Quote Originally Posted by Suicune's Fire View Post
I'm guessing you're new to comics. :] Imma give you some tips.

1. You've linked us to the tinypic website instead of the actual individual comics' URLs. It's unnecessary to link us there because it loads up the rest of the site and takes forever to show the image, PLUS you have to right-click and go "view image" to actually see the whole comic in full view. Instead, go to the left of the page where you see "direct link" and link us to THAT URL. So, link us to this, not this. Make sense?
2. Instead of just having links in the first post, every time you post a new comic page, try posting the image for us to see using image tags inside spoiler tags. You could post them without spoiler tags, but if the image dimensions are big, then it'll likely take up a lot of the screen. For example:
Spoiler:

3. Your pokemon battles are a little bland, and you don't have anything like animation sprites (I don't mean ones that move) such as in the games. As in, no leaves or vines, or tackle icons or anything. You could put these in to spice up your battles a little.
4. In one of the first comics, the two boys race each other to the next town over, and yet they don't know what the name of the town is. One of them thinks he "might" have heard about it on TV once... How can they not know about the next town over? xD Have they never gone for a drive with their family? Have they never left their towns in their lives? It seems unlikely and a little absurd. The point of me telling you this is to keep you aware that even with comics, you have to go deeper than the games or the anime. It needs to be engaging for people to continue to read, and you have to think about things on a deeper level.

As for the comic itself, good luck with it. :] I hope my tips help you!


~SF.
1. I've been using the direct link the whole time! Well, I right clicked the image and clicked "copy image location" and it seems to work.

2. Oh thanks! Never knew how to do that haha

3. Will keep that in mind for future reference.

4. They have been out of the towns when they were younger. When they became older, they mainly stayed in their town playing by the river with pokemon. (Thinking of doing flashback comics later in the story etc etc., basically fillers).