Ohhh, this was hard. You guys are awesome.

And I really shouldn't be up this late but blah.


The Nonexistent Tazz
The Gracidea Order

Driving Force Rating: A
Written Content Rating: A+
RPer Interactions Rating: A
Activity Level Rating: B+
Formatting, Spelling, and Grammar Rating: A

TOTAL POINTS AWARDED:
15

Your posts rock. Even though Nora doesn't get directly involved with Blood Pit or Dread Metal, you definitely still have her get involved in other ways. The way she lurks behind the scenes in the shadows is impressive. She's observant, cunning, and is definitely an interesting character to watch and follow. While she's surrounded by drunken morons, she's vigilant, but she's not without her addictions and weaknesses. Definitely an impressively realistic and believable character.

Your formatting, activity level, and content are definitely awesome and it was great to see Nora now more in the spotlight getting involved, even if she's not fighting quite yet. Overall, I like what I see and I'd love to see more of it!


Morzone
Steel Scavengers

Driving Force Rating: A+
Written Content Rating: A+
RPer Interactions Rating: A
Activity Level Rating: A+
Formatting, Spelling, and Grammar Rating: A-

TOTAL POINTS AWARDED:
16

I love the way your characters drive. It's exciting! Your posts are definitely very high in the description and you definitely capture the spirit and rush of Dread Metal in them. You also do a great job managing both Julia and Theo and they get a decent share of screen time and action. You were also very active, definitely got involved a lot and interacted well with other RPers (I know I haven't responded yet, but I will very soon!).


LKWayvern
Prankster Platoon

Driving Force Rating: A
Written Content Rating: A+
RPer Interactions Rating: A-
Activity Level Rating: A+
Formatting, Spelling, and Grammar Rating: A

TOTAL POINTS AWARDED:
17

I think the big highlight of your posts can be summed up in one word. REALISM. Xavier's injury and the reaction of his teammates was extremely well-captured. They don't always agree, they argue, things don't work out all the time, and all that points back to that realism. They're very believable characters that want the same thing but disagree on how to get it. There's a whole story going on just between them and I really like what you did with it. Definitely very well captured. Usually most of the time, people have NPCs always agreeing with each other, so this was a very nice touch.

Interactions were definitely very good as well. You had them concerned about Death's character, The Grand Lady, which was a nice touch. They were more concerned about her than even Phoebe of the Black Lotus! I found that to be interesting, but yeah, your posts and your own storyline has a really nice flavor to it. Lastly, activity level was extremely impressive. Four very decent posts with great depth is definitely very good. :D


Velocity
Prankster Platoon

Driving Force Rating: B+
Written Content Rating: A
RPer Interactions Rating: A-
Activity Level Rating: B
Formatting, Spelling, and Grammar Rating: A

TOTAL POINTS AWARDED:
14

I'm sorry but the way you had Jones kill off Rash the Whimsicott was amusing. Rash flips Jones a birdie and it's just crunch time, end of story. XD I'm going to be thinking of that every time someone cuts me off now.

I also like what you did with Mazer. The interactions beween him and Laura were quite good and their take on dealing with the Grand burning Lady was a nice touch. It definitely gives Death's character a lot more depth and that's good interaction even though it's indirect. Overall, I'd definitely say your posts were quite good and I think the only thing holding them back a bit was a tinge bit more on the activity side. But it's still really good nonetheless!


Death's Spook
Steel Scavengers

Driving Force Rating: B+
Written Content Rating: A
RPer Interactions Rating: A-
Activity Level Rating: B+
Formatting, Spelling, and Grammar Rating: A+

TOTAL POINTS AWARDED:
15

The Lady definitely has earned her reputation. XD

The first post this week was a little on the mild side, but you definitely made up for that with the second one which had a LOT more depth and interaction. You also have an interesting take on how much more influential Anthony is. He's quite the conversationalist and you wouldn't really expect that from a Mimikyu, but it's still neat, though.


Chakramaster
Prankster Platoon

Driving Force Rating: D
Written Content Rating: B
RPer Interactions Rating: F
Activity Level Rating: C-
Formatting, Spelling, and Grammar Rating: A-

TOTAL POINTS AWARDED:
7

I like Tina. A Pikachu with an attitude! And an interesting dark side to her as well.

Where you took a hit was not really advancing the storyline and not really getting involved with other RPers. Also, you only had one post for the week. Given, it's definitely improving and I see better progress this week than last week, so that's already a big jump up. Maybe for this week, try getting involve a bit more with another person's character and try to do something with Tina that starts to make a significant impact on Black Lotus or something like that. You're a creative and inventive guy, so I feel you could come up with something cool.

Offhand, Tina reminds me a lot of Arya Stark from Game of Thrones. Hiding something hidden and dangerous, small and underestimated, but oh lordy, be careful!


Noblejanobii
The Gracidea Order

Driving Force Rating: A+
Written Content Rating: A
RPer Interactions Rating: A+
Activity Level Rating: B+
Formatting, Spelling, and Grammar Rating: A+

TOTAL POINTS AWARDED:
16

Going directly right after Black Lotus is definitely high on the driving force. Athena wants Phoebe DEAD and she ain't stopping at anything to do just that! And you sure didn't go light on the rest of the Black Lotus squad either! Your posts were also very descriptive, had great action and emotion, and had plenty of other juicy literary treats as well. Again, you definitely started a kako trend. I think everyone's picked up on using that! XD

Overall, awesome job yet again. Would have been cool to see maybe a third post squeezed in for this week, but I understand, I've been having tricky times doing that also. :P


TOTALS:


Gracidea Order: 31 points
The Nonexistent Tazz - 15
Noblejanobii - 16


Prankster Platoon: 38 points
Velocity - 14
LKWayvern - 17
Chakramaster - 7


Steel Scavengers: 31 points
Death's Spook - 15
Morzone - 16

@Noblejanobii @The Nonexistent Tazz @Death's Spook @Morzone @Velocity @LKWayvern @Chakramaster