A XaiakuX Mess of Words.

[XaiakuX]

I've decide to start a thread where I will base all of my written pieces. All of which will probably be short. Mostly poetry. I've been working a lot on it. I'm trying to work on stuff that will tell a story. There are several great poets that tell marvelous stories. I would enjoy eventually becoming one of them. The fun part is that there's no real way I HAVE to write. As long as I feel it's interesting, unique, and tells some sort of story.

So here it is:


A XaiakuX Mess of Words!
/rollcredits.

"Light and Dark (http://www.pokemoncrossroads.com/forum/showthread.php?9884-A-XaiakuX-Mess-of-Words&p=200886&viewfull=1#post200886)"
A struggle to find the good left in this dark world.

"The Break-Up (http://www.pokemoncrossroads.com/forum/showthread.php?9884-A-XaiakuX-Mess-of-Words&p=202292&viewfull=1#post202292)"
A tale of sorrow and redemption.

"Heartbroken (http://www.pokemoncrossroads.com/forum/showthread.php?9884-A-XaiakuX-Mess-of-Words&p=202303&viewfull=1#post202303)"
You broke my heart, and I hate you for that.

"The Bloodlust (http://www.pokemoncrossroads.com/forum/showthread.php?9884-A-XaiakuX-Mess-of-Words&p=202366&viewfull=1#post202366)"
There's a madness in all of us.

"The Lady Hel (http://www.pokemoncrossroads.com/forum/showthread.php?9884-A-XaiakuX-Mess-of-Words&p=202367&viewfull=1#post202367)"
Forever your faithful servant.

"God of Mischief (http://www.pokemoncrossroads.com/forum/showthread.php?9884-A-XaiakuX-Mess-of-Words&p=202369&viewfull=1#post202369)"
Your fate is carved in stone.

"Anarchy (http://www.pokemoncrossroads.com/forum/showthread.php?9884-A-XaiakuX-Mess-of-Words&p=203442&viewfull=1#post203442)"
To the bitter end.

"My Little Red Star (http://www.pokemoncrossroads.com/forum/showthread.php?9884-A-XaiakuX-Mess-of-Words&p=238821&viewfull=1#post238821)"
MARVEL'S BLACK WIDOW

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All of the poems and stories posted in this thread are written by me. If I see any of my writings posted anywhere other than here without my say so, the consequences will be dire, and financially troublesome for you. Be warned that I take the use of my artwork very seriously, and you will have a bad day if I catch you.

Otherwise, enjoy. I love your eyes.. looking at my words.. <3

[XaiakuX]

"Light and Dark"
A struggle to find the good left in this dark world.

-- By XaiakuX

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Quietly, Violently
I slip into the night.

Silently, Savagely
I fight to find the light.



In a world lost to hate.
like a fish takes the bait.

Quietly, Silently
I slip into the night.


Somewhere hidden, lost to find.
Ease the burden, or lose your mind.

Violently, Savagely
I fight to find the light.



If I should fall before the morning sun
Lay me down, for my task is done.

I will rest in peace, and find my way
There is nothing left to say.

Quietly, I slip into the night.


All the anger, I cannot find.
All the love, I left behind.

I will battle on until I die.
Let them hear my violent cry.

Violently, I fight to find the light.


Be my totem of peace in this darkness
All the bliss I seek to harness.

Calm and cool like the ocean breeze
The peace I need will set me free.

Silently, I slip into the night.


Violence thrashes, takes its hold.
I've never felt a rage so bold

It's coming down, it's drawing near
embracing me with love and fear.

Savagely, I seek to find the light.


Do not go quietly. Do not be violent.

Do not fade into the night.

Do not be savage. Do not go silent.

There is no need to fight.


You have no need to thrive in darkness
No anger needed to be harnessed.

Calm yourself, and hear my plight.


... You have already...


Found the light...

[Noblejanobii]

I love the whole visual poetry thing you've got going on here. I've found it always makes a piece much more powerful!

[XaiakuX]

"The Break-Up"
A tale of sorrow and redemption.

