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A WILD REVIEWER APPEARED! *readies writer ball* jk you're not wild x3 I just get excited over reviews.

Omg thank you so much for this mini-lesson. I never understood how speech and punctuation work and I sometimes get corrected on it, but you helped me to clear it up and therefore, hug thank you. :D

Probably is. >.<

Well I guess she had suspicions but clearly anyone who stands before a killing machine and calls it perfection is mad. XD

Well it was actually something I intended to enter into a one-shot contest but the contest didn't pull off, so...yeah, this is its first review. It sorta explains why it felt rushed. I'm not sure if I plan on it being a chaptered fiction but hey, who knows what my muse decides? :3

Anyways, I'm taking your advice especially on the character development issue [it's usually a problem with all my short stories so practice practice practice~] and may probably edit/revamp it. Regardless, I feel very honored that you chose to take your time to read and review and I really appreciate your pointers and thoughts (because I know reviewing is a tedious thing to do, especially when you could be doing other fun stuff. Okay let's stop before I sound sappy. xD).

Spoiler:
PLOT TWIST: SHE DOESN'T DIE! XD

if this becomes a thing instead of a one-shot. IF. xD;;
YAY A WILD REVIEWER! Lol HOW DO YOU KNOW FOR SURE?!?!?!?!?! Oh, you should. XD Not enough people review stuff. ;A;

No worries! :D It's not taught properly, methinks. A LOT of people have that same issue, and I actually learned it from someone on Pe2k. XD I'm so glad I did because I didn't understand it before then either. And for some reason nobody taught me. =/ No worries! 8D Happy to help!

Ahahaha that's true. XD Also lol, Kanobe made me think of Obi-Wan. XD

Oh really? xD I see! I didn't realise. And yeah, it does. xD And yeah! If not, then at least it's some things to think about for the next story you write. :D (Hoping that you write more. XD)

Awesome! Good to hear. And yeah, character development is definitely something you can improve on by practicing. x) Your vocabulary was also quite good, even if there were a few errors here and there. XD Nothing big. Ahaha, no worries! XD I used to review stuff on Pe2k aaaaallllllllllllllllllllllll the time, but never got into the habit here. The thing is, writers dedicate so much time and effort to composing wonderful stories and often they don't get feedback for them, and if nobody posts, then how will they know anybody has READ their story? =/ It's a shame. So you're definitely welcome, and I'm equally as appreciative that you replied to the review! XD Sometimes you get people who write a few words in return and I have no idea if they're going to take my advice in or not. xD So thank YOU for replying! 8D

OH MY GOSH WHAT A TWIST. XD If you do write more, I'll look forward to that explanation. >:3


~SF.