Wow. I actually love your poetry. Like, a lot. It's really good. XD It has so much feeling, so much eeriness and a lot of fluency. I think my favourite one is The Door; the ending gave me shivers. xD I loved the imagery, and how the "But the door will not open" part changed in each verse. Very clever. The puppeteer one reminds me a lot of government or similar authoritative figures who make decisions under the table and we're sorta forced to go with it, even if we have no idea what's going on behind those closed doors.

The only things I wanted to point out were minor; in the poem about blindness, the line "Than to live through this unseen hell" does not have a counterpart unlike every other line, but if it's intentional then that's fine. xD The other thing is that it ended in "hell" which a line previous to it also ended with. It was near the beginning, but still, diversity is the key. ;] The only other thing was the lowercase "i"s and then "ok," which I read as "ock" and then I noticed that reading it like that made it not rhyme. XD Which was funny for a moment, haha. Anyway.

Awesome poetry. I'd LOVE to see more.


~SF.