-- By XaiakuX

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Silently I wait and bleed

It's not enough, I cannot stay
I'm suffering in agony

This love you give, I threw away
Waiting to see If you will be

I need to leave, you need to stop
The one who will come back to me

Don't say a word just give it up


There's nothing left.


You took my heart into your hands

Don't fight this one, you'll make it worse
You tore it up, it fell like sands

What you give, I don't deserve
I fell in love, you walked away

Why can't you see I'm not the one
I only wanted you to stay

Just let me go because I'm done


There's nothing left.


I held you close, you pushed me back

You chose a path I didn't need
So I gave in to your attacks

You want me back, but you can't see
All I wanted was to be loved

I'm the one who wants to leave
I wanted you, that was enough

I'm the one who's set you free


Now you're gone.


I gave my all and watched it burn

My mind's made up, my heart is sold
Saw your smile, watched it turn

I made my choice, and hit the road
Now there's nothing left inside

There's no regrets, my day's new dawn
There's nothing left, I say goodbye

I've made my peace, and now I'm gone


But wait, what's this?


Something different, something new

Something's missing, something's wrong
Something there that isn't you

I feel so empty with you gone
Something light and something grand

This isn't right, this can't be real
Something there to take my hand

I can't describe this pain I feel


Now there's this.


This feeling here, it isn't bad

This emptiness it feels so cold
Erases all the pain I had

It doesn't stop it only grows
Nothing left of you with me

What have I done, this cannot be
No more feeling misery

I need you back here, next to me


I'm happy, now.


Happy now that you're not here

I'm so sorry, please come back
No more me living in fear

I cannot breathe, your love I lack
Of if you'll leave or if you'll stay

I'll go insane if you're not here
It no longer matters, anyway

Hold me close, and hold me dear


The past is gone.


Memories are all that's left

I've seen my error, I was wrong
I let them go, one final breath

I'm so lost, it's been too long
Before I do, and set you free

What am I supposed to do
There's one more thing you need to see

I feel I'm nothing without you


There's nothing left.

[XaiakuX]

"Heartbroken"
You broke my heart, and I hate you for that.

-- By XaiakuX

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-Original Post Here (http://www.pokemoncrossroads.com/forum/showthread.php?4133-WAR-Heartbroken&p=101475&viewfull=1#post101475)-
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You broke my heart, and I hate you for that
You tore it from my chest
You stomped on it
It's like you never even cared

I have never been defeated
Love had never beaten me
Until I loved you
Until you defeated me

You broke my heart, and I hate you for that
You think women are the only ones that feel it?
Nah, heartbreak is for everybody
Love is just a game, and you played it dirty

All the years that I listened to your bullsh*t
Every minute that I thought that you were worth it
Every day that I wasted away thinking about us
I look back on all of it in disgust

You broke my heart, and I hate you for that
Ripped it out and used it
Like play-doh or silly putty
But this isn't child's play

This is what we call the real life
Karma is real, and she's a b*tch
I once thought to make you my wife
But the thought now makes me sick

You broke my heart, and I hate you for that
For a year you were my only thought
Where did I go wrong? What do I do without you?
Turns out that I'm an idiot

I don't need you, anymore, I'm free
Free to fly so high into the sky that
If I ever cry again no one will see it
Because the pain will never be that bad

You broke my heart, and I hate you for that
You said you loved me and it feels like
You were lying all that time I wasted on you
Why would anyone do that to someone they loved?

I'm not sorry for this poem
I'm sorry that I ever truly loved you
I'm sorry that I ever opened up
That I ever let you see my demons

You broke my heart, and I hate you for that
When will the hurting stop?
When will it be enough?
What do I do? What do I need to say?

