When I saw that this was about a Glaceon, I had to hop in and read it! x3 It's definitely my favorite Eeveelution--and the reason why I love ice-types so much :D

Anyway, great read! :D It was really interesting seeing how the Glaceon clan worked, although they sure have some silly inconvenient strange rules... Sheesh, if they had just let the gothita stay, none of this would've happened! Poor Kairack... I can't decide if he's dead or captured though. The ending was a bit confusing and I feel like there wasn't much resolution--particularly with the gothita. You got in her head for a little while, made her into a curious character, but I never really got to find out why she was there in the first place, or if she survived the night. Nor did I find out what happened to Kairack's sister. But then again, this is probably all resolved in TtEoaF, huh? xD In which case, I need to get my butt in gear and read that next! xD

I love how you give descriptions of all the Pokemon and keep the species a surprise, but it was really driving me nuts with gothita. I thought it was a Mawile at first, what with the whole ponytail thing, but I kept thinking, "That makes no sense! That'd be weird carrying a Mawile by its ponytail because it's a second mouth! And... ew!" IDK, I have this weird thing where I like to try and imagine scenes as accurately as I can (particularly with Pokemon). Whenever I see that I guessed the characters wrong, I literally have to go back and reread everything so I can picture it just right xD Maybe that's an OCD thing of mine, but it drives me crazy sometimes to have to backtrack.

Yeah, I'm weird like that. But other than that, I really enjoyed this story! :D The characters were great, and now I want to see what part they play in your other story ^^ (lol more reading to do!)