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I DID LOVE IT IT WAS GREAT!!!
I like that you realised while you were writing. C: It's cool when spur-of-the-moment small details like that come up!

Yes it was great! C:

AWESOME. I think you portray it very well. ^-^ The way they are in tune with each other is super sweet to see!

THE SCREAMING.

I love that so much!!! Worldbuilding is one of my favourite things. C: And yes that's so true! EXACTLY! And yep, wild pokemon are a different story altogether. XD No worries!
Yes, I love those little moments. <:

Yay! *0*

THAT'S GOOD I'M GLAD I CAN DO IT WELL!

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SAME I LOVE WORLDBUILDING. And yeah, much more harsh survival there. O:


Of course not! And it's rare that we get the carnivore perspective, especially the internal conflict and empathetic aspect. THAT'S SO TRUE. I mean, yanmega's pokedex entry literally says it flies by and bites the heads of its prey. XD So like...that's terrifying.

Yes! 8D And I love that theme so much! And that even Thunder learns and understands that eventually. <: Exactly, and we are even shamed for relying on others, even if it just shame from ourselves. THANK YOU! I'm glad.

HEAD NUDGE IS CUTEST. CCCCCCC:

Yeah exactly! So many journeys for Yenn lately. C:

HONESTLY SCY.
It is! And I definitely wanted to give that some attention because it is like...just survival, not like (most) pokemon want to go around murdering others. AND YES! And bites the heads apart. The pokedex entries talk about jaw power a lot and I think that's something most people don't think of. XD

I'm glad! <: YES EXACTLY! And yeah, there's so much of a "figure it out yourself" attitude and just this general "everyone for themself" thing..it's so dumb. DX And yay! c:

IT IS! * 00000000 *

MANY JOURNEYS.

XDDD


YAY!!! Oh my gosh same. XD So much fun. <: And yes, exactly. THEY REALLY DO!

Yes! CC: Exactly, and he's probably going to have more ups and downs still! EXACTLY. Having those hate lenses removed must be very jarring, too. (XDDDDDDDDD Mr Vaporeon...) Very true. You really captured the fear he felt when he thought that everyone was against him. D: I hope he gets some comfort knowing that the vast majority of people and pokemon would have no idea what they really do behind closed doors to the experiment victims. At least then it's ignorance, rather than condoning of horrible actions.

Yes! Well you did it really well! Yeah totally. To everyone else it must have been quite scary to see a yanmega freaking out, when in reality, he was the most afraid of them all. ;n;

I really did! Oh yes, that's right! Because he had been too afraid/hesitant to bring it up before. :c And I could also understand not wanting to voice your trauma in case someone invalidates how bad it was or can't understand his perspective, which I'm sure he'd have been afraid of. D: AWW DAMIAN. XD That's sweet. And yeah...it is hard to know what to say in these situations. And yes! O:

Mr Vaporeon... XD I love that perspective! OOO: And yes true...especially given that this was probably a rhetoric reinforced to him DURING the experiments (if they spoke at all, you like, like "this is for your own good" / "we know what we're doing" etc). Or if not spoken, he might have assumed that's how they thought based on how they treated him and other victims. I really like that you showed his reality like that! It made it more powerful, too. <:

YES I REALLY DID! Oh that's so true. O: I imagine most of Mausk's (I still want to call him "Master" XD) pokemon would have reacted like that, most notably the ones who didn't make it. DX And I think the fact that it came from Thunder, who has SO MUCH experience with what Yenn is dealing with (broadly), and Arien, who is normally regarded as kinda cold and practical, made it have that much more impact. Like, if even THEY are speaking up, Yenn must KNOW it's genuine, even if he hasn't known them for long. Oooh yes Damian's past has me intrigued! And yes, exactly. A better support network. C:

I REALLY DID! .000000. EXACTLY. I'm glad you have your priorities straight. cx
Yes it is. XDDDDD BIGLY!

He definitely will! This is such a HUGE difference from the things he thought while in Mr. Vaporeon's army! (Yes. c:<) I'm bigly glad I could! O: And yeah, there was no way those people (the average/ordinary people) could have known, but of course Yenn had no way of knowing that in the moment and thus saw them as enemies/threats.

I'm glad! *0* And yeah, definitely! I don't imagine it's very common for a trainer pokemon to react like that (especially in a crowded place) and especially a big/potentially dangerous one of that sort. But yep exactly. ;0;

Yes! O: This is the first time he's actually spoken of any real details. O: And yep, that's definitely part of the reason. ;0; AND YES. C: Yes it bigly is, especially if you are already awkward. XD

YEP. XD And yay I'm glad! And you'll definitely see more of what it was like at the lab (I plan to write a short story about it) and what/how much he knew during all that! <: I'm BIGLY glad it was powerful!

YAAAAAAAAAY .0. And yep, it was a common thing especially with the ones that didn't make the cut. :c So you're spot on there! And yes, that's exactly what I wanted to portray! OOOOOO: Exactly! *0* And yes! O:~ * mystery intensifies * Yep, and a better environment too! Now Ashend and Itora just need to get to a safe place...

YAY! And don't worry I know this story is nothing compared to the grass quest!