[PXFIRE] Comics

[Nekomata]

Challenge #2 is up guys! Once again, I'm so sorry for the delays. I'll get the judging done ASAP so you guys can get constructive feedback on your scripts. Due to the nature of how these challenges build on each other I would recommend that you wait for the feedback if possible- if not, I want to stress that I am available and willing to offer advice and help with the layouts. Layout is a VERY tricky part of storytelling that is often overlooked. (For reference: I spent 4 weeks on storyboards and layout for one 30 second animation)

If no one minds I'll post the critiques one at a time as I get them done (I'll hit them during breaks) and do the final judging at the end. I feel the feedback is more urgent than scores.

Best of luck guys- and thanks for being patient!

Edit: Please mention/ping or direct message me to get my attention if needed. I'm more likely to notice that way.