Spelling & Grammar 8/10
Driving Force 8/10
Posting Frequency 1/10
Player Interaction 4/10
Continuity 10/10
Points awarded: 24
Holey moley that’s a long post, it’s length equaled only by it’s awesomeness. I really liked the exposition/backstory/character development, it moved along the story, setting up more plot for later, (which sadly will never come. :( ) A few typos and the lack of interaction with other RPers are the only problems I can see, which unfortunately lost you a few points, but overall great job!
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