Originally Posted by
Ghostwriter
Ooh I love The Lady Hel, it sounds like it came out of the Poetic Edda itself. I love the stylized words, they somehow brought the poem out in a way I cannot comprehend (probably because I've never explored such styles) nor describe. Also, I think there's an "in" missing in the line "Dwelling the shadows". I could be wrong, though. I like how the persona doesn't fear Hel, but fears death - the door to her realm. I'm not sure if the irony was intentional but it reinforced this never-to-be satiated longing. Or I'm just over-analyzing. XD
Hope to see more~ (I've actually been haunting this thread but only mustered enough courage to post lol xD)
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