It hurt so much, before, but I'm okay
You never told anyone my secrets
You never revealed the monster
Thank you for that, I mean it

You broke my heart, but I forgive you for that
I forgive you for the pain you caused me
I was so far away but I couldn't see
That it was hurting you just the same

I was ignorant and selfish, but my eyes are open
I see the errors and the problems
There is no way to make it right
You're gone now, but not forgotten

You broke my heart, but that's ancient history
I look at you, now, and I don't feel the hate
I felt it before, it isn't there anymore
I don't care what people think or say

I hope there will come a day where we can
Be friends again, and put the past behind us
Stop the grudges and stop the hatred
Be like Frozen and "Let It Go"

You broke my heart, but I don't care anymore
Bygones are bygones, what are we fighting for?
You want a poem to rhyme, well here I go
This is about to be a Caleb's love life show

It started out like any other silly crush
I think I like you as more than a friend
Your smile, your touch, an intoxicating rush
I swore to God I would love you until the very end

Then came the fighting, then the distance
That's when everything fell apart
When my love and affection met resistance
That's when you broke my heart

So I got mad, I got sad, and I fought you at every turn
I was so lost and entranced in a state of desperation
I did everything I could to fix the bridge that burned
That's when I learned the truth of love and expiration

In my heart, a shadow grew, every part of me hated you
It got stronger every day, I threw it all away
The pain within would not subside
when I lost you, I died inside

What kind of man lets it hit him this hard?
Where did I go wrong to make it fall apart?
I couldn't take it, so I did what I had to do
I let go of everything that kept me tied to you

These days, you're still there, I see you every day
But the hate inside has gone. The pain just went away
I'm safe to say that I'm okay, I hope that you're the same
I'm better, now, and I've learned that people always change

You broke my heart, and I hated you for that
You broke my heart, and I've forgiven you for that
You broke my heart, but I know forever never lasts
You broke my heart, but the past is in the past

Thank you for teaching me these lessons in my life
I will never forget you
Good-bye.

[Ganyu]

Light and Dark... Such juxtaposition. I love that there's a visual element of a villanelle. If that was intentional, that's pretty genius. Almost reminds me of "Do not go gentle into that good night".
Somewhere hidden, lost to find.
Ease the burden, or lose your mind.I always admire how you manage to weave rhymes within rhymes effortlessly. Such a treat for a reader to have a double dose of rhyme~
Be my totem of peace in this darknessPerhaps my favourite line of the poem. I love the diction of 'totem', suggesting something sacred and something primal and elemental, and it just extends past being a mere symbol, almost like a living entity.

Dual perspectives being examined simultaneous is something I've seen you done before and The Break-Up does not disappoint. Its rhyme scheme is akin to the sonnet but the little interjections make it seem more like a ballad that's performed, instead of being read, like a song. Such progression through the poem as well, running antiparallel, like...a helix of DNA (weird analogy but I hope you get my drift). And it can possibly be a cycle or a role-swap, or both tbqh. What a way to evoke the complexities of human relationships especially one of love.

I always like seeing what you write; what you write about is so simple and profound and utterly poignant. In the words of Oliver Twist, more please!

[XaiakuX]

Light and Dark... Such juxtaposition. I love that there's a visual element of a villanelle. If that was intentional, that's pretty genius. Almost reminds me of "Do not go gentle into that good night". I always admire how you manage to weave rhymes within rhymes effortlessly. Such a treat for a reader to have a double dose of rhyme~ Perhaps my favourite line of the poem. I love the diction of 'totem', suggesting something sacred and something primal and elemental, and it just extends past being a mere symbol, almost like a living entity.

Dual perspectives being examined simultaneous is something I've seen you done before and The Break-Up does not disappoint. Its rhyme scheme is akin to the sonnet but the little interjections make it seem more like a ballad that's performed, instead of being read, like a song. Such progression through the poem as well, running antiparallel, like...a helix of DNA (weird analogy but I hope you get my drift). And it can possibly be a cycle or a role-swap, or both tbqh. What a way to evoke the complexities of human relationships especially one of love.

I always like seeing what you write; what you write about is so simple and profound and utterly poignant. In the words of Oliver Twist, more please!

