reference images are an artist's best friend. =D You've been doing a lovely job with such effects! You obviously put a lot of effort into them!

[Trainer17]

Indeed, I wouldn't want to take an Hydro Pump ahah xD



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I love the bite effect (of maka) it just looks so damn adorable x3 Eevees are cute x3 I'm going to start reading from the cover page now. <3

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[Suicune's Fire]

Suicune's Fire : It's more an pokémon adventure comic than a real nuzlocke ._. Even if major events like Myrtille death by poison or shiny charamander really happened in my games, there is some things that I couldn't get with a nuzlocke (for example that eevee I got by trade xD I don't think it's on nuzlocke rules @_@ ) So I consider this comic as an adventure comic inspired by some of games I've played :D
/so late

Ohh I see! I wasn't too sure. That makes sense. :) I certainly agree that there has to be things added into it that are impossible in-game. But wow, Grimm really was shiny?! O: That's so cool. xD

[Neo Emolga]

H-HOLY SMOKES!

This series is incredible, especially with the artwork! I also really like the way it paints Pokémon in a more mature mindset by using blood, swearing, emotions, and even having death involved. If there's solid proof it could work well for Pokémon, this comic series definitely does that. Meanwhile, the ongoing storyline is definitely very intriguing.

Beyond that, this is definitely one of the most professionally-made comic series I've ever seen. Even Brock and Misty look like true, hardcore badasses now! Again, the art, holy crap, this artwork is gorgeous and every panel is so well done. And those full-page pictures are epic masterpieces without a doubt!

Pasku is awesome. I never really thought much of Nidoran/Nidorino before, but this comic has definitely instilled a heck of a lot more appreciation for this guy. He's probably my favorite out of the bunch and I love seeing his determination and will to take on anything.

Absolutely amazing work on this whole series. I can definitely tell a LOT of love, time, care, and effort went into them and the incredible outcome of it all is definitely reflected in these comic strips.

Mind = blown.

[EmeraldSky]

Oh, that Caterpie is hilarious! What made you decide to make him the comic relief (no pun intended?)

[Blaquaza]

Wow, I've read all of these today and I've really quite enjoyed them! One thing I like in particular is the art; whilst I don't know exactly what it is, something just makes it all come together so perfectly and it's a really nice style. The story's full of mysteries as well, which is certainly a hook that'll keep me interested, considering I love the sense of tense suspense that's been created, and it's led to a very enjoyable read. :D

[Blaquaza]

Having read all of the other entries today, reading the prologue adds another sense of intrigue, because it allows you to experience the characters' 'backstory' in a more detailed fashion. I also really liked the art that you used here as well, because although different I still think that it looks great. :)

[Chibi Altaria]

ASFGHDAH WHY DID I NOT READ THIS SOONER? *O* LIOKORA, YOUR ART IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! And I really love the story so far, even if I've only read the prologue! I love prologues, since they create a lot of foreshadowing, so I can't wait to see how this turns out. Congrats, you earned yourself a new reader! :D

[Chakramaster]

This is yet another one of those few I had yet to start reading, but man was I missing out. The art style is one of those unique ones and it caught my attention when I first started reading. I know I'll have to catch up on this now as well because it seems really intriguing. Can't wait to catch up and see where things are now!

[PerseusRad]

I've gotta say that at times your humans look a bit off, but your Pokemon look almost always spot on. Nice comic, updates will be appreciated. Take your time of course.

[Liokora]

Aw my! You are so nice guys !!!! I'll keep the hard work and try to always do better ! :D

[Liokora]

I'm sorry for the delay !!! :D Pages are here!! :3



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That's all for this chapter ! :3 Also, I've made a poll, I was interested in what you guys would like to see in the comics :) This is the link : http://www.strawpoll.me/7364405

[Liokora]

Now we're starting the chapter 5 ! :)


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[Chibi Altaria]

YEEEEEEEEEE IT'S UP! :D

Thanks for the new page, Liokora! I'm really enjoying the story so far. I'm so happy to see Sam and Nielle reunited again (SORRY ROCH), and the battle with Misty was depicted awesomely!

[Chibi Altaria]

BEACH WEAR! >u< You're so good with lighting scenes, make me kinda envious aha. Maka is adorable! And little Pasku under the umbrella. <3 AND OMG THAT PSYDUCK FLOATIE AND THE BUBBLE AROUND GRIMM'S TAIL. You made me laugh. xD

[Liokora]

/so late

Ohh I see! I wasn't too sure. That makes sense. :) I certainly agree that there has to be things added into it that are impossible in-game. But wow, Grimm really was shiny?! O: That's so cool. xD

I forgot to answer to this ! :D Grimm was really my shiny charizard ! ^-^ But I lost him in pokemon X, I got the "egg bug" and lost a lot of shinies I still got some but Grimm was one that I lost :( I wanted to cry T^T But I'm planing in raising a new one, maybe by pokémon pension this time :p

[Neo Emolga]

Seconded, that battle with Misty was awesome! I love this art style and the storyline is great. Gotta love the characters also! :D

[Neo Emolga]

Now that's a cute image!

