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09-03-2016, 03:21 AM
#1151
Cheers and good times!

Originally Posted by
N7
It is perfect.
Cool, glad you agree!
Enjoy, however you'd like to use it. :D
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09-03-2016, 03:26 AM
#1152
The Queen of Shaymin

Yeah the origin story is Madder's story for his first debut. It was originally much different but I think this will work out much nicer.
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09-03-2016, 03:46 AM
#1153
HIS TUFFNESS
Origin stories...i need to work on less depressing ones, i think too dark. I have been hanging around too many Ghost types.
·»Your focus determines your reality«·
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09-03-2016, 03:49 AM
#1154
The Queen of Shaymin

I mean, I'm not saying this one isn't still depressing. It's essentially the origin story of Jack the Ripper, so it has to have a darker tone to it. Just the original plan for it did not work really as well as I wanted it to. This works out better and explains more that I want to be explained.
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09-03-2016, 03:53 AM
#1155
HIS TUFFNESS
If it is slightly depressing, i will definitely read it.
*claims the forum once again*
·»Your focus determines your reality«·
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09-03-2016, 03:57 AM
#1156
The Queen of Shaymin

I mean it will be the final piece in a trilogy (though I'm considering rewriting the first piece), and the second piece is really... eh it's bad but not like bad as in the writing is bad, but like bad in the sense that its just something I never imagined myself being able to write.
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09-03-2016, 04:15 AM
#1157
your turn to roll
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09-03-2016, 04:18 AM
#1158
HIS TUFFNESS
·»Your focus determines your reality«·
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09-03-2016, 04:25 AM
#1159
The Queen of Shaymin

Flareons don't meow. What is this madness?
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09-03-2016, 04:27 AM
#1160
HIS TUFFNESS
But flareons are cats! Why is my iPad recommending me FlareonFlareon as a word!?
·»Your focus determines your reality«·
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