Pokemon Alpha

**Liokora** · 04-25-2017, 06:56 PM

Originally Posted by Suicune's Fire

SORRY LIO. ;~; Been very busy lately! But there were no errors so well done. :D Nothing to correct, hehe. I love the page! Battles are my favourite. >:33 GO GRIMM!

No worries at all! :D Your IRL is most important *^* And yay ! Finally a battle :3

**Liokora** · 04-30-2017, 10:24 PM

Page 27

Awww Grimm (･д･) -- Sorry if there is typos! I will correct when Suicune's fire will be there! :D

@Suicune's Fire
@Neo Emolga
@Chibi Altaria
@Noblejanobii
@ShadowBolt25
@Cleobel

**Neo Emolga** · 04-30-2017, 10:59 PM

DON'T GIVE UP NOW, GRIMM! THIS ISN'T EVEN YOUR FINAL FORM!

Everything looks extremely good, but I did find a few grammar errors.

"She have to think more" - Maybe "she has to think about this more."

"She doesn't worth it" - Maybe "it isn't worth it" (knowing how much of a snob Sonia is).

Besides those two minor things, everything is seriously awesome. :3

**Suicune's Fire** · 05-01-2017, 07:48 AM

Great new page, Lio! :D Sorry I'm late to respond again with corrections although Neo seemed to have covered most of it. xD

Grimm, don't give up! :c Why did you have go to and wake up Arrow-Jolteon earlier? ;A; Awesome page. C:

**Liokora** · 05-01-2017, 08:45 AM

@Neo Emolga : Ahah yeah !! It's not even his final form! >o< I was playing World of Final Fantasy last time (omg this game is so much pokemon-like xD) and beating the final boss.. multiples times and it was like he was telling me "IT'S NOT OVER!! IT'S NOT EVEN MY FINAL FORM" ahah xD
@Suicune's Fire : Grimm was too curious!! xD He touched something he wouldn't this time ; ;

And thanks both of you for corrections! It's all done :D

**Cleobel** · 05-01-2017, 10:06 AM

Great page, @Liokora! Grimm, I hope your courage will pull you through!

**Liokora** · 05-07-2017, 08:24 PM

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Well.. infortunatly, we'll let Grimm rest for a while! Let's hope Maka will do the job hehe :p

@Suicune's Fire
@Neo Emolga
@Chibi Altaria
@Noblejanobii
@ShadowBolt25
@Cleobel

**Neo Emolga** · 05-07-2017, 08:36 PM

Maka looked like she was enjoying a nice nap and then all this started to happen! I'm probably going to feel like that come Monday morning tomorrow. XD

Maybe I should use a Sand Attack also. XD