Oh, yay, you got this up! :D

I like how you took your own spin on the game, having the MC as an establish denizen of Vaniville instead of that new kid that suddenly gets swept off on a random adventure with people she's never met xD I really enjoyed reading this, though I have one little suggestion.

That last sentence bugs me because it's... kinda cheesy and unnecessary. I know it's a game that we're all going to be familiar with sooner or later, but I wouldn't suggest throwing out the plot of your story like that. I think you're aiming for forshadowing, but don't give away too much with a foreshadow. A good foreshadow leaves us with less information then what we had before, you know? JK Rowling didn't put at the end of her first chapter "Little did they know that that little boy would grow up to stop a nasty wizard with no nose." You'll create more interest by building up the plot rather than giving things away at this point. I mean, we don't even know anything about a bird at this point. It leaves the reader more confused than anticipated for the next chapter.

But that's just my thoughts. Really, everything else was enjoyable, and I'm looking forward to seeing how the story unfolds! :D *waits for next update* :3