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BULBASAUR THIS IS THE CUTEST PIECE OF PROSE EVER. I really liked the way you wrote it, and the message at the end. xD I love the idea of someone being lost and confused, needing that one thing to keep them going.
Great structure; I'm not too knowledgeable about poetry so I can't really give proper critique, but I would question the rhyming compatibility of "other" and "tougher." It sort of rhymes, but something stands out about it that makes me think it doesn't rhyme properly. xD
Anyways, I'm a little horrified at myself for taking this long to read one poem, but there's my input. :] I'd like to see more!
~SF.
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