Alright. I have a "new" Poem. Its not really new, its actually a very old one that I wrote a while back. I actually liked it, all though I thought it had some REALLY stupid lines. I decided to edit it and cut out what I didn't like, and to post it here. I will just post the original and the newly edited one. I have no name for this poem.
Original:
go be happy, go be free
go where your heart longs to be
live your life in harmony
forget your troubles
send them far away
leave your fears behind
and cherish every day
life is to short to waste
it can end with sutch haste
theres no time to have regrets
because life is so short, and dont you forget
go be happy, go be free
go where your heart longs to be
make history, or just climb a tree
do whatever makes you happy
New:
Go be happy, go be free
Go where your heart longs to be
Forget your troubles
Send them far away
Leave your fears behind
And cherish every day
Life is too short to waste
It can end with such haste
So make the best of the time you’ve got
Because you may not have a lot




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