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    Thanks for taking the time to type all of this Charmander! It helped me a lot, I think I have some infos on how he will develop in my story. Thanks a lot! You're a life saver :3

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    "Checking the roof's" is incorrect. O: Should be "checking the roofs." NO APOSTROPHE, GOSH!

    Hey Sabi, if you want, I could try to help you with description. Sometimes I go overboard with it. XDD I dunno, if you feel like you need help or something.

    ~SF.

    EDIT: LOL, has anyone ever thought that "roof" and "roofs" were funny words? XD The fact that they have Two Os...ahaha... ROOFS! It's like a nickname for "Rufus." XD ROOFS!
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    A writer's guild? Count me in! Might motivate me to work the muses again. :3

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    Welcome Gaby! And if there's someone who's bad at description, it's me.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vegeta View Post
    Thanks for taking the time to type all of this Charmander! It helped me a lot, I think I have some infos on how he will develop in my story. Thanks a lot! You're a life saver :3
    Hey, no probs! :D I'm glad it helped! ^^

    Quote Originally Posted by Sanctus View Post
    Ah, I didn't think about that. Probably because when I hear about buildings and explosions and clean-up duty in Megaman, I instantly get a mental image based on the games. Good point though.

    I've looked over some of it again. Sabi wrote:

    "Axl immediately went into hover mode and started checking the roof's and higher levels of any buildings he came across, as X went to the ground and middle floors while Zero took any basements."

    Maybe what's missing is some detail on how numerous these left-over structures are? Also, how tall are they? Are there any dome buildings and skyscrapers? What do they see in the distance? Sabi also wrote that X had to turn his head from maverick bodies. How many were there, and what kinds?

    Char, I'll probably watch the lecture in full tonight and tell you what I think. I've watched some of it already and found it helpful. Thanks for sharing. :]
    My big thing is I wasn't sure what kind of a building it was--was it, like, an apartment? Was it futuristic? Was is from the Bronx? I wasn't sure, since I hadn't played those games before xD

    But anyway, I'm glad you found that informative ^^ That channel has plenty other good advice too, for plots, settings, and so forth ^^ It's been really helpful to me, personally xD

    Quote Originally Posted by Saraibre Ryu View Post
    *flails* y u people copy paste part of my fan fic aaaaahhhh *hides*

    Anyway, I hope that my descriptiveness got a bit better as time went on. It was written over a looong period of time. I shall try to improve upon my descriptive skills.

    In other news, I got past a character design bump and have official artwork of something now. YAY.
    YAY--you share? :D Cuz visuals would help a Megaman noob like me xD


    Quote Originally Posted by Suicune's Fire View Post
    "Checking the roof's" is incorrect. O: Should be "checking the roofs." NO APOSTROPHE, GOSH!

    Hey Sabi, if you want, I could try to help you with description. Sometimes I go overboard with it. XDD I dunno, if you feel like you need help or something.

    ~SF.

    EDIT: LOL, has anyone ever thought that "roof" and "roofs" were funny words? XD The fact that they have Two Os...ahaha... ROOFS! It's like a nickname for "Rufus." XD ROOFS!
    Haha, you're awesome at grammar--I would have never noticed that xD

    And you're right--roofs is a weird word... What's also a weird word is awkward. Two "w" placed awkwardly next to each other. Talk about awkward. Anyway xD

    Quote Originally Posted by Gaby View Post
    A writer's guild? Count me in! Might motivate me to work the muses again. :3
    Gaby! I remember you from Pe2k but I don't think we ever talked to each other xD ANYWAYS WELCOME TO THE CRAZY CRIB AND STUFFS :D New members are required to talk about projects.

    Oh, which I forgot to tell Grace and Vegeta--although Vegeta, you mentioned that you were doing Sci-fi--what kind of sci-fi? ^^




    Quote Originally Posted by Vegeta View Post
    Welcome Gaby! And if there's someone who's bad at description, it's me.

    I feel like I've really regressed with my description xD I think it's because I got into the "write it all out first, then edit" mode with these stories. THANKS NANOWRIMO YOU RUINED ME


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    Quote Originally Posted by Charmander009 View Post
    YAY--you share? :D Cuz visuals would help a Megaman noob like me xD
    First thing to know about Megaman is that there are different - as myself and my girlfriend put it - 'species' of Megaman. Classic Megaman, Megaman X, Megaman Zero, Megaman ZX, Megaman Volnutt, Megaman .EXE, Megaman Starforce etc. They are all very different and the only ones that really relate to each other are Classic, X, Zero and some of ZX. All the other ones are fairly separate to themselves as far as I know. Each have their own notable art styles as well.

    ANYWAY. Confusing things aside, the one I'm focusing on right now is the X series because its probably my favorite out of my top three. I try to stick to the art style as much as possible [even though how I draw things keeps changing over time like a bipolar maniac] when I make the fan characters, though I might bend some rules here and there.

    If you'd like to see all my other designs of the original characters I made for the fic , I can upload the designs and post them here. Since you've all at least read the first chapter, I can give you what one looks like now that I've updated her look.

    But wait, the fic said she was dark blue and didn't mention a gem on her helmet and such! INCONSISTENCIES.

    Yes, I did say her body was a dark blue and her armor was a silvery colour. Any inconsistencies with her original mention of her appearance and this one are entirely on purpose. Why? Spoilers people, those are spoilers. Is surprise. I'm mean I like to leave people hanging.

    You could say I'm...
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    Because there are many kinds of sci-fi? Idk I'm a little new at these. Anyways, mine is between sci-fi and reality. Not too unbelievable but not too ordinary either.

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    XD Thanks, Char! It speaks to me...it really speaks to me.

    LOOOOOOOOOOOOL SABI THAT'S SO FUNNY I LOVE IT.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vegeta View Post
    Welcome Gaby! And if there's someone who's bad at description, it's me.
    Thank you yet again good sir. vuv

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    Gaby! I remember you from Pe2k but I don't think we ever talked to each other xD ANYWAYS WELCOME TO THE CRAZY CRIB AND STUFFS :D New members are required to talk about projects.
    Nope, I don't believe we did. :P But I do remember seeing you, I think! And I've been so busy and my muse has been shriveled up so much that I haven't thought of any projects. :C Does possibly starting up an RP with a friend count as a project? :B

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    That sounds interesting Char. Though I know you've mentioned magic, but what time setting are you planning on having it in? Typical medieval type, more modern or something else entirely? I find what's capable of being done in the time of the setting [depending on the era etc.] can play into how your villain's roll out.

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