This series will be starting up again very soon! School is almost out
Well I promised a few comics when I got out of school but as you can tell....this post is almost a year old now xD As far as getting comics back up on a weekly basis, we'll see. I'll check to see if I have free time tomorrow. NONETHELESS, there should be a comic next week (I PROMISE). I have a job now so time is now cut short. Great to be back~
Funny enough i think i had this comic almost finished for quite some time now lol. I didn't realize i had been gone nearly 2 years (in terms of making comics). I'm hopefully back and will start to pump out more material! I'm going to have some sign-ups for some character ideas in my plot so keep your eyes open.
TLDR; I've been gone for a bit and i got some new stuff happening soon. Here is Chapter 29!
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Nice to see you back, @Fistodragon! I like how in page 28 you have a bunch of pokemon in the background. I think it adds to the scene quite nicely! However, page 29 has a lot of bare space where there could be something even as simple as trees, grass, a pond, or a path. Little details like that keep the reader interested. When the whole square is plain, it's uninteresting, even if there are some things going on. Additionally, it would have been good if, when Silver and Fisto walked closer to the weedle, the "camera" changed so that they were more centered. That way, there's less blank space all around. Having a completely plain square except for three small sprites in the very top corner looks quite empty.
Anyway, keep it up! Just remember, adding a few details makes the entire scene look 1000% times better and will only take you an extra few minutes. The last thing you want is your readers getting bored.
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