Looool! Yeah it would have been far too long. xD

Yeah, I know. xD I mentioned that. I know that that's what you were doing, but even so, I was giving advice on how you could incorporate that level of detail (which was good) into stories that are meant to be read by people. Oh they were? Well that's cool too. x) I mean, you can't post something like that and expect me not to say something about it. xD

No, your spelling was fine. I don't think there were any spelling errors. Just grammatical. ^^ Haha, that's fine. This is why I comment on your things and let you know! So you may learn. :D And that's the thing; so many people have not-great grammar simply because they haven't been taught how to utilise it. If you want anything clarified, don't hesitate to contact me. Unless you really don't care that much. xD In which case, I'll still bother you about it in stories!

Wow really? XD Don't be. It's good. I like all your poems. They're really quite good. I mean, you're a good writer in general. And that's okay. Poems can be extremely personal, and when they're torn apart or criticised, it can be hard to read what's been said about it or not be affected by it (if it's bad). Here's the part where you go, "Well I'm just glad you liked it though because what you said wasn't at all in proportion with the level of anxiety I was feeling." xD

Don't be afraid to share things. If you're not comfortable though, that's completely fine. I have plenty of poems that have gone unseen by all eyes except my own, and that's perfectly fine. ^^

But srsly, what do you think this means? XD

Quote Originally Posted by Suicune's Fire View Post
KEEP WRITING YOU AWESOMECAKE.
Obviously I enjoy your work! XD So don't feel like you have to be shy. Legitimately, I love reading your work. I wouldn't lie to you. Remember this. c:


~SF.