.::The Writer's Guild::.

[FedoraChar]

Thanks for taking the time to type all of this Charmander! It helped me a lot, I think I have some infos on how he will develop in my story. Thanks a lot! You're a life saver :3

Hey, no probs! :D I'm glad it helped! ^^

Ah, I didn't think about that. Probably because when I hear about buildings and explosions and clean-up duty in Megaman, I instantly get a mental image based on the games. Good point though.

I've looked over some of it again. Sabi wrote:

"Axl immediately went into hover mode and started checking the roof's and higher levels of any buildings he came across, as X went to the ground and middle floors while Zero took any basements."

Maybe what's missing is some detail on how numerous these left-over structures are? Also, how tall are they? Are there any dome buildings and skyscrapers? What do they see in the distance? Sabi also wrote that X had to turn his head from maverick bodies. How many were there, and what kinds?

Char, I'll probably watch the lecture in full tonight and tell you what I think. I've watched some of it already and found it helpful. Thanks for sharing. :]

My big thing is I wasn't sure what kind of a building it was--was it, like, an apartment? Was it futuristic? Was is from the Bronx? I wasn't sure, since I hadn't played those games before xD

But anyway, I'm glad you found that informative ^^ That channel has plenty other good advice too, for plots, settings, and so forth ^^ It's been really helpful to me, personally xD

*flails* y u people copy paste part of my fan fic aaaaahhhh *hides*

Anyway, I hope that my descriptiveness got a bit better as time went on. It was written over a looong period of time. I shall try to improve upon my descriptive skills.

In other news, I got past a character design bump and have official artwork of something now. YAY.

YAY--you share? :D Cuz visuals would help a Megaman noob like me xD

"Checking the roof's" is incorrect. O: Should be "checking the roofs." NO APOSTROPHE, GOSH!

Hey Sabi, if you want, I could try to help you with description. Sometimes I go overboard with it. XDD I dunno, if you feel like you need help or something.

~SF.

EDIT: LOL, has anyone ever thought that "roof" and "roofs" were funny words? XD The fact that they have Two Os...ahaha... ROOFS! It's like a nickname for "Rufus." XD ROOFS!

Haha, you're awesome at grammar--I would have never noticed that xD

And you're right--roofs is a weird word... What's also a weird word is awkward. Two "w" placed awkwardly next to each other. Talk about awkward. Anyway xD

A writer's guild? Count me in! Might motivate me to work the muses again. :3

Gaby! I remember you from Pe2k but I don't think we ever talked to each other xD ANYWAYS WELCOME TO THE CRAZY CRIB AND STUFFS :D New members are required to talk about projects.

Oh, which I forgot to tell Grace and Vegeta--although Vegeta, you mentioned that you were doing Sci-fi--what kind of sci-fi? ^^

Welcome Gaby! And if there's someone who's bad at description, it's me.

I feel like I've really regressed with my description xD I think it's because I got into the "write it all out first, then edit" mode with these stories. THANKS NANOWRIMO YOU RUINED ME