Ah, I see--plus, lore would flesh out the world
Ah, I see--plus, lore would flesh out the world
Phew, I haven't thought too much about lore at this point--I don't want to get into "world-builder's disease", although crafting a little lore will be fun ^^ There definitely should be some mage lore <3 I imagine with the whole magestone thing going on there's lots of lore stuff I can invent :)
I'm thinking about getting some kind of demon involved with the villain, now. His immortality could be the result of a deal he made with a demon, which bound his soul to his magestone. As long as his stone remains intact, he's practically immortal. Since it's laced with demon magic, the stone can only be destroyed by a "holy" weapon, and the only one the apprentice could find is wielded by a hero named Janden. :D And I've also thought of a way I could deal with the sorcerer in the end, but it all depends on whether I want to have a larger plot in play or no :/
Srsly, I can't decide if I should pull the "bigger bad guy at large" thing xD
@Sanctus: Actually, there is kind of a Mages Guild--although it gets destroyed in the beginning by ebil sorcerer dude xD Orathris, the City of Mages.
BTW, you guys have been way helpful with this ^^ Thanks! :D
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I would go
If it's more comical -- no bigger bad guy at large
If it's more mature -- yay bigger bad guy at large
Obviously you want some comical elements with the main character being kind of ditzy (<3), but you seem like you want to do more a mature story. May not be bad in that case to just opt for another villain.
This whole thing is bringing back fond memories of my Mage, Saruin, in Ragnarok Online. x3
Weeeeell, I would like to do more comical, but... IDK, I feel like there should be something bigger moving the characters along. Maybe I can achieve a balance? (haha, and yay ditsy characters xD)
Maybe I just need to start writing--usually I'm more of a plotter, but I should really just get these ideas on paper xD
And coolio--what's Ragnarok Online?
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Yah, you could figure it out as the plot develops some if you think it's missing something.
What is Ragnarok Online, indeed?
No, it isn't that profound. Just an MMORPG where you can pick your characters classes like Mage, Lord Knight, Paladin, Scholar, etc. It will suck your life.
*late reply*
Ah, Ragnarok's one of those things xD
Soooo, anyway, how's everyone's writing? :) Does anyone want to have a Word War next week to see who can write the most words?
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This group just got more awesome. Because I'm joining it.
A few things, though.
1. Tombi's writing is poopy.
2. Teddiursa of the Sky is better at music than writing.
3. Suicune's Fire is actually a man.
4. None of the above is true. Except for maybe Number 2.
5. Your 5th rule should be "Only XaiakuX is allowed to be awesome."
6. In doing Number 5, you may lose some members who think they're more awesome than I am.
7. No one is more awesome than I am.
Spoiler:
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So I'm actually a pretty good writer, if I put some effort behind it. I remember reading a lot of the URPG stories, as well as the WAR stories on Pe2k, and thinking "Pfft, I can do that."
I mean, not accepting me is clearly blasphemous.. (I THINK BEING AROUND Pe2kFOR 9 YEARS COUNTS FOR SOMETHING!)
... I'm rambling.
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