Phew, finally got around to reading chapter 2! :D Sorry it took forever, but crazy life stuff happened, and it was crazy. STILL, great read (despite not much happening xD But hey, it really built up the suspense. I feel like you're dangling plot in front of me like a carrot in front of a rabbit xD) The descriptions were beautiful, as ever--the way you described the camp fire was poetic, really ^^ I'm also liking Dusty's personality as well--she doth be spunky and rash, and I look forward to the adventures to follow. :D