Lots of big words in there. Thankfully I know big words. I appreciate it. I appreciate how you dissected and found things that I didn't even think about while writing it. You entered your own world and exposed hidden truths in my writing. That is art. Always in the eye of the beholder. Always a matter of perspective. From me writing these poems, to you diligently describing how you feel about them. Your comment, your description, your perspective is a work of art in of itself. Kudos to you, and thank you.

My next post will be very dark. It will not be for the faint hearted, and it is.. in fact, the other post, revised, from the first WAR back in 2014.

The Bloodlust.

[XaiakuX]

"The Bloodlust"
There's a madness in all of us.
-- By XaiakuX

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THIS IS A REVISED POEM!
-Original Post Here (http://www.pokemoncrossroads.com/forum/showthread.php?4083-WAR-The-Bloodlust-Week-4-Horror)-
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In the recesses of the world..

The shadows, the darkness..

The vile minds of humanity lurk in the night, awaiting their next victim.


Some do it for fun, some do it because they feel it is their calling.

Some feel they are serving a higher purpose, and some do it out of boredom.

You, the innocent, suffer their tyranny. While there is some good in the world, there is most certainly evil.

An evil that will never be extinguished...


From the shadows it stalks you
A creature of the night
~
You feel it creeping closer
But it's hidden from your sight
~
Those people tried to warn you
To walk close to where there's light
~
But now you're just a victim
Of a heinous beast called fright



The bloodlust can never truly be satisfied..

The bloodlust will never truly die..

The thoughts of a killer will forever wander to the feeling of fresh blood trickling down their skin.


They'll long for it, and they'll sate the need by any means necessary.

They are uncaring, unforgiving, and psychotic.

They feed on the fear and paranoia of their victims.

As they hunt, they are almost aroused by the fantasy of killing once again.


Take it now, to a higher level
This cushioned life in which you revel
~
A upturned nose invites a hell
Take you back to where I dwell
~
A wicked heart you can't ignore
I'll tie you up and slam the door
~
You cannot escape this anymore
You've no idea what I've got in store


When the killer stalks his victim, both people can feel the intensity.

The thrill of the chase.


One lead by fear, and one lead by desire.
There is a rare chance that the victim manages to escape their pursuer.

However, there can be no escape from death.

Sooner or later, the killer will feel the satisfaction of sliding a blade into someone's heart, or putting a bullet into someone's head.


I will not stop, I won't give in
Body counts rise, I'm drowning in sin
~
I'm not winning, but I'm not quitting
Nor am I willing to stop my killing
~
The thrill of the chase, quicken pace
I'll peel the skin right off your face
~
Fight my demons or fight my knife
Killed your family, now I end your life

Time and time again, the killer is brought to justice by keepers of the peace.


The good guys

The heroes

The denizens of the light

However, the shadow of death will never go away.
So long as good exists in this world, evil, too, will thrive.


Murder will keep happening.

Hate will still plague our minds.

Darkness will still corrupt our souls.

So long as there is good, there will inevitably be evil.


Call me crazy, you don't know me
I'm a psycho, sad and lonely
~
I thirst for blood, it's what I love
They call me sick, I'm always judged
~
Maybe I'll show the world my colors
Maybe I'll kill these mother f**kers
~
I might be crazy, might be insane
But you're the victim of my game

The bloodlust presents itself as an instability.


A sickness.
An illness.
A madness.

Psychotic breakdowns which lead to irrevocably violent tendencies. To which the victim of the bloodlust is not the only victim.


The monster is also a victim
A victim of a sickness
A victim of the bloodlust

But to succumb to that illness, is to be weak. A weak and cowardly person loses himself in the bloodlust. He also loses his mind...


Look at you quiver, look at you shake
Hear you scream with every bone I break
~
Murder by nature, killer by thought
Witness the monster that you wrought
~
It's my design, terror to all!
You can't stop me, I won't fall!
~
For all the pain that you'll endure
Spread their blood across the floor

Insanity.

Insanity means to do things repetitively and expecting a different result each time.
Murder has the same result every time.

Insanity also follows a pattern. Patterns are sought by seekers of justice.
A downfall.


