The Eon Academy [S.S. Wishmaker Side-Story]

[Neo Emolga]

Finally all caught up (I’ve been for a few days now but I didn’t leave a formal review beyond Discord messages yet :P) and…

Spoiler:

Daaaaang, dude, that’s a HECK of a cliffhanger to end on!

I love the way you constructed all the RP stuff into great narrative format and pieced everything together in a nice, sequential and chronological order that makes it very exciting to read [s]even though I already know what happens.[/b] But what really shines are those custom modifications you implemented to add an extra level of depth and breadth to the story. In the RP, Boris was just fried and that was the end of him, whereas in this, the whole idea of Willow turning him into a Latias to serve as a decoy was something I totally never thought of but it really plays well into the story as a clever plot device. Same thing with the Netherclysm. In the RP, simply kicking over the table would have disrupted and destroyed the spell, whereas in here, they carefully need to disarm it and safely deconstruct it like they’re trying to disarm and deactivate a nuke. Seriously, these modifications are pretty nifty and I get that “why didn’t I think of that!?” feeling that definitely has me applauding your creativity with these!

I also like how you’re giving everyone’s characters a chance to shine and a role to play. I imagine that’s a tough balancing act but you’re doing a great job with it and I like reading how you handle each of them. Even the NPCs (Nicodemus, Gail, Aaron, etc…) are handled really well and you give even the supporting characters careful and mindful treatment to make sure they stay true to their character personas and adhere to their roles.

Seriously awesome work and kudos to you for all the time and effort you’ve put into giving this RP series plenty of deep lore and amazing character depth!