.::The Writer's Guild::.

[XaiakuX]

Like just that very thing. xD I already have a few things up that have to do with wrestling. It's more OC so people don't need to understand wrestling to get it.

I think you and I are going to get along just fine. xD For some reason Pro-wrestling fans, especially of the female variety are hard to come by. o.O

[EmeraldSky]

I'm planning my Y discovery thread/journeyfic "The Kalos Connection"--it's not going to follow the games completely

[FedoraChar]

PPHEW, so many replies to make xD

Hey, there room for another member?

Pssssshhhhh, 'course we do *shoves Suicune's Fire in a closet*

What do you guys do when you use a friends character in your story but then it doesn't go the way you had planned it?

*Insert tiny history lesson here*
I did have another person's character I was using but the person in real life turned out to be a ***** and that's being nice about it coming from me that is. So I said the hell with it I just won't use her ever again. Well in doing so that lost my characters only friend. So that left me with my other friends character but her character is stubborn and isn't easy to let people in. And it seems like no matter what they won't become friends which makes no since seeing as how their husband and soon to be boyfriend are BFF's. I mean I HAD to make another character just so my one wold actually have a friend but I didn't want to have to do that.
*End of history lesson*

So I dono what to do. It kind of makes me not want to write the story anymore.

Hmm... Can't say I've ever had this happen to me. I usually don't use other people's characters :o But isn't there a way you can make changes to the existing character to make them your own?

Kind of annoying. Still researching the FE characters because I haven't liked any of the ways I've tried to begin the story so far, and so to resolve that problem I may introduce them sooner than expected. I'd like for it to start out with a pretty intense action scene and try to get the whole story in microcosm in the first chapter, if possible.

I really just won't be able to arrange this right now. In the near future I may be getting an old computer for my house and some kind of an internet connection. We'll see. :|

FE would do pretty awesome for starting the story with a bang xD *coughAndThat'dMeanICouldReadYourStuffSoonercough*

And ah. Well, we'll see about doing it in the future since no one else has been expressing interest xD

I'm planning my Y discovery thread/journeyfic "The Kalos Connection"--it's not going to follow the games completely

Sounds interesting! ^^ You know, that's a fun idea :D I was thinking about doing something similar with X, but I might just do it through quirky blog posts xD

[EmeraldSky]

Here's what's different from the games (so far):

--Serena is a bit of a Meta Girl (so to speak), so expect some commentary on journey fic cliches, as well as some gentle parody of the Pokeverse itself--games, anime, and manga.
--The Mega Ring is not a bracelet, but a literal ring (Serena's is a ruby) To invoke a Mega evolution, the wearer must sing the mystical spellsong unique to each Mega Ring-so no two Mega Rings will have the same spellsong. (Serena's is Jao wiisha nes chiel com yutuul...)

[FedoraChar]

So it'll be incorporating more fantasy elements--sounds cool :D

[EmeraldSky]

Here's a sneak peek:

It all started...pretty much like any other day, actually.

I made extra sure to wake up early the day I left on my adventure. This way, I wouldn't be lost in the horde of other aspiring trainers that had probably woke up late and hoping to Arceus that they would not be stuck with a Pikachu with a attitude (extra points if they got shocked on the first attempt at picking them up) or some other "unwanted" Pokemon, like an Eevee or a Zorua.

Why would Professor Sycamore give such rare Pokemon out, anyway? Once all the Chespins, Fennekins, and Froagies were gone, they were gone--do not pass Go, do not collect 20,000 credits, better luck next year. If you were REALLY lucky, you could talk him into, oh, a Pikachu (thankfully minus the attitude) or an Eevee, but Pokemon outside Chespin, Fennekin, and Froagie were the exception, not the rule...

What do you think, sirs (and madams)?

[Suicune's Fire]

Omg I hate when people write in quotes because then I can't quote it and have to do the quote code myself. -______- Anyway...

I made extra sure to wake up early the day I left on my adventure.

The phrasing "I made extra sure" sounds sorta odd. Maybe "I tried extra hard to make sure I woke up early" or something?

This way, I wouldn't be lost in the horde of other aspiring trainers that had probably woke up late and hoping to Arceus that they would not be stuck with a Pikachu with a attitude

Should be "woken up" and "an attitude." Should also be "who" instead of "that" because trainers are people, not objects. In that sentence, "and hoping" doesn't really work there. Probably "and hoped" would be better.

Once all the Chespins, Fennekins, and Froagies were gone, they were gone--do not pass Go, do not collect 20,000 credits, better luck next year. If you were REALLY lucky, you could talk him into, oh, a Pikachu (thankfully minus the attitude) or an Eevee, but Pokemon outside Chespin, Fennekin, and Froagie were the exception, not the rule...

Should be "froakie," not "froagie."

Other than that, it seemed pretty amusing. XD I'd like to see the rest of this, despite my general disinterest in parodies.


~SF.

[Sanctus]

"Hoping to Arceus" made me smile.

Fair start. Will have to see it in the context of the first chapter to really say much.

[EmeraldSky]

You'll see the first episode once I've started the game and gotten through it a bit

[FedoraChar]

Here's a sneak peek:



What do you think, sirs (and madams)?

Hey, nice start! :D Had to chuckle at the Pikachu part xD