[COMIC]CHAPAZ REGION ~ 1-4 comics a week (Unless something comes up)

**Suicune's Fire** · 01-11-2018, 02:00 PM

Nice to see you back, @Fistodragon! I like how in page 28 you have a bunch of pokemon in the background. I think it adds to the scene quite nicely! However, page 29 has a lot of bare space where there could be something even as simple as trees, grass, a pond, or a path. Little details like that keep the reader interested. When the whole square is plain, it's uninteresting, even if there are some things going on. Additionally, it would have been good if, when Silver and Fisto walked closer to the weedle, the "camera" changed so that they were more centered. That way, there's less blank space all around. Having a completely plain square except for three small sprites in the very top corner looks quite empty.

Anyway, keep it up! Just remember, adding a few details makes the entire scene look 1000% times better and will only take you an extra few minutes. The last thing you want is your readers getting bored.

**Fistodragon** · 01-12-2018, 03:24 AM

Originally Posted by Suicune's Fire

Nice to see you back, @Fistodragon! I like how in page 28 you have a bunch of pokemon in the background. I think it adds to the scene quite nicely! However, page 29 has a lot of bare space where there could be something even as simple as trees, grass, a pond, or a path. Little details like that keep the reader interested. When the whole square is plain, it's uninteresting, even if there are some things going on. Additionally, it would have been good if, when Silver and Fisto walked closer to the weedle, the "camera" changed so that they were more centered. That way, there's less blank space all around. Having a completely plain square except for three small sprites in the very top corner looks quite empty.

Anyway, keep it up! Just remember, adding a few details makes the entire scene look 1000% times better and will only take you an extra few minutes. The last thing you want is your readers getting bored.

haha very true xD I had noticed that the comic was done anyway but i should of just tweaked it more. Noted for page 30!

**Suicune's Fire** · 01-12-2018, 05:13 AM

Originally Posted by Fistodragon

haha very true xD I had noticed that the comic was done anyway but i should of just tweaked it more. Noted for page 30!

It's okay! As long as you take it on board and keep it in mind for next time, that's what matters. And if you need any help with the comic at any time, let me know. :)

**Fistodragon** · 01-13-2018, 04:30 AM

Originally Posted by Suicune's Fire

It's okay! As long as you take it on board and keep it in mind for next time, that's what matters. And if you need any help with the comic at any time, let me know. :)

Noted. Thank you ^_^ Do you happen to have the banner for my comic somewhere? I kinda misplaced it and the photobucket link is expired.

EDIT: Nevermind. Made my own

**Suicune's Fire** · 01-13-2018, 05:49 AM

Originally Posted by Fistodragon

Noted. Thank you ^_^ Do you happen to have the banner for my comic somewhere? I kinda misplaced it and the photobucket link is expired.

EDIT: Nevermind. Made my own

No worries. :D

I think it's lost, unfortunately. :( It's still on my photobucket account but when I click on it, it shows up with that broken image thing. A lot of my other images show up fine so it must be because it's being used somewhere? I don't know haha.

**Fistodragon** · 01-13-2018, 05:52 AM

Originally Posted by Suicune's Fire

No worries. :D

I think it's lost, unfortunately. :( It's still on my photobucket account but when I click on it, it shows up with that broken image thing. A lot of my other images show up fine so it must be because it's being used somewhere? I don't know haha.

It was used on PE2K