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    Quote Originally Posted by Death's Spook View Post
    Whoopsy.

    I like the idea. Quite a bit (do you read Worm at all? That guy's powers sound quite a bit like Marquis). Stranger and Striker probably need tier numbers switched. And (I didn't mention this) the Outskirt Stand is destroyed. Thoroughly. It got mysteriously obliterated a few years before the lab was exploded.

    But other than those very minor details, your SU looks good. Pending those modifications, assume you're accepted.
    I actually don't read Worm, so I'll take your word for it.
    Switched with each other, or just changed? Sorry, despite my best attempts at English, I'm a German at heart (and in mind).
    That's an easy enough fix, smuggling rings can start just about anywhere.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheCaveMan View Post
    I actually don't read Worm, so I'll take your word for it.
    Switched with each other, or just changed? Sorry, despite my best attempts at English, I'm a German at heart (and in mind).
    That's an easy enough fix, smuggling rings can start just about anywhere.
    The numbers need to be switched. Your Striker sounds like a level 5 ability, not a 3. Visa-versa for your Stranger.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Death's Spook View Post
    The numbers need to be switched. Your Striker sounds like a level 5 ability, not a 3. Visa-versa for your Stranger.
    Fixed it all.

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    Quote Originally Posted by TheCaveMan View Post
    Perfect. Accepted.
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