Madness begets chaos.

Chaos begets murder.

Murder begets insanity.

Insanity begets justice.

With crime so widely predictable, it's a wonder how people get away with it.
It's the unpredictable ones that get away.

All you can do is hope and pray. Pray that it will go away. Hope that it won't find you, someday.

Someday.

[XaiakuX]

"The Lady Hel"
Forever your faithful servant.

-- By XaiakuX

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-Original Post Here (http://www.pokemoncrossroads.com/forum/showthread.php?4622-Tales-of-the-Heart-Poetry-by-XaiakuX&p=110723&viewfull=1#post110723)-
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She sits upon her throne
Dwelling in the shadows


Waiting

Tall, pale, and cold as a winter's night
As if death had taken her

She is above death and beyond it

She is neither dead nor living

O' child of Loki

Mistress of the dead

Captor of souls

Goddess of damnation

I do not fear you or your wrath
Only the idea of death itself

Bear upon me thy great fury
For I am drawn to your grace

A divine and unholy form you take
A longing for you, temptation rises



I am stricken

Cursed to long for what will never be


Bring the fury of Asgard

Bring the fury of Jötunheimr

The Lady Hel

Child of Loki


Keeper of the damned

I love you

For I am your willing servant

I hate you

For you will never be mine

[XaiakuX]

"God of Mischief"
Your fate is carved in stone.

-- By XaiakuX

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TITLE CHANGED!
-Original Post Here (http://www.pokemoncrossroads.com/forum/showthread.php?4622-Tales-of-the-Heart-Poetry-by-XaiakuX&p=112045&viewfull=1#post112045)-
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Laced with poison your words escape your lips
Ever intoxicating and dangerous to hear
They grab at me ears with a touch that chills my every bone
Words of PROMISE

Words of DESIRE


Words of CONTROL



Words of FEAR
They suffocate me until I trust them completely

Your smile lingers in my mind, mischievous and cruel
Unrelenting and sinister, as my will becomes your toy
As if I were a marionette, and you a skillful puppeteer
Like butter I would melt entirely to your whim
My God

My King


My Lord



My Master
For I am a man, and men to gods are like ants to boots

For a man's will, mine stands stronger than most
I fight to no avail against the might of your control
I am an unwilling nor wanting servant to a child of Jötunheimr
I am forced to carry your burdens, unable to change my fate
O' Loki

Laufey's Son


Silver-Tongued Deity



Trickster of the Gods
Your words have manifested and stricken me like a disease

Child of the violent Fárbauti, you may seize Midgard
Humans are feeble towards your prowess of control
You may crush humanity beneath your mighty boot
Loki the terrible, Loki the great, Loki the prankster
Father to Jörmungandr, the Midgard Serpent

Father to Hel, Keeper of the Damned


Father to Fenrir, Slayer of Odin



Mother to Sleipnir, The Eight-Legged Stallion
Your destined demise is yet carved into the stone

My words are like poison as they escape my lips
Yet the words that expel are not mine to speak
My tongue is twisted and controlled by he who wills me
The one I praise and fear

The one you must praise and fear


The one all will praise and fear



Loki's will be done
Our God and true ruler will remain eternal over Midgard

[XaiakuX]

"Anarchy"
To the bitter end.

-- By XaiakuX

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Rules.

They were made to dictate.


... To control.


Peace. Prosperity. Democracy.


The calm before the storm.




Made for balance.

Made for restriction.


Formed for unity. Formed for power.

Like a choke hold on society. Like a vice grip on our own free will.

But rules were made..


.. To be broken.


Tonight.

Tonight, we rise.


Rise against the powers.

Against the control.

Against the rules.


We will take no prisoners.

We will show no mercy.


This...


... Is anarchy.



Volatile. Violent.

Cruel. Unforgiving.

We will have our way, and we shall live how we please.


Nothing can stop us.


This..


.. Is freedom.


No rules. No restrictions. No order.

Disorder and chaos. Peace annihilated.

