Through the Eyes of a Flareon [PG] (Chapter 31 FINALLY up)

[Dragon Master Mike]

OK. I finally read the whole thing!

I really liked it. I started to like it a little less towards the end, but I don't think that was because of anything you did to make it not as good. I think part of it is that I kinda want them to get out of the caves and for another major plot event to happen. Overall though, It was really good. You put an insane amount of detail into this, and I can't believe how long the chapters are! That part towards the end with the water, your description made me cringe just thinking about what that water must have smelled like, and then the fact that they all fell in!

I think I can summarize my review for the story in two words: Write more.