
Originally Posted by
Neo Emolga
Ah man, another great chapter!
I got a kick out of the whole birthday/childhood funeral party that was done for Dylan. Never heard of something like that being done for someone turning 18, but it sounds like a fun and fantastic idea.
The other thing this story does really well is capture an amazing and wide range of emotions. Happiness, anger, sadness, anxiety, it’s got everything and blends them into a very cohesive story that comes accompanied with great characters that really have so much background to them. No one in this story feels like “filler” and everyone’s got their role to play in it. Definitely awesome work and I’ve enjoyed it ever since the beginning.
I also do like reading those nods to Cassandra. I like the way you make use of her character in this.
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