Grimm doesn't look very amused.

[Suicune's Fire]

SO CUTE. <3 I love how worried Grimm looks. xD And haha, similarly to Lunar Latias, the balloon on his tail made me laugh! I love the floaty ring thing too. xD

Great picture. :3

[Suicune's Fire]

I forgot to answer to this ! :D Grimm was really my shiny charizard ! ^-^ But I lost him in pokemon X, I got the "egg bug" and lost a lot of shinies I still got some but Grimm was one that I lost :( I wanted to cry T^T But I'm planing in raising a new one, maybe by pokémon pension this time :p
Oh my gosh, that's terrible! D: Sorry to hear that. :< Good luck raising a new one!

And yay for Misty's battle. c: I suppose this wraps up chapter 4!

[Liokora]

Ahah I see you guys liked the cover of this chapter!! ^-^ It's a good start !!! :D Now, the first page ! :)


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[Chibi Altaria]

I'm so lost as to what's going on right now. xD SO RANDOM. But I like it! Looking forward to more!

[Neo Emolga]

FIGHT IT OUT!

Just kidding, but yeah, it's a wonder what that guy is doing with those eggs, but my guess is he probably stole them. :P

Awesome artwork as usual!

[Suicune's Fire]

XD I love how he's at it a few hours later. So funny. That bike guy. xD OH HIM. I wonder if Nielle will get to keep that egg! O:


Also Liokora if you want to tag us when you post a new page, it'll help us know that there's a new one up. :] All you have to do is use the @ symbol and then type someone's username! ;)

[Liokora]

Sure ! :D I'll give it a try on the next page!! (I hope I'll do it right ahah :p )

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I've tryed the tag, it seems to work !

[Chibi Altaria]

Yay! Nielle's gonna raise a Pokemon egg! :D I wonder what's gonna hatch from it?

[Suicune's Fire]

I WONDER TOO! I love that silly bike guy. xD And Liokora, feel free to tag Lunar Latias and Neo Emolga too! :D I'm sure they'd appreciate it.

Great page as always. c: How generous of that guy on the bike to leave the egg with Nielle. XD I love how he's like "WAAAAAAAAH" as he drives off.

[Neo Emolga]

That biker dude is nuts. I'm guessing maybe he had way too much caffeine.

But yeah, I'm wondering what's to come from that egg. I really have no logical guesses on that either. XD

[Liokora]

Ahah the pokémon in the egg will be.... surprise!!!! :D

I added Neo Emolga and Lunar Latias to the tag list ^.^

[Suicune's Fire]

Vigilante Janobii - Get your butt over here and read this awesome comic! 8D

[Noblejanobii]

Vigilante Janobii - Get your butt over here and read this awesome comic! 8D

*is already reading this comic on smackjeeves*

[Suicune's Fire]

*is already reading this comic on smackjeeves*
READ IT HERE PLS. <3

[Noblejanobii]

READ IT HERE PLS. <3

But Smackjeeves is more convenient. I follows PRS on there too.

[Liokora]

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[Neo Emolga]

Where did THAT dude come from!? Also, that's just wrong, interrupting a battle like that.

*Throws a water balloon at Houndoom.*

[pokemon trainer Felix]

*agrees with neo and throws a second water balloon at Houndoom.*

[Chibi Altaria]

I would third that but I think the poor dog's had enough water. xD I was all like "yeah, battle!" AND THEN THE HOUNDOOM SHOWED UP.

[Sou]

What the heccckkkkk, who just comes in snatches someone’s pokemon up from a battle like that?! Talk about rude! D:

Oh, by the way, I just started this comic today and read straight through all the chapters and its soooo good! I love the style and the way you paint special effects! I might have missed it somewhere but I wonder what program you us of all this.

[Liokora]

Ahhhh bad Houndoom >o<

And I'm using photoshop and paint tool sai ^-^

[Liokora]

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@Suicune's Fire Neo Emolga Lunar Latias

[Neo Emolga]

And... now I have no clue what's going on. XD

Great comic, great details as always!

[Liokora]

What happens next.... That's just here !!!! :D


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Undyne
Neo Emolga
Lunar Latias

[Chibi Altaria]

Awww, cute! >u< For a minute there I thought the Houndoom had mistaken Maka for one of its pups, but then I realised it was just hunting for food. xD Either way, poor Maka!

[Suicune's Fire]

D'aw, the poor houndoom and her puppies. </3 I wonder if this has happened to her a lot, given that she's somewhat malnourished. :c I love that Sam always has food handy! What a good idea. I'm glad Maka was okay. <3 For a minute I thought that this was a way of you involving her death into the comic. xD Thankfully not!

[Liokora]

It's not the time for Maka to die hehe :3 Thanks to Sam! >.<


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[Neo Emolga]

Festivals are always interesting, but the whole earthquake and Houndoom thing seems foreboding.

Also, glad Maka didn't die. A dead Eevee is a surefire way to crush someone's soul. >.<