Pardon the delays in judging. I've moved all the individual critiques into one post at the bottom of the previous page to reduce the clutter. Y'all did great- scripting is no easy feat!
As for scores, I graded each person individually based on the criteria given: Story, Originality, Characters, Organization, and Scope. Each individual score could go up to 500, meaning 100 points per grading criteria. For final points awarded to each member/team, I will add up the total score of ALL participants and dish out a percentage of the 100 points for the round based on those numbers.
Thanks for participating- it's been a lot of fun reading through these!
K'sariya
- Story: 90
- Originality: 80
- Character: 90
- Organization: 100
- Scope: 90
Total: 450
Your script was very detailed and easy to follow. The story overall was solid and in the span of just a few panels you were able to tell us a lot about the character. Great job!
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NobleJanobii
- Story: 80
- Originality: 80
- Character: 70
- Organization: 80
- Scope: 70
Total: 380
Overall your script was fairly strong! You lost points on character since I really didn't learn much about either character other that they're running from people. Lost points on scope for writing a script that couldn't reasonably fit on a single comic page. That aside- it was all pretty solid! Great job!
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Neo Emolga
- Story: 90
- Originality: 90
- Character: 100
- Organization: 90
- Scope: 90
Total: 460
At first I was just "Why is this character so cheery." I was going to take points off for the cheesiness until the last panel reveal made it all worth it. Wonderful twist! Just watch your paneling- it's within scope but for maximum effect you need to take full advantage of your page space.
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VeloJello
- Story: 90
- Originality: 80
- Character: 90
- Organization: 70
- Scope: 100
Total: 430
You really went all out in this one! Scope wise, I can easily see how the panels would all fit. Just watch your formatting a bit.
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Arnisd
- Story: 80
- Originality: 80
- Character: 80
- Organization: 50
- Scope: 70
Total: 360
The story was cute and well thought out! Just be sure to make your script clear and concise so that anyone could easily read it and make a page from it.
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evanfardreamer
- Story: 70
- Originality: 70
- Character: 50
- Organization: 30
- Scope: 90
Total: 310
Overall an interesting premise- but I find myself wanting more out of the page. You'd be surprised how much information you could squeeze into a single comic page. And of course- watch the organization. Good job though!
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Coru
- Story: 70
- Originality: 70
- Character: 70
- Organization: 80
- Scope: 90
Total: 400
Interesting premise but I find myself wanting to know more about the MC before throwing her into a situation like this. There's a lot you can tell about a character just through visuals. It does seem like a cut out of a larger story and that might be what hurts this- we don't have the background information on what's going on. Overall it was interesting and well put together though!
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Shruikan
- Story: 100
- Originality: 90
- Character: 100
- Organization: 90
- Scope: 100
Total: 480
Your story was simple and funny. It's hard to fit a story in one page and have it all tie up neatly with a bow at the end without feeling rushed. You were very good at setting your character. Incredible job!
Point Distribution
Total: 3250
K'sariya: 450/3250 = 14 points
NobleJanobii: 380/3250 = 12 points
Neo Emolga: 460/3250 = 14 points
VeloJello: 430/3250 = 13 points
Arnisd: 360/3250 = 11 points
evanfardreamer: 310 = 9 points
Coru: 380/3250 = 12 points
Shruikan: 480 = 15 points
Values were rounded up/down as needed to ensure beautiful whole numbers were present.
Points by Team
Avalon Apostles: 68 Points
The Sabotage Squadron: 23 Points
The Order of the Sun: 9 Points
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Just a reminder that Challenge #2 is up on the first page!
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