Shadow End.

[Suicune's Fire]

when I first joined PE2K and was young and completely innocent with an obsession for Ruby and Sapphire and spriting

/complete respect

He didn’t realise... it was all so confusing, he thought, intense concentration seizing his face, before another voice from below his feet.

Before another voice from below his feet...what? xD I think it's an incomplete sentence.

Something made him want to stay here, in this wreck of a laboratory, to try to find answers- but was there any here?

"was" should be "were." x)

“Well done,” she said, nudging his ear, before her own pricked and she looked up at the other three Pokémon walking to her.

I'm not sure if Naps is meant to be walking, but the image of a beedrill walking instead of flying is amusing. xD

His eyes followed Wes as the turtle tied a pale blue rag around Reath’s leg, and continued:
“Obviously something big happened here.

Sorta strange that the continuing speech is on a new line. xD

I'm sooooooo exciiiiiiiiiteddddd for this story to continue! 8DD I'm so happy that you decided to pick it up again (AND THAT YOUR BOYFRIEND IS MAGICAL AND RESTORED IT FROM OBLIVION) and I definitely look forward to seeing more than the three chapters we were treated to three years ago. XD It's so awesome to have something nostalgic return. It's a piece of Pe2k as well! *sobs*

I love the way you set the story out. The detail is lovely and I always agree with your choice of words. Everything is so mysterious and there are many questions. It's cool that we get to guess along with the characters as well, because then it's like we're travelling TOGETHER! *leap of joy* lel. But really, love the characters so far and I'm looking forward to Lorcan and...aaaannndd...aaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnddddddddd ddddddd. FFF. I forgot her name. >:z She was cute and little and a rattata. xD (OhwowIjustrealisedshe'sinthesecondpost.) TANIE. YES.

Anywho, I reeeeeally hope you can get that plan restored so that we can find out what happens! 8D That plan you described sounds amazing and I have no doubts that Shadow End will be an enjoyable and exciting story to the end. To the... shadow...end... hahaha...haha. xD

YOU KNOW I'LL BE READING MORE WHEN MORE COMES OUT! <3


~SF.