Quote Originally Posted by Neo Emolga View Post
Daaaaang, look at that improvement in the remake! See, that's how it's done!

Again, I love the humor, the personalities, the character expressions, and they all have a great and meaningful moral to the story. You should definitely post these on ComicFury, I think these would be very popular over there!
Quote Originally Posted by Chakramaster View Post
Man it's crazy looking back isn't it? Reworking something and seeing just how much you've improved over the years. Incredible work dude!

Always do love seeing Gible make his return in these. Rework or new.
Quote Originally Posted by Noblejanobii View Post
Wow look at that improvement!! This is great! Definitely second posting these on ComicFury I'm sure they'd love it
Whats ComicFury?

Thank you all for the feedback. Honestly how you all responded is exactly what I was thinking looking at the two next to each other. Im also trying to tone down on the written dialog. Ive read that to much of it can make people lose interest so Im hoping to find creative ways to leave some panals open and have them explain themselves.


I added Gible into this version messing around in the back which turned out okay. I wanted to make it more clear that this wasn't just a story he made up and make him more apart of the experience in his own way. Also I put a couple of Easter Eggs in this comic. If you like those kinds of things let me know if you see them @Pokemon Trainer Sarah