Quote Originally Posted by Pokemon Trainer Sarah View Post
Wow this is really good! I really enjoyed reading it. :) Your characters are so interesting. It's cool that even your Pokemon have really well developed personalities. And I also enjoyed learning more about what happened in Emerald.

I really love the small moments like Jacob dreaming of Phoebe leaning on him and waking to find Sophie doing the same thing. And also the last few lines at the very end. You have a real talent for this sort of thing. I could totally see this is a movie or something. Thanks for the great read!
Thanks Sarah! I never really noticed it until you said it, but I tend to write this as if it is a movie going on in my head, hence why I tend to skip over details such as travelling etc.

Fun fact: the original idea didn't include Sophie. Then I decided to do it to allow for more character building and development. Even then I didn't plan for Sophie to meet the fate she did. It wasn't until I was driving with a mate and telling him about it and he said "You should kill off the daughter". At first I was horrified but then thought about it and figured she'd cease to exist anyway.

Thanks again haha I am glad someone actually read it. I figured the length is enough to turn people off.