There are no repercussions for our actions.


We are free.


Are you ready for it?


For Freedom? For Madness? For Anarchy?


This is it.

This is the storm!



Tonight, our wills be done!


Tonight, we are all.

Tonight, we are none.
Tonight, we go to hell.
Tonight, we are free.




.. To do what we please.

[XaiakuX]

"Little Red Star"
MARVEL'S BLACK WIDOW


Smile pretty, my little red star.
From the shadows, we fester.
Look down on your foes, and prepare to strike.
Silent as the grave, deadly as a widow's bite.

Run for your lives
Run for your lives
End their lives, my little red star.

From youth to maturity.
Growth in body and in mind.
From foolishness and naivety
To cunning and relentlessness

Spreading fear like a disease
Punishing the enemies of our land.
End their lives, my little red star.

They come for us with their morals and laws.
They'd take you from me
Poison you against me
Turn tail, and live to fight again.
Hide in the shadows, like we always planned.

Run, run away
Run, run away
My little red star.

They've caught you, and you've learned their ways.
They've killed you, or who you used to be.
No longer my little red star.
No, you're something even more.

Hero, agent, spy, and shield.
Defender, weapon, to save and kill.
They send you after me, to stop me from saving you.
Come for me, my little red star.

To them, I am the poison which turned you pale
But, I am the reason you have yet to fail
To me, you are who you are
I created the little red star.

Yet you seek me, out for justice
Or you hunt me, out for blood
Come for me, then.
End my life, my Красная звезда.


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So, I just read the "Black Widow: Forever Red" young adult novel by Margaret Stohl. Reading it really gave me a new perspective on the character, Natasha Romanova. It's also where I drew inspiration to write up this short poem. I also felt it a good way to kick back up the writing, and work away some of my rust. I know that Soviet Russia actually did recruit orphans off the street to raise them as spies and assassins. So you could look at this poem from that perspective, too. It's also dark and gritty, like most of my poetry. So I hope you guys dig it.

[XaiakuX]

"New Beginnings"
A challenger approaches!
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Drip. Drip. Drip.

.. Drip.

The sound of the sweat hitting the top of my duel disk resonated in my ears as it escaped from the pores on my face. It's about all that I could hear, despite the roar of the crowd around my opponent and I. There he stood, arm outstretched clad in a black sleeve and leather straps. Overshadowing a familiar white trench coat. My eyes met with an intense stare from a pair of piercing sapphire eyes. My gaze didn't catch for long. As the dust around me me began to clear, my sight was burdened by an image even more profound, just overhead. A large, fearsome, white dragon with equally menacing blue eyes.

The next sound I hear is a not-so-familiar sound. The sound of my life point counter dropping to zero. It had been such a long road. Such a difficult trial to get to this point. But I couldn't do anything but smile. I just had the duel of my life, and although he would never admit it, I bet he did, too. The next sound I heard was a roaring cheer from a resilient crowd. All there to cheer on their hero. That hero certainly wasn't me. It was my opponent. For some reason, ever since Yugi Motou vanished off the face of the planet, the world turned to him as its Duel King. A title that I've striven for, ever since Yugi abandoned the title.

Seto Kaiba. The Duel King stood before me, as the holographic images faded to nothing, and our duel disks reverted to their inactive state. Kaiba raised a hand to the sky, and the crowd fell silent.

“Yugi,” his voice echoed through the arena, “You may have fallen off the face of the planet. But, that doesn't mean I'm going to give up until I've beaten you!” The crowd roared again, they really loved him. I didn't really understand why he didn't acknowledge me, even though I almost beat him.

“Every day that you waste away is a day that I grow better, and more determined. Despite the worthless oppositions I face in the finals of every tournament I hold!” This being the third tournament he'd held since Yugi's disappearance. Some believed he did it simply to coax the former Duel King out of hiding, and out of retirement. All to no avail. Though, there I stood, dumbfounded by the fact that he called me 'worthless.'

