GCEA Journal [Open]

[Noblejanobii]

Lychee
GCEA Version: Platinum
Trainer Name: Briar Clark
Link to stats: here
Word Count: 562
Entry: Hoenn Theme. Week two should cover one of the following. Kyogre vs Groudon, Team Aqua, Team Magma and Deoxys

Spoiler:

Journal. Mid Summer. Afternoon, massive thunderstorm.
Water and Electric types out frolicking- but mostly electric.
Today the moon is half full I think? Wind coming from the ocean. Athemiometer is reading yellow. Mood ring, purple.
No supplies currently. Indoors.

My region is one of various myths and legends, however, with the new technology in our lives to both travel and send information long distances, I am able to use a PC to research the cryptic pokemon of other regions too. On a rainy day such as this I decided to have a glance over the forums which talk about Kyogre and Groudon... And Rayquaza, because apparently they are a weather trio. I'm not sure if this is the corrent way to reference their attributes, but it is certainly te most well accepted way. In fact, I believe there is not three, but FOUR pokemon in this mythology.
Now, if Kyogre stands for the hydrosphere, Groudon stands for lithosphere, and Rayquaza stands for atmosphere, then which pokemon stands for the biosphere? Herein lies the most powerful super-ancient pokemon of them all, the king of the biosphere, the pokemon of life and all living things, and the one who does not get involved with the petty conflicts of the land, sea and air. This cryptic legendary is called Bioczar.

Though Bioczar has never been seen or captured, we can infer its existence through science. Its name, while not registered in any pokedex, is a combination of the biosphere in which is resides, and Czar, which is a way of saying king in a different land. I may also be reading the forums wrong and in fact its name is Biostar- but that wouldn't make sense, as stars would be in the next level of sphere (beyond atmosphere). More on that in another entry. I don't feel like contemplating the interdimensional levels of pokemon existence and space travelling types today. Deoxys is.... eh. There's a world of possibility out there and I'd rather just stick to things I know. It's a little over my head. People have whole industries and laboratories dedicated to that stuff. I'm just a guy interested in the pokemon which are omitted from the pokedex- I don't need to be an astronaut or inter-dimensional traveller. Although..... Well, we'll see.

I had a few nay-sayers point out that we already have legendary pokemon of both life and death (Yveltal and Xerneas) but it is easy to discount these. First of all, they are not "Super ancient pokemon" like the weather quad, they are a balance of the abstract concepts of life and destruction- rather than the physical framework of the world in which we live. Secondly, while they both can influence the biosphere, they do not embody it. No- a pokemon embodiment of the biosphere would be much more difficult to describe. Also, because Bioczar does not get involved with the arguments of its trio, there is no real reason for it to have emerged, ever. Who knows what this pokemon is capable of!?
In any case, if I ever go to Hoenn I will not be looking to the skies hoping to see Rayquaza, or looking at the sea for Kyogre, or at the land for Groudon. I will be looking at all the wonderful lives there, at the plants, at the pokemon and the people. I'll be looking for Bioczar.

Alright let's do this!

Spoiler:

On a rainy day such as this I decided to have a glance over the forums which talk about Kyogre and Groudon

Need a comma after "this".

I'm not sure if this is the corrent way to reference their attributes,

I think you meant either "current" or "correct", but either way "corrent" is not a word as far as I'm aware.

but it is certainly te most well accepted way.

"te" should be "the".

is a combination of the biosphere in which is resides

This should be "it" not "is".

2/2 for story since it is a Hoenn theme

11/13 for effort since you made about the same number of mistakes as last time.

13/15