Pokémon: When Everything's Made to Be Broken (PG)

[Kentucky Fried Torchic]

@Kentucky Fried Torchic Thank you for sharing this short story! Once again, I really enjoyed reading it. I love the connection you made between Ash and Eagun! They both have a Pikachu, and Rui does look a lot like Misty too. Plus, your writing style beautifully balances descriptions and conversations!

Thank you again for taking the time and leave some thoughts on my story! I had the idea of Eagun and Belluh being Ash and Misty way back when I first played Pokémon Colosseum and I think if you squint it can still work. I am very happy that you thought that the dialogue and descriptions were well-balanced! Since the story is mainly a conversation I had to think about ways to break up the dialogue in different ways.