Thank you for the feedback. I'm not amazing at writing so it helped find what I need to improve on. The original ending was going to explain the connection with the twins more and explain how their link is also physical so Morty even if she wanted couldn't hurt Addie and it would end in Addie doing something to stop the both of them as what happens to one happens to the other (In terms of injury). I didn't have time to finish tho so might use this story and develop it for fun. :D
Well done everyone! Can't wait for the next brief.