What would you think of this kind of story?

[Noblejanobii]

Yuuuup, this is exactly what I was thinking while writing these.

I've narrowed it down to one question. Is there more to his story with regards to what is around him or what goes on within him? Trial of Juno, in first person POV, struck base on a lot of personal contemplative reactions to what he saw and it was fun to cover that, but as a result, there was less story behind the other characters. Juno wouldn't know what their personal feelings were, and while he was kind of the "leader" of the story, there were times when it would have been nice to delve into how the other characters were reacting and what their thoughts were. I feel like their stories were just as important but were skipped over a bit simply because of what Juno was aware of versus what he wasn't aware of. Sure, something like Harry Potter would have been interesting to read from Harry's perspective, but it would be completely different and I honestly think major parts of it wouldn't have worked as nicely as the way they work now.

I think, after doing both of these and considering what would be ahead in the road to come for this story, third person would be the better way to go. Kyan is definitely an important focus of the story, but it's not just about him. There's a lot of other characters to come that need to have their stories told as well.

Still, thanks for checking these out. And yeah, as you could probably tell, I change the names of things constantly as I often dump in a placeholder name just to keep going with the story and worry about the exact names of things later after thinking of something better.

Well I look forward to this no matter what you do! It looks really interesting so I'm excited to see where it goes!