Panel Layout: Panel One takes up the whole first row of the page and about 25% of the page in general.
Panels Two and Three occupy the next 25% of the page and Panel Three is just a tiny bit bigger than Two (mainly because there's more speech involved).
Panel Four takes a little less than half of the "third row" And Panel Five is mainly a quick, small box to insinuate that Miles heading out of his house is just a quick transition.
Panel Six takes up the remainder of the page, and isn't so much a panel but more as the background of the entire page itself (where it looks like all the other panels on lying on top of it).
Panel One
The morning sun is shining upon a Furret named Miles that is using several old and battered towels as his bed. The light is landing on his face and he is slowly waking. The rest of the concrete room is dirty and worn down and a nearby metal chair has fallen apart.
Panel Two
Miles yawns as he tosses the old towels aside, looking refreshed to begin a new day as the morning light now shines upon him. His fur is a little frizzled.
MILES: Oh wow, morning already!
Panel Three
Miles is seen brushing and grooming himself off while his bedding and towels lay scattered around him. He's smiling and has a very optimistic outlook on today. The reader can easily tell this is a very happy-go-lucky Pokémon who takes pride in his work.
MILES: Well, better get going! I'm sure there will be plenty of new rescue jobs today! Sure don't want to miss out on those!
Panel Four
The view falls upon an old table with Miles's belongings. His trusty black pouch is there, along with a worn metallic canteen, a red scarf, an Escape Orb, and a somewhat aged Oran Berry. Miles is out of view, but his shadow falls upon the old table as his looks over his supplies and belongings.
MILES: Ha, good thing I packed most of my stuff last night! So much of the rest of the crew depends on me to be prepared!
Panel Five
Miles is seen now wearing his trusty pouch, canteen, and his red scarf is being worn as a bandana. His other paw is being used to push the old metal door with broken windows open and more morning sunlight is pouring into the old room that is Miles's home. Miles is cheerful and ready to head out into the world to embrace a new day of rescue adventures and helping other Pokémon.
Panel Six
Miles is seen exiting his tiny house. However, the reader immediately sees in this last panel that Miles's house is in fact what used to be a mechanic's garage. As he steps out, the morning light is seen being cast upon a massive city in ruins. Shells of buildings and empty streets with burnt-out and overturned cars are all around him. A traffic light lies twisted on the ground and the streets are cracked, cratered, and broken apart. A nearby billboard is also half-burnt while the other half is an advertisement for S.S. Anne luxury cruises. In the background, rows upon rows of buildings lie collapsed, blown out, and in ruins for as far as the eye can see into the distance.
MILES: Definitely a fine day for adventure!
VISUAL LAYOUT
The intention here is the trick and mislead the reader into first thinking this is probably just another typical run-of-the-mill Pokémon Mystery Dungeon comic starring just another typical cheery character. Panels One through Five are meant to keep the big twist hidden and to keep playing on this illusion by not revealing too much about the big reveal in Panel Six. Limited artwork details of the background are provided in these first five panels and it can be easily assumed Miles the Furret is probably just an average Pokémon in whatever PMD world he's in where there's very limited technology, very akin to the PMD games and other typical PMD formats.
Panel Six is there to completely blow the mind of the reader that this comic totally does NOT take place in an easily-assumed PMD world setting, but instead in a ravaged, post-apocalyptic Vermillion City, Kanto where suddenly everything the humans created from buildings, cars, and other pieces of civilization are in ruins. Suddenly the reader's opinion of Miles changes drastically and they really begin to question how could any Pokémon be totally cozy with human civilization being completely ravaged?
This is the kind of introductory page that would cause the reader to conjure up all sorts of questions. How did this happen, what are the Pokémon of Kanto doing now, and why is Miles so carefree about what happened? Is Miles just heartless or did the humans do something that merited this kind of lack of empathy to the point where Miles feels no concern or remorse for what likely ended countless human lives? It's the kind of hook that would nab the reader's attention and get them to keep reading to answer all these questions.
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