[PXFIRE] [SU/DS] PXFIRE Roleplay - A Game of Storms

[Neo Emolga]

It's the final showdown! Okay, actually, there's still plenty of RP story left, of course.

And yes, since I'm officially done with judging and having to scramble to get other submissions in, I'll have a bit more time to be active in this. :3

Noblejanobii
The Gracidea Order

Driving Force Rating: A+
Written Content Rating: A+
RPer Interactions Rating: A+
Activity Level Rating: A++
Formatting, Spelling, and Grammar Rating: A+

TOTAL POINTS AWARDED:
21

Okay, seriously, A+s across the board for you. Without a doubt, you're definitely the rockstar of this RP and continue to do a remarkable job not just with Athena, but with Masamune and Brunswick also. Not to mention your activity level has been supercharged with seriously well-written and stylish posts. Really, I couldn't ask much more of you when it comes to how you've answered the call and continue to rock this RP! Everything from Athena's rough encounter with Phoebe and Brunswick's elation at seeing his wife win Blood Pit was fantastic.

If I had a "Best Overall Performance" award set up since the very beginning, it would definitely go to you. Awesome job, Noble! :D

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Morzone
Steel Scavengers

Driving Force Rating: A
Written Content Rating: A
RPer Interactions Rating: A
Activity Level Rating: B+
Formatting, Spelling, and Grammar Rating: A

TOTAL POINTS AWARDED:
17

While Noble rocks Blood Pit, you definitely rock Dread Metal. What I like most about your posts is the intensity, but also the realism and the creativity. Julia hijacking Khilter's buggy after the Iron Giant gets destroyed was pretty creative, and having the Enigma Zero take on Jucden and Jaze was clever and resourceful. I definitely need to say on the Dread Metal side of things, you're definitely leading the show. Keep up that great work you've been doing!

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Shruikan
Gracidea Order

Driving Force Rating: B+
Written Content Rating: A-
RPer Interactions Rating: B+
Activity Level Rating: B+
Formatting, Spelling, and Grammar Rating: B

TOTAL POINTS AWARDED:
14

Hello, newcomer! Awesome to see you in this!

Overall, you did a decent job with Levi! I think it's a bit tough to get involved and have a major impact on the storyline when you just joined, but you're doing pretty well considering the circumstances! Even though PXFIRE is closing, I hope you definitely stick with the RP. You did well even though you were only in it for the last week.

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Death's Spook
Steel Scavengers

Driving Force Rating: A+
Written Content Rating: A+
RPer Interactions Rating: A
Activity Level Rating: C+
Formatting, Spelling, and Grammar Rating: A+

TOTAL POINTS AWARDED:
15

This was tough to score, because you had only one post for the week, but it was a very good one. You almost had my Weavile character cornered and screwed when Max Clerk showed up, and the SHEER BRUTALITY of the Grand Lady definitely came out when she cut up Vurden like a mad science experiment and played the flower petal game with his wings (seriously, I don't know how you think of that kind of stuff!). I think the way Ante was exposed was maaaybe a bit too much in The Lady's favor (not sure how she was able to get her conversation with Vurden heard by everyone), but it's not that much of a biggie. I feel it was probably about time for that speculation to come out anyway.

Very brutal... but very delish. >:3

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LKWayvern
Prankster Platoon

Driving Force Rating: C+
Written Content Rating: B
RPer Interactions Rating: D
Activity Level Rating: C-
Formatting, Spelling, and Grammar Rating: A

TOTAL POINTS AWARDED:
7

The post you had for Xavier was alright, but unfortunately, it was the only one you had this week and it was kind of small. It was a good reflection on Xavier's thoughts, but it just didn't really push forward the storyline all that much and there weren't any interactions with anyone else's characters. Not the end of the world, of course, but you were doing better in the weeks before. But yeah, I have a feeling you probably had a busier week than usual. I know I did. o.o

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Velocity
Prankster Platoon

Driving Force Rating: B
Written Content Rating: A-
RPer Interactions Rating: B
Activity Level Rating: C+
Formatting, Spelling, and Grammar Rating: A

TOTAL POINTS AWARDED:
10

I think the only area when you took a hit was activity. But you did have a good post for the week, even though it only was one. There were decent interactions, the detail was good, and I didn't catch any screwy formatting or spelling mistakes, so you did well with even that one post. I think if you had been able to squeeze in a second post similar in size and quality to this one, you would have done above average.

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The Nonexistent Tazz
The Gracidea Order

Driving Force Rating: B
Written Content Rating: A+
RPer Interactions Rating: B
Activity Level Rating: B
Formatting, Spelling, and Grammar Rating: A-

TOTAL POINTS AWARDED:
16

Steinway is flippin' creepy and crazy. But you did a great job of capturing that kind of personality. She's the kind of character who is a total wildcard and could either be really helpful or really batcrap psychotically evil. It's actually tough to tell and no one but you knows where it goes.

I did catch a few tiny mistakes and a BB code format you missed, but that's just simple silly stuff. But you do awesome considering the sheer quality of your posts. I've noticed they've become a bit more seldom lately, which is meh, but they're still high on quality with many interesting themes and characters appearing. I guess the idea here is more on quality and content rather than frequency, which is still totally good in my books.

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TOTALS:


Gracidea Order: 51 points
The Nonexistent Tazz - 16
Noblejanobii - 21
Shruikan - 14


Prankster Platoon: 17 points
Velocity - 10
LKWayvern - 7


Steel Scavengers: 32 points
Death's Spook - 15
Morzone - 17

OVERALL

YOU GUYS ARE AWESOME!!!

Seriously, it was tough to judge this stuff. Just about everyone had really good content and it was more of a matter of posting frequency, interactions, and just minor things that set score differences, but it's great to see the different styles of storytelling, people's characters coming to life, and seeing how they respond and reactive to a downright brutal setting is fantastic.

I also want to thank everyone that signed up, got into it, and even those that decided to give it a shot even though they're a bit new to the RP scene.

Thanks for being a part and I hope you guys stick with it even though PXFIRE is ending. Trust me, things are just warming up and they're bound to get even more intense, so stick around and you never know what might happen next!

As always, cheers and good times!

@Noblejanobii @The Nonexistent Tazz @Death's Spook @Morzone @Velocity @LKWayvern @Shruikan