lol thanks! about the sentence: “Corey” He said. “Whats your name?” He asked. I could have sworn i noticed that sentence and fixed it while proofreading. Also... Kinda embarressed to say i didn't know ok was actually supposed to be spelt okay. Also wasn't sure if "I" was supposed to be capitilized or not. Oh, and i don't use word because i don't feel like spending $100 on it. I use google drive. I'm starting to notice that its spell check is not very good for anything but spelling. It doesn't fix grammar. Thanks so much though. I will continue writing, and keep these things in mind as i write the next chapter. I think it will be much easier to just get it right the first time instead of going back and fixing it (Even though i will still make sure to read through it for grammar errors just in case).