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[Dragon Master Mike]

Thanks so much! Honestly its less a matter of proofreading and more a matter of the fact that my grammar is so terrible that i didn't even know most of those things were wrong (I knew lots of things were wrong, just not what specifically was wrong). I will TRY to improve it at least slightly. about what you were saying, i thought about possibly giving all the pokemon special collars that supressed there powers, but that sounded just like in your story so i decided to try and think of something else. The taser is what i eventually settled on, but looking back, that would have to be a very strong taser to have stopped a Machamp or some of the other strong pokemon. I'm really not the best writer. I guess now would be a good a time as any to start proofreading with the stuff you just told me.

Actually now that i think about it, most of those errors were things that i know are wrong, if i proofread more i could have fixed them. In the future i will do more proofreading

EDIT: After proofreading the prologue and chapter one, i have realized that my issue is partially not proofreading enough and also partially expecting spell check to fix more than it actually does. I have proofread it to the best of my abilities (I think).