Huzzah! Giratina is here! :D And your writing is as clever and witty as ever! ^^ (so don't worry 'bout it, hun ;) PXR will be more than happy to have your works here!)

I noticed one small typo when I read this a while back... but now I can't find it Dx It was a place where you left out the "H" in e, and it was at the beginning of a sentence somewhere... Argh, well, I'll find it xD But besides that, I really enjoyed reading! ^^ Now, is this story kind of your perspective on what the "gray" version of black and white would have been? I just thought it was interesting that it sounds a little like it's from Black and White 2, but starting off in Nuvema? Seriously, I'm really intrigued. Lookin' forward to seeing how this unfolds! ^^