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    Quote Originally Posted by Noblejanobii View Post
    I mean I guess, but it's just... shopping. Eth. Making this scene as brief as possible. PLEASE END MY TORTURE.
    Have something wild and crazy happen. I mean, I don't know what kind of story you're going with, but I feel that if you seem bored writing it, people will feel bored reading it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Neo Emolga View Post
    Have something wild and crazy happen. I mean, I don't know what kind of story you're going with, but I feel that if you seem bored writing it, people will feel bored reading it.
    It's because I dread shopping that I find it boring. Don't worry. I just needed this to happen for two reasons. 1) Costume change/expositional explanation, and 2) showing why the angels are seen as such a threat in xokhafel society. I saw the complaint that the only threat was their snootiness and decided to take it up a notch by doing what any sensible author trying to show why a species should be seen as a threat. PUBLIC MURDER!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Noblejanobii View Post
    It's because I dread shopping that I find it boring. Don't worry. I just needed this to happen for two reasons. 1) Costume change/expositional explanation, and 2) showing why the angels are seen as such a threat in xokhafel society. I saw the complaint that the only threat was their snootiness and decided to take it up a notch by doing what any sensible author trying to show why a species should be seen as a threat. PUBLIC MURDER!
    Well, since all the angels prominently shown in your previous entry turned out to secretly be good... And all had good intentions... Seeing a bit more of why they're feared might be nice...

    In other news that escalated quickly.

    hnnnn, i want to post something in the rp... but i'm OUT of ideas as to interesting non-fillery things my characters can do today
    maybe i should've hung around the arena a little longer
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    Quote Originally Posted by LKWayvern View Post
    Well, since all the angels prominently shown in your previous entry turned out to secretly be good... And all had good intentions... Seeing a bit more of why they're feared might be nice...

    In other news that escalated quickly.

    hnnnn, i want to post something in the rp... but i'm OUT of ideas as to interesting non-fillery things my characters can do today
    maybe i should've hung around the arena a little longer
    Oh trust me. Other than the two main angel characters, Rox and Araxie, all of the angels in this story are complete and utter *******s. You don't get to see too too much of them just because once again the angels really aren't the main focus of the story here but you get to hear about the true reason why Noah's flood happened and stuff like that. Ah yeah that's the other thing. To answer your question, yes these are the angels from the Bible, or rather the angels mentioned in the Bible are based on these guys. It's somewhat touched on by Mikey during the course of the story but pretty much these guys are the ones that inspired the Bible and made sure all accounts were as flattering to them as possible.

    Hm… you could have Laura react to the happenings in the arena. Or she could encounter Masamune if you'd like. Get more points in RPer interactions.
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