Oh man, now that's a cliffhanger!

Ah, man how I love what you've done with Victini's character. It's golden and always clever and comical. And I'm quite curious to see if the students are going to be able to triumph against their mentors and what will come of them learning their strategies. The way you're able to keep the reader guessing and then throw the unexpected at us is fantastic. That's just one of the many things that keeps me going.

The mystery surrounding Charlotte's nightmares and the Hoenn military is definitely getting VERY interesting. My guess is...

Spoiler:
I'm suspecting Deoxys is involved here, but that's my only hunch at the moment.


As always, keep up the great work, I'm itching to see how all of these fascinating subplots roll out and how things ultimately come together.