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[Noblejanobii]

Okay @Suicune's Fire here we go!

We went from Jubilife to Orburgh today

You forgot the "e" in Oreburgh! You only did it the one time though so it's no big deal.

but consequently the lack of cooperation seemed to remain the same or even increase.

You need a comma after "consequently".

That was all I found so great job! Since these two errors were minor I'm going to give you a 15/15!

It was great to read Kinnie's perspective again. With your recent post in GCEA as well, I'm interested to see how Kinnie will handle the discourse in the group, especially since she's expressed here that she isn't a huge fan of it.

[Suicune's Fire]

Okay @Suicune's Fire here we go!

You forgot the "e" in Oreburgh! You only did it the one time though so it's no big deal.

You need a comma after "consequently".

That was all I found so great job! Since these two errors were minor I'm going to give you a 15/15!

It was great to read Kinnie's perspective again. With your recent post in GCEA as well, I'm interested to see how Kinnie will handle the discourse in the group, especially since she's expressed here that she isn't a huge fan of it.

I AM HORRIFIED! Thank you. XD I somehow knew I made that typo but then didn't register it well enough to go back and change it ahaha. Thanks boo.

Thanks! :D Me too, honestly. XD