“Really? If you hadn't drawn that last card, I would have beaten you. Give me some credit,” I said out loud, without even thinking about it. The crowd hushed, suddenly. It was only then that I realized that they hadn't cut out my microphone. There it was, again. That menacing glare. I really stepped in it, this time.

“You,” just that word alone sent a chill down my spin, “You never stood a chance against me. The card I drew wasn't even the card that I played to win. But if you want the bronze metal, and the attention it brings, it's all yours. I'll even give you something else. You put up more of a fight than that two bit duelist, Joey Wheeler. But, that isn't saying much.”

Kaiba wasn't wrong. About the first part, anyways. I was so caught up in the moment, the thrill of the duel, I hadn't even noticed that he placed the card he drew in his hand, before picking up another one. Not only did I look like a fool, but a wrong fool. There's just no love for that kind of failure. But it was still a great duel. To think someone can turn a duel completely on its head with one card. A feat only achievable by Seto Kaiba.

He turned his back to me, and walked off of the arena stage. His little brother was immediately there to greet and congratulate him. As well as mock me for speaking out of term. I turned and left the arena stage as well, I was greeted by my girlfriend, who looked all too disappointed that I lost to the Duel King. I wasn't bothered by it, though. It was my dream to go one on one with the master of the Blue-Eyes White Dragon. Even if I lost, it was a dream come true.

But now I have a new dream, and that dream is to find Yugi Motou. I'll find him, and convince him to return to the world of Duel Monsters. To see all of his cards in play, again. The Dark Magician, Dark Magician Girl, the Egyptian God Cards, the Magnet Warriors. I'll help him find himself, and become the greatest, once again! I'll be the reason he reclaims his title of Duel King.

Then, I'll be the one who takes it all away.


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This is obviously a Yu-Gi-Oh! piece. I've been on a bit of a kick with the card game, lately. So, I decided to go ahead and write a little piece on my favorite character, Seto Kaiba. Why Kaiba? Well because he has my favorite card, and he's the only one who has one, in the anime. My real life deck is a Blue-Eyes White Dragon themed deck. All the cards in it are meant to work around that one card, and it does so, beautifully. So if you're a Yu-Gi-Oh! Fan, I bet you'll at least partially enjoy enjoy this.

[XaiakuX]

Bro~! Your writing skillz r mad dope. The way you put yourself into a scenario with an actual Yugioh character was kinda strange, but I can dig it. The way you wrote Seto Kaiba was so on point, it seems almost romanticized, it comes off as unique and wonderful.

Luv ur Face!

Also, bump.

[XaiakuX]

Pride of a Powerful Dragon Pokemon

Behold, as I will. The grace and poise, of my existence. The imposing demeanor, and fierce composure. A body by which you gawk in amazement, and in fear. Intimidation and Infatuation. Feelings of joy and worthlessness, as you begin to understand the entity that stands before you.

Crushed by an overwhelming sense of pride, and a harsh desire to kneel. You stand before a creature of deadly atrocities, and of glorious purpose. I am a brilliant force of strength, and a violent hunter.

I don't bother to stalk my prey. I have a bright, golden armored hide, and there is no point in hiding in the shadows. I am engine of destruction. A vessel of devastation. A beast with a ravenous hunger for domination. At my tallest, I tower over any foe, and at my lowest, I am a deadly weapon in battle.

My outer shell is impenetrable, and immune to any weapons! The claws on my body, and blades on either side of my face are already colored red for a reason! Because by the time you've crossed my path, you've already lost the fight.

I don't need waves of energy, or roar cries to weaken you. I will come at you with everything I have until there is nothing left. I am a physical and powerful machine, and I do not relent. If I need to, I will entrance you with a performance of my savage nature to give me an edge.

If that fails, then prepare to receive every bit of my outrageous might. Nothing and no one can stand against me. None can compare without assistance, or stature. I am rage, I am vengeance, I am a Dragon unlike any other..


..I am Haxorus.

[Pokemon Trainer Sarah]

Feelings of joy and worthlessness,
I liked this line a lot. Very nice imagery and descriptions. :)