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    [COMIC]CHAPAZ REGION ~ 1-4 comics a week (Unless something comes up)

    Chapaz NEWS
    Will take spots for Guest Stars soon. (Send your application through PM)

    PLOT
    Fisto and Silver are on a journey through the Chapaz region. There will be some tough times and tough challenges along the way. The evil organization, Team Metal, are trying to capture the legendary pokemon Kyurem! Our heroes have much to learn on this long journey through the Chapaz region.

    Credits

    credit goes to Ant2011 for the whole comic format. ^_^
    credit goes to Gamefreak © for the sprites used in this comic!

    By reading Ant2011's pokemon comic, it inspired me on making this comic:)
    Sorry for not adding graphics to the attacks, i am just a lazy guy D:

    Credit goes to Ant2011 for making Team Metal's sprites:)!!


    Updates:
    6-27-12: In Chapter 3, i messed up on the battling thing D: Will fix further on in the story!
    7-25-12: Comics 5 and beyond will be PNG files.
    10-22-12: Will no longer add the levels to pokemon.
    2-28-16: All comics will be re-uploaded through postimage (#1-27) ASAP


    Comics
    Prologue
    Chapter 1
    Chapter 2
    Chapter 3
    Chapter 4
    Chapter 5
    Chapter 6
    Chapter 7
    Chapter 8
    Chapter 9
    Chapter 10
    Chapter 11
    Chapter 12
    Chapter 13
    Chapter 14
    Chapter 15
    Chapter 16
    Chapter 17
    Chapter 18
    Chapter 19
    Chapter 20
    Chapter 21
    Chapter 22
    Chapter 23
    Chapter 24
    Chapter 25
    Chapter 26
    Chapter 27
    Chapter 28
    Chapter 29
    Chapter 30
    Chapter 31
    Chapter 32
    Chapter 33
    Last edited by Fistodragon; 04-24-2018 at 08:58 AM.

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    Characters:


    =Main Characters=
    =Protagonists=



    Name: Fisto (Real name: Brandon)
    Age: 17
    Gender: Male
    Badges from Chapaz: 2
    Relationships: Silver(Best Friend), Tony (Friend), Elsa (Friend), Jace (Dad)
    Trainer Title: Pokemon Trainer
    Pokemon 1: Ivysaur, Male
    Pokemon 2: Larvitar, Male
    Pokemon 3: Weedle, Male
    Pokemon 4: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
    Pokemon 5: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
    Pokemon 6: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)



    Name: Silver
    Age: 17
    Gender: Male
    Badges from Chapaz: 0
    Relationships: Fisto(Best Friend), Tony (Sensei)
    Trainer Title: Pokemon Trainer
    Pokemon 1: Grovyle, Male
    Pokemon 2: Heracross, Male
    Pokemon 3: Karrablast, Male
    Pokemon 4: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
    Pokemon 5: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
    Pokemon 6: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)



    Name: Elsa
    Age: 16
    Gender: Female
    Badges from Chapaz: ??'
    Relationships: Fisto(Crush)
    Trainer Title: Pokemon Trainer
    Pokemon 1:
    Pokemon 2:
    Pokemon 3:
    Pokemon 4:
    Pokemon 5:
    Pokemon 6:





    Name: Jace
    Age: 34
    Gender: Male
    Badges from Chapaz: ??
    Relationships: Fisto (Father of Fisto), Serenity (Ex Best Friend)
    Trainer Title: 6th Gym Leader
    Pokemon 1: Druddigon, Male
    Pokemon 2:
    Pokemon 3:
    Pokemon 4:
    Pokemon 5:
    Pokemon 6:

    =Antagonists=



    Name: Zol
    Age: ??
    Gender: Male
    Badges from Chapaz: ??
    Relationships: ??
    Trainer Title: Team Metal's Elite Member
    Pokemon 1:
    Pokemon 2:
    Pokemon 3: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
    Pokemon 4: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
    Pokemon 5: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)
    Pokemon 6: (species, nickname(if it has one), and gender)



    Name: Serenity
    Age: 34
    Gender: Female
    Badges from Chapaz: ??
    Relationships: Jace (Ex Best Friend)
    Trainer Title: Leader of Team Metal
    Pokemon 1: Giratina
    Pokemon 2: Ninetails, Female
    Pokemon 3:
    Pokemon 4:
    Pokemon 5:
    Pokemon 6:



    Name: Zyon
    Age: 23
    Gender: Male
    Badges from Chapaz: 8
    Relationships: ??
    Trainer Title: Pokemon Hunter
    Pokemon 1: Blaziken, Male
    Pokemon 2:
    Pokemon 3:
    Pokemon 4:
    Pokemon 5:
    Pokemon 6:
    Last edited by Fistodragon; 01-11-2018 at 09:27 AM.

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    Guest Stars



    Name: Arrow
    Age: 24
    Gender: Female
    Pokemon 1: Jolten
    Pokemon 2: Houndoom
    Pokemon 3: Flygon
    Pokemon 4: Lapras
    Pokemon 5: Mimikyu
    Pokemon 6: Scolipede
    Last edited by Fistodragon; 04-05-2018 at 07:22 AM.

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    xD It's sorta pointless to post a thread if you haven't got a comic yet. Just sayin'.

    ~SF.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Suicune's Fire View Post
    xD It's sorta pointless to post a thread if you haven't got a comic yet. Just sayin'.

    ~SF.

    I already had several done way before this. They'll be up very soon

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    Credit to Ant2011 for Team Metal's sprites!

    Should I use imageshack, photobucket, or tinypic to upload my comics? (I've been using Tinypic)

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    Tinypic seems to work just fine. I haven't had any problems with it. As for the comic I think it's great and I can't wait for more.
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    Chapter 16 has now been edited in!

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    I'm guessing you're new to comics. :] Imma give you some tips.

    1. You've linked us to the tinypic website instead of the actual individual comics' URLs. It's unnecessary to link us there because it loads up the rest of the site and takes forever to show the image, PLUS you have to right-click and go "view image" to actually see the whole comic in full view. Instead, go to the left of the page where you see "direct link" and link us to THAT URL. So, link us to this, not this. Make sense?
    2. Instead of just having links in the first post, every time you post a new comic page, try posting the image for us to see using image tags inside spoiler tags. You could post them without spoiler tags, but if the image dimensions are big, then it'll likely take up a lot of the screen. For example:
    Spoiler:

    3. Your pokemon battles are a little bland, and you don't have anything like animation sprites (I don't mean ones that move) such as in the games. As in, no leaves or vines, or tackle icons or anything. You could put these in to spice up your battles a little.
    4. In one of the first comics, the two boys race each other to the next town over, and yet they don't know what the name of the town is. One of them thinks he "might" have heard about it on TV once... How can they not know about the next town over? xD Have they never gone for a drive with their family? Have they never left their towns in their lives? It seems unlikely and a little absurd. The point of me telling you this is to keep you aware that even with comics, you have to go deeper than the games or the anime. It needs to be engaging for people to continue to read, and you have to think about things on a deeper level.

    As for the comic itself, good luck with it. :] I hope my tips help you!


    ~SF.

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