The commotion at home

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Page 1
Panel 1 [Full width of page at the top]: Kelisa, a pink haired teenager, is walking home. The angle is facing her from her front. She has her earphones in and is walking down her street. You can see to the left of her, houses she is walking past, and to the right you can see the road and the front of the houses on the opposite side of the street. On that side of the street you are able to see in the distance a teenager with blue hair. Kelisa is to the middle left of the panel.
Panel 2 [Half width of page]: Kelisa turns into the drive of her house, the shot is from behind her and you can clearly see the door wide open and the windows of her front room smashed.
Panel 3 [Half width of page adjacent to Panel 2] Kelisa enters her house and sees traces blood in her front room and everything knocked on the floor. Her carer, Marcy is nowhere to be seen. The shot is from her shoulder looking into the front room.
At the bottom of panel two and three, centred is a speech bubble saying "Marcy!!!"
Panel 4 [Half width of the page] A shot of Kelisa's panicked face. Her eyes glowing pink. She has a noticeable scar on her left side (Our right) which wasn't noticeable in the previous panels as it was covered with hair but the hair is now windswept.
Panel 5 [Half width of page adjacent to Panel 4 but separated with a lighting bolt shaped separation] A close up of the teenager with blue hair in the background of Panel 1. He looks almost sinisterly calm. You can tell he is also in the house.

Page 2
Panel 6 [Full width of page] The blue haired stranger grabs Kelisa's hand. You can see he has a star shaped tattoo on his wrist. His hold is a lot more tight than Kelisa's is of his hand.
Panel 7 [Full width of page. a lot shorter than Panel 6] A close up of just the eyes for each of them. From this you can still see Kelisa's eyes glowing, but you can see his bright blue eyes and his eyes look emotionless whereas Kelisa's look scared.
Panel 8 [Half width of page]: Kelisa turns to him, shot is from the side of both of them with them both in the frame. In the back is the hallway and the stairs. Kelisa looks terrified and he looks calm. (Speech bubble from Kelisa) "Who are you?! Did you do this? Where's Marcy, I can't sense her!"
Panel 9 [Half width of page adjacent to Panel 8]: This is a shot of just the blue haired stranger from Kelisa's shoulder. As it is in the hallway, in the background you can see a wall with pictures of Kelisa and Marcy, no baby photos however. (Speech bubble from Blue haired stranger) "Kelisa, I can't explain that now. Come with me. I can explain everything, including your powers. You need to trust me."
Final Panel: Just the words "They were looking for you. They will be back" appear across the bottom of the page.


This is just a snippet of an idea for a story I have for a comic. Hopefully it works as it isn't pokemon related. Really looking forward to take this further if future briefs